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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Beautiful OS...

loved the song sequence...and their dance...:)

loved how they both remembered their past marriages and vowed to not repeat the same mistakes...:)

3 daughters...that is cute...

Lovely story OS...

and I agree with you...who the hell checks their phone on their SR...

only Zoya can do this...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This is one of those piece of write ups which I believe has a perfect blend of everything. Right from emotions to that slight humor, from tensed sensual hints to a bit of lighthearted romancing..

This happens to be the kind which I can pick to read when I don't have a certain something on my list but I know I have to read. (If you get what I mean!) And definitely one when I am hell caught up with work and need a break.

Thanks for notifying me. :)

PS: I am not really able to keep up with the show these days. But I do happen to come across precaps once in a while. And I wish to know the same. Who in the hell would keep their phones on at such a night?

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

This was so good. Loved every tiny bit of ot

Keep writnig moree. Ly❤️

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

BEAUTIFUL One-Shot❤️

Loved it😃

You're an awesome writer😊

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Oh my! this was so beautiful, Ayesha!

I've read your dark!TS on Adiya and now this. I am amazed at your versatility. (Will be taking my time and reading the other OS too.)

This one is very romantic and cute at the same time. I loved the small conversation that they have and the callback to the 3 daughters scene was a nice touch.

Thanks for the PM. :)

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

Rocker

+ 18

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

OH MY GOD...what a beautiful OS 👏

I have no words to describe how much I loved it. It has made me speechless ❤️

You have written this so wonderfully that I can't even begin to praise your writing. Everything about this is perfect.

AdiYa romance was so sweet 😳 Aditya, don't worry...your daughters will be like Zoya and you will get to seal the deal. Their dance was so sensuous and romantic...simply reflected their love for one another.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please write more on them because I love your way of presenting stories.

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