A Zoya OS- Burning Out, Fading Away! - Page 3

Originally posted by: ErisedWitch45

Wow Ayesha!

The way you've got in Zoya's mind and described her feelings is amazing.

Reading her thoughts makes one understand why Adi's love declaration would hurt her so much- it's the break of trust which she had so slowly learnt to do again. Maybe it's her subconscious need to prove to Yash that she could also be an understanding friend to someone (that he so wanted from her).

I hope before Zoya goes to Arshad (for the marriage proposal 🤢) the cvs give us a scene like this. Esp at the lake- a place which holds significance for both of them- since it was there where they decided to start afresh.

As always, (a different theme and) very nicely written!

Originally posted by: geet0910

So bfully u have described zoyas pov👏 it was so heartbreaking n even that song was so heartbreaking. It made me emotional n feel for zoyas pain n hurt more😭. So so bfully written. I loved it so so so much.

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

Ykw ayesha? Your OS revealed how Zoya must be really feeling about the heart break she received from her azeez dost Aditya, whom she was just declaring y'day that they know each other than anybody will ever know about them. She was indeed shattered & your story & the thoughts you have written for Zoya are apt 👏

What I feel is she's, as she told Arshad at the dinner is unable to again give herself a chance to find love, be the same Zoya who was foolish enough to trust Yash, who completely took away her trust in the process. That trust was once again built up by Adi, whom she regarded as one of the best things that happened to her life. Out of nowhere the guy confessed & that's why she was unable to cope up.

Anyway I totally enjoyed reading the OS in Zoya's pov & if possible, would you be able to write one from Adi's pov too? Because I'm sure you'll nail it 😊

Originally posted by: alizia_malik

You did such a fantastic job with this OS.👏

Much needed depth introspect of Zoya. She is not wrong on her place. She did feel betrayed and now her soul has been snatched from her body.. until unless Aditya is with her .. She will never feel complete. SO emotional it was but i liked a full dedicated OS to Zoya. You again outdid yourself Ayesha. Love you for giving this OS. 😃

Originally posted by: Fee_Clochette

you are an amazing writer dear,,,,

just beautifully penned down..

loved the way you have described Zoya's emotions...

I wish to see something similar in epi...

it was just perfect... ❤️

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@doc love I have lot of books lined up for reading and that includes some in wattpad. I will put yours in the list. But at this point I am too tired to read anything because publishing my book was hectic and my brain needs some relaxation. BP at this point offers me that where I can do some relaxed writing 😆😆

Originally posted by: Prizi

Beautiful dear

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Heyyy Sahiba... Thank you soo much yar for such nice comments... 😳 I love this song too...

Yar Zoya has not realized yet that what a blessing it is to find a best friend in one's spouse... The moment she realizes this, she will be all game and ready to begin her life with Aditya only... 😳 Problem is that she needs to get over her past first. At the moment, she looks all confident and happy dappy, but her fear of Love and Marriage is a clear red warning that how much shes actually damaged! Poor girl...

Thank you so much once again... ❤️😳

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Hiii dear friend, thank you soo much yar.. I am happy that you liked it... 😳

Yes... shes incomplete without Aditya... and she realized that today, to some extent... 😃 Soon, we will see a super intense Zoya in the show... 😃😃

Love you too buddy...😃❤️ I hope Alizia is your name and I can call you that.. 😊