Sidushka SS: Phir Mohabbat Karna Chala Hai Tu:Ch 7 Pg 9(completed 30/6

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Fanclub99

@Fanclub99

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Happy ending .. always make me happy 😊😳

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..
OMG 😭
I'll get back when I'm done feeling <3

Unress

Firstly, I'm sad and happy, as always during endings.

Happy for Sidushka, happy for a great great ending. And sad cause no more updates 😭

This was SOOO EFFING EMOTION WAALA!

You don't know but I badly wanted a collar pull scene. Ufff, and you gave it here! Almost all my unsaid wishes coming true

So much feels into that angst and collar pull.

Just so freaking delightful and intense! OMG

❤️

And and and!

She knows! She knows about it now!

The ending. Ahhh. Seene mein thandak. They reunite

Waist pull ☺️

Happy happy happy ending! Yayyy!

Super happy.

Hoping to see your work soon with a new, awesome story again! <3

This journey was gorgeous, beautiful and just so soothing and feels waali story. I enjoyed every every small bit of it

Lovely writing Paridhi. Its all so smooth and easily done, almost so soft and silky and so so well written and engaging.

I hardly have words for the amazing portrayal of awesome feelings. You quite got All the emotions right.

It was an amazing experience altogether.

Loved loved loved it!

See yaa soon!

Muahhh.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

I just finished reading all the 7 chapters in one go...

Tearing up but with an idotic smile...that's what I feel now.

The feelings you have put into the characters, simply awesome... very close to Siddhant and Anushka..

Thank you. Wonderful job..

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Paridhi

@heart321

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Fanclub99
Happy ending .. always make me happy 😊😳

❤️❤️

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Paridhi

@heart321

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..

Unress

Firstly, I'm sad and happy, as always during endings.
Happy for Sidushka, happy for a great great ending. And sad cause no more updates 😭

This was SOOO EFFING EMOTION WAALA!
You don't know but I badly wanted a collar pull scene. Ufff, and you gave it here! Almost all my unsaid wishes coming true

So much feels into that angst and collar pull.
Just so freaking delightful and intense! OMG

❤️

And and and!
She knows! She knows about it now!

The ending. Ahhh. Seene mein thandak. They reunite
Waist pull ☺️

Happy happy happy ending! Yayyy!

Super happy.

Hoping to see your work soon with a new, awesome story again! <3

This journey was gorgeous, beautiful and just so soothing and feels waali story. I enjoyed every every small bit of it
Lovely writing Paridhi. Its all so smooth and easily done, almost so soft and silky and so so well written and engaging.
I hardly have words for the amazing portrayal of awesome feelings. You quite got All the emotions right.

It was an amazing experience altogether.

Loved loved loved it!

See yaa soon!

Muahhh.

Thank you so much Mahi!!

You and few more people were really very motivating else i would have left this inbetween😆😆

I am glad you liked it!

Hopefully I'll come back with another story, no guarantees haan? 😆😆

Thank you once again and a big big big hug!!

Love

Paridhi

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Paridhi

@heart321

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: JazzyM
I just finished reading all the 7 chapters in one go...
Tearing up but with an idotic smile...that's what I feel now.

The feelings you have put into the characters, simply awesome... very close to Siddhant and Anushka..

Thank you. Wonderful job..

Thank you so much!!

Means a lot😳😳

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Namitsgirl

@Namitsgirl

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Took me so long to find this😆

Awesome story awesome end

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Lavanya

@KumbhkarnKiNani

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: KumbhkarnKiNani
Res! 😳

Unres!

Firstly, I'm really sorry for responding so late Paridhi. I was caught up since the last few days.

The last chapter has been as beautiful as all the previous chapters :D

Loved it and enjoyed it thoroughly! :)

Loved Anushka's reaction when she saw those anklets. How beautiful and heart-wrenching it must have been at the same time!

OMG!! The collar-hold! I love collar-pulls! It is such an intense and deep moment! 😳

Anushka's broken state as beautifully penned. Her dialogues were very impactful and hard-hitting!

"It started to rain heavily as if the skies were crying with him"- Loved this line. A piece of poetic beauty it is!

Siddhant's monologue in the rain was beautiful and heart-breaking at the same time! I love how you incorporate so many contrasting emotions in your writing Paridhi :)

Mr.Goyal informing Anushka about the true events that happened 4 years back (Siddhant backing off from the deal) and her subsequent reaction was the real high point in this chapter for me!

The build-up towards Sid-Anushka's meet was written very well. Siddhant silently sitting with the cake beside him and Anushka frantically driving to THEIR HOME was a beautiful moment.

Their conversation in the last part of the chapter was stunningly beautiful! <3

"Will you be mine forever?"-This has my heart! Sheer love <3

Loved that Siddhant himself made her wear the anklets and finally, the kiss to seal the moment <3

Great stuff Paridhi!

This has been such a beautiful SS. I've loved every bit of it!

I'll be eagerly looking forward to reading more stories written by you sweetheart! :)

With Love

-Lavy