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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Wow this was awesome!!
Please continue and send me an index of your writing please you're so good!
Thank you

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vandana21

@vdna

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Ohhh..this is just fantastic ..superb OS!! ..I so want this to happen ..always wanted anger leading up to confession ..loved Adi being shirtless ...I really really want that to be the case ..in my imaginary world ..I would change his confession via words to his cupping her face and kissing her passionately ..(unable to control himself anymore) and then breaking off and saying ..that's why he was avoiding her ..and then he apologizes and then she pulls him back and kisses him ..and theres a tight shirtless hug ..zoya totally engulfed by adi's shirtless body ..but I know we can't get this ..and no other form of confession can be better than what you have written!!! ...thanks for this story ..it really made my day ..I was having a horrible weekend and your story put a smile on my face!!

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Sudha

@Sudharies

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

That was superb. Loved it.

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@Ayraa-MK

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

I loved this OS dear, Such a cute confession, plz continue if u can dear :)

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

u should continue this dear
amazing

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sun2011

@sun2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Fantastic OS - would so like to see this happen with our Adiya onscreen. Please continue writing daily. Will look forward to it.

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FaizaAndalibC

@FaizaAndalibC

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: vandana21
Ohhh..this is just fantastic ..superb OS!! ..I so want this to happen ..always wanted anger leading up to confession ..loved Adi being shirtless ...I really really want that to be the case ..in my imaginary world ..I would change his confession via words to his cupping her face and kissing her passionately ..(unable to control himself anymore) and then breaking off and saying ..that's why he was avoiding her ..and then he apologizes and then she pulls him back and kisses him ..and theres a tight shirtless hug ..zoya totally engulfed by adi's shirtless body ..but I know we can't get this ..and no other form of confession can be better than what you have written!!! ...thanks for this story ..it really made my day ..I was having a horrible weekend and your story put a smile on my face!!

Will u please write down this HOT Story what u described here...😛

Please make it a TS & at the end please make Zoya confess her love to Aditya verbally thus giving it a Happy Ending...

Will wait for this...😳

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AbnerFernandes
I think that you should continue this :D
I honestly liked this :D
Kindly pm me if you write any other stories ;D

Thank you!!! there are so many fanfics and stories going on in this forum i was worried that no one will really take the time to read...so thank you! umm...I've written stories in the past...but no adiya ones...so far this OS has been my only work with adiya

Originally posted by: FaizaAndalibC
Amazing OS...
Please continue this...😳

hmmm...i'll probably write OS here and there...not sure if i will continue this...or maybe i'll add another scene to this if i'm inspired :)

Originally posted by: nish_vir
Nooo!! Don't stooopp😭
😆

😆😆 thank you so much for reading!

Originally posted by: geet0910
Bful os. I loved it😛 pls continue this or write more.

thank you for reading! i will probably write here and there if time permits and if i'm inspired by something happening on the show

Originally posted by: .MooN.
Such a Beautiful OS 👏
Please Continue THIS...

hmmm...haven't thought about continuing this yet...but if inspiration strikes...i may add to this...maybe a scene here and there 😉

Originally posted by: .sweetchick.
OH MY !!!!!! THAT WAS INTENSE and PASSIONNATE! UFFF😭
You write so beautifully!
So much intensity love and pain 😭❤️ Just too beautiful! You should continue this!

hahaha i will try...but you know i am committed to finishing this one story i have been working on 😉 ...i'll write OS here and there if time permits

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
Had a smile on my face reading the conflicting feelings of both Adi & Zoya. That was one fine call Zoya made LOL You gotta continue this & hope you'd do 😃

hhahahaha! i figure arhshad doesn't need much time in this...hope this happens in the show too 😆 ...i may add a scene or two to this if inspiration strikes

Originally posted by: jumz86
Amazing OS! Loved the confession!!

thank you!!!

Originally posted by: perfumeheaven
Superb! 👏

thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: sezo
that was amazing. please do continue it, I need to know if and when she says she loves him. I a lovely OS even if you don't continue it, but would prefer you to though.

thank you for reading!!!! hmm...i might add to this here and there...maybe a few scenes to it...but can't promise anything! it all depends on if i'm inspired. but thank you so much for reading! comments definitely keep me going

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver
Nice.!!!

thanks!

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Wow this was awesome!!
Please continue and send me an index of your writing please you're so good!
Thank you

thank you for reading! well...i've written stories in the past...but this is my first work with adiya...unfortunately i don't have any fanfics with adiya...but i have written full fanfics before.

Originally posted by: vandana21
Ohhh..this is just fantastic ..superb OS!! ..I so want this to happen ..always wanted anger leading up to confession ..loved Adi being shirtless ...I really really want that to be the case ..in my imaginary world ..I would change his confession via words to his cupping her face and kissing her passionately ..(unable to control himself anymore) and then breaking off and saying ..that's why he was avoiding her ..and then he apologizes and then she pulls him back and kisses him ..and theres a tight shirtless hug ..zoya totally engulfed by adi's shirtless body ..but I know we can't get this ..and no other form of confession can be better than what you have written!!! ...thanks for this story ..it really made my day ..I was having a horrible weekend and your story put a smile on my face!!

awww this was so sweet! and damn girl...you should write your own OS...that was amazing! i can't believe i didn't of that kiss...its sounds beautiful! and harshad shirtless any day 😆 and thank you for such kind words...it truly is a compliment if my writing can make someone's day better...thats the best kind of appreciation.

Originally posted by: Luv_PaRiAnSh
That was superb. Loved it.

thank you for reading!

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik
I loved this OS dear, Such a cute confession, plz continue if u can dear :)

thank you!!!! i don't plan on continuing...but if inspiration strikes i may add a few scenes to this

Originally posted by: Prizi
u should continue this dear
amazing

thank you so much for reading!

Originally posted by: sun2011
Fantastic OS - would so like to see this happen with our Adiya onscreen. Please continue writing daily. Will look forward to it.

thank you so much for reading! it really means alot...i can't promise anything...but if i'm inspired i will drop in here and there to write