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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
Lovely start
Geet getting job in Maan's office there he already loves her for 2 years !
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
This I read long back thanks for reposting
Geet had daughter and she fought for her.thanks that Arun and arohi are helping her .maan dream girl is geet sand now geet is in front of him now . Dadi and maan family is waiting for maan marriage
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
APNA one of the fanfictions... that made to visit and stayed glued and come back to read the stories of our beloved maaneet.
Geet -Hui Sabse Parayee ... its like core module... to other romantic serials... which expressed intense emotion ...
And fanfictions we read here in the forum have exceeded the intense.
Thank you for cont. reposting all your ffs . Missed reading yours...
excited to read... your will with all correct grammar and expressing and delivering to the point ... like non-Hindi speaker ... in starting days of forum reading and understanding an ff was so easy ...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Amazing story
Looking forward to read what was theirs past i would love to know in next chapter
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Ch 1
Will love to read it
Maan already in love with geet
How will he react knowing geet is a mother
Arjun and Aarohi are there in Maaneet story first ever time
Waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Geet is mother of a baby girl fr hr she have to leave hr home now going fr job interview
In Maan office both have met two years back Maan in love with hr searching fr hr
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Lovely start
Geet single mother and maan already fida
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
It is one of best ff
I love to read it
I feel sad u deleted it
But its good you going to reposted it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
This is my favourite story.
I read it lot of time on your Jannat Literacy Paradise.
Pls update soon..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40


Cannot believe my writing is so rubbish *facepalm* 😵😆 Feel embarrassed reposting this.


Chapter 2

Geet opened the door to her house, only to see Priya and her angel playing... Pari saw Geet and started crawling to her, Geet lifted her in her arms...

Geet- ae le mere baby, mama ko miss kiya? (rubbing her nose with Pari's)

Pari giggled and cupped Geet's face with her tiny palms...

Priya- hey... how did the interview go?

Geet explained, settling down on the sofa...

Priya- that's good... He seems like a good boss

Geet- but you know the saying...don't judge a book by its cover... Because you never know what can happen?

Geet spent the whole day playing with Pari after Priya left, near lunch time, she fed Pari her baby food, and put her to sleep in the crib that was in the living room... she then entered the open kitchen which was attached to the living room... she started making lunch as Arohi and Arjun always come for lunch... and from Monday Geet will be working and no one to make lunch so no more coming home... Geet prepared their favourite... chicken pasta for Arohi... biryani for Arjun... and for herself Mexican pasta... and for desert she got out ben and jerry's cookie dough ice cream... she was just laying the table, that she heard the 2 bickering as usual...

Geet- stop arguing...

Arohi- it's him

Arjun-me... me... it's you continuously wrecking my brain with your long list of demands...

Geet- kya hua?

Arohi- I only asked him one thing and he's

Arjun- I didn't refuse, did I? I said just to wait as there's a few big projects this week...

Once again both talked at the same time, Geet couldn't even understand...

Geet- SHUT UP THE BOTH OF YOU... (Both shut their mouths instantly) ... Thank you... now tell me...

Arjun- main bata ti hoon... this madam wanted us to get engaged officially infront of everyone... because none of our family's know and neither do our friends...

Arohi- and he refused...

Arjun- I swear to God... I've never seen a bigger liar than you... all I said give me time till the 2 projects finished which will be done maybe by the end of this month...

Arohi- so can't you put those on hold... I'm only asking to get engaged infront of everyone... not get married...

Geet- Arohi... its just a month...

Arohi- tu meri dost hai ya uska...

Geet- forget it... come and eat... you've got to go back to work as well...

The trio went and ate together, with Arjun and Arohi still bickering over something or another...

In the evening, Maan left late as usual... he reached home and saw Dadi waiting for him as usual, the others had gone to bed already...

Maan- Dadi, kitni baar kahan mere liye intezaar mat kijiye...

Dadi- aap ke bina hum kha hi nahi sakte... aisa lagta hai ke khana hazm nahi hoga...

Maan- main fresh hokar aayi... ab aap bait jaye...

He left...Dadi told nakul to arrange the food...

Maan came down all freshened up, his thoughts went to Geet... she's joining him... a smile came to his lips which hadn't gone unnoticed to Dadi... He was smiling to himself which shocked her... he came and took his seat next to her...

Dadi- bete aap bina koi waje khush hai...

Maan- nahi aisa nahi hai

Dadi- hum aap ke Dadi hain... humse behter aap ko kaun pehchaan sakta hai... aap batayenge yaa main khud pata karu..

Maan- who ek ladki hai... jo main pasand karta hoon... usse dho saal pehle hi mili ti...

Flashback...

He had come HP for a land... which he had purchased from some Mohinder Handa... it was in the name of his daughter, but as she was underage; her father had to go for the registration... On the way back... his car had stopped... with no other alternative he had to camp... as he set the tent, he built a camp fire... to keep him warm in this weather...

He suddenly heard the rustling of leaves and some men shouting, he walked towards the direction only to see some men chasing a young girl... she hadn't looked older than 17/18... She was in a messy state... dressed ripped... her sleeves torn... he got his shot gun and followed... As she tripped, the men surrounded her; she got up, crying... it was none other than Geet... Maan watched from a distance, though he couldn't make out what they were saying... Maan from at a distance tried to co-ordinate where he should attack them and save her... as they were quite a few of them...

Geet stood up and looked around, she was surrounded, no chance to escape...

Geet- please... mujhe jaane dijiye...

Kyun... taa ke ghar ka izzat mitti main mila sakti hai...

Geet- nahi... aisa nahi hai... jo hua uss mein meri galti kya hai...

Nahi galti toh meri hai... tujhko azaadi di ti aur tune uska faida utaya...

Geet- mera yakeen kijiye, maine kuch nahi kiya... veerji... please jaane dijiye... main yahan se chali jaoongi... kisi ko nahi pata hoga...

Tujhe kya lagta... itni asaani se jaane dunga... agar ussi din tuhje maar diya hota to behter hota... pata nahi daarji ne kya sochkar teri madad ki bhagne main...

Geet- veerji... main toh aapki choti behen hoon... aap khud jaante huye ki main galat nahi hoon, toh mujhe kyun maarna chahte ho...

Toh meri baat Maan le... apne bacche ko gira de...

Geet- kuch aur Maang lijiye, par main apne bacche ko nahi giraunga... yeh sirf mera baccha hai...

His anger hit the roof, he gave her one more chance to live... but she doesn't even consider this option... With that he went to slap her but Maan had intervened... he punched him down... all the men started to move forward to attack him... Maan fought back with so much power and energy... Geet got scared seeing them fight... soon as all the men were down, he looked at her... she had fear in her eyes... he moved forward, she walked back two steps...Her innocent face had so much pain... her honey brown eyes were filled up... he stopped his steps...

Maan- don't worry... main tumhe kuch nahi karunga... she nodded weakly... but she soon felt dizzy... she was about to fall, he'd just caught her on time, picking her up in his arms, he walked through the forest looking for some shelter, he then noticed a small hut...

He entered , lay her down on the hay... she looked quite young... He wondered why they were after her, he soon came to his own conclusion maybe some random men... but there was a bigger darker secret which was hidden...

She woke up after an hour or so... she sat up straight away, her eyes widened seeing him in the hut, she moved back... scared... Maan was a little upset seeing her scared of him... he tried to calm her...

Maan- dekho... main tumhe koi nuqsaan nahi dunga...

She stood up to leave...

Maan- it might not be safe... they may come back...

She looked around feeling restless... soon not able to bear it, she fixed her dupatta properly covering most of her face , she walked out, he watched her leave... he couldn't even stop her... and that was the first and last time he'd seen her... until today at the office...

End of flashback...

Dadi toh aap isi liye shaadi ke liye mana kar rahe te...

Maan- haan...

Dadi naam kya hai?

Maan- Geet...

Dadi bohot pyaara naam hai... toh kab milayenge...

Maan-Dadi... aap bhi na... aaj hi mila hoon... usse pehle usse jaana chahti hoon... aur pata karna chahti hoon kya woh mere baare main kya sochti hai... uss sab ke liye waqt lagta hai..

Dadi teek par zyada waqt mat lagaye... apne dil ke baat batane main... kahi der na hojaye...

Maan- matlab...

Dadi matlab mere unexperienced pote... agar koi aur ladka usse propose kar le... aap toh zindagi barr kunwara rahenge...

Maan- nahi... aisa kuch nahi hoga... Main Geet ko paa kar rahungi chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pare...

Dadi smiled at his determination... atleast he likes someone... she really wanted to see this Geet... there must be something about this girl that had won her stone cold grandson's heart... Maan had to think of a short cut, to impress Geet, while she works with him... its only a week left... he couldn't wait for the time to pass quickly... if only there was a time machine... damn it why were these crazy ideas coming into his head... if he's like this now whats to come later...

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