Violin from Goa AviMan Simbu-Trisha Karthi Tamanna SS Last Part -pg13

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Violin from Goa Part 1

Rosid fans..please forgive me for changing the names.But this story demands change in names.5 years back it was written for GurTi.Now presenting the AviMan version.



Ajay got inside the train.The train moved slowly.He got bored.Suddenly he saw a girl's curly hair blowing.It was the hair of the girl who was reading the news paper.She was sitting on the opposite side.

He longed to see her face.She folded the newspaper.

Now he could view her face clearly.He was bowled over by her beautiful face. She tried to manage the blowing hair strands which were falling on her face.Ajay got disturbed.

A:Let the hair be free.Let your hair touch your face.

She stared at him.He go embarrassed.

A:I am sorry.Actually before seeing your face I saw your hair.I really liked it.So I felt sad when you troubled your hair.

She:What?Are you crazy?

A:I was getting bored.So I was looking at your hair.Just a time pass.

She:You were observing my hair for time pass?Strange.

A:I am sorry.By the way I am Ajay Mehra.I am from Mumbai itself.Your good name please?

Without any interest: Violin Golsavio.

A:Wow!Sweet name.

She smiled:Thank you.

A:At last you smiled.

She smiled.

A:Why did your parents name you Violin?

V:Why?Any problem?

A:No.It's a rare name.That's why.

V:My father loves Violin.That's why.

A:O!What about you?You like violin?

V:Yes.

A:That means you love music.Then you will like me.You father will also accept me.

V:What?

A:Nothing.Where are you staying?

V:We were in Kerala.A few years back we shifted to Goa.So we are half keralites ao.I was in Mumbai for studies.Now my course got over.So I am going back to my place.Goa.

A:Wow!I am also going to Goa to stay with my friend Prateek Chopra.He took a house for rent. He is going o direct a film.He chose the beautiful Go to write he script.He hopes he will get a thread if he stays there. I am going to compose songs for the film.Both lyrics and music.

V:Wow!We all love music.

Ajay was flown away by her beautiful smile.She was stylish as well as innocent which was a rare combination.Her blowing hair' fragrance was making him blind.

A:Actually seeing you automatically a song got composed in my mind.

V:Again you are mad.

A:No.True.

He started singing ...

Dil Hote Jo Mere Seene Mein Do
Doosra Dil Bhi Main
Tumhe Deta Todne Ko

Hosanna..Hosanna..Hosanna
Ho..Sannna...Hosanna..Ho..

Dilkash Thi Woh Shaam Pehle Pehal
Jab Ke Tumse Mili Thi Nazar
Aisa Chakraya Ki Ab Ye Na Jaanu
Ke Jaaun Tto Jaaun Kidhar
Hosanna Tum Samne Thi Pal
Hosanna Agle Hi Pal Thi Ojhal...'{Ek deewana tha}.

While singing he dreamt of romancing Violin.

Violin was surprised listening to him sing.

V:How was it possible?You are a genius.That's why you could compose a song within some moments.
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Ajay smiled:That's because of you Violin.You inspired me to create this beautiful song.


Their eyes got stuck up to each other.

Slowly Violin turned off her face.They were silent for some time.

Ajay broke the silence.

A:In your family are you the only one who has curly hair?

V:No.My sister Grace also has curly hair.We got our grand mother's hair.

A:Which shampoo do you use?Your hair has sweet smell.

She got irritated:You are sick.No doubt.

He burst into laughter.Seeing him laugh automatically she also laughed.

The train reached Goa.

They go out of the train.

A:It was nice talking to you Violin.I had a nice time with you.You made my train journey interesting.

She smiled:You were also interesting.I enjoyed your naughty talk.

They both giggled.

V:Bye.

A:Bye.

They both went opposite ways.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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NP will think as Manish new show playing new character he he nice start Ajay is so funny and fell for violin at first site waiting for next eagerly update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yeayyy!! New FF! That's a lovely start Di, enjoyed their convo. For rosidians, RoSid is an emotion, so we can feel RoSid in anyways so np with names here. Eagerly waiting for their next meet, update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Violin.. nice name, loved this story.. will u post another season of laal ishq
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Lovely superb fabulous update dear
Thanks for pm
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Yeyyy new ff...violin nice name han...beautiful start eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow! Ajay & Violin developed a bonding at the first meeting though Violin was angry on Ajay for praising her hair. Hope they become good friends & eventually fall in love.
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awww lovely start...Ajay n Violin...awesome dear...eagerly waiting for next update soon dear
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Woww new ff! That too from you soo excited di. And part 1 was fantastic. Violin and ajay soo lovely. Update soon waiting for next.
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Lovely concept yaar looking forward ..

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