Aditya OS : The Heartbreak - Page 2

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Potterhead

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Posted: 7 years ago

The only thing that was going on in my mind was

Hain alag yeh baat phir bhi tu Mera na kabhi hua

Jeene mein ab Kya Raha Hain mar raha sau dafa...

The way you wrote about his feelings it really broke my heart

Edited by ramisaaAli - 7 years ago

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@Ayraa-MK

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Posted: 7 years ago

SO beautiful this OS is, u made me feel Adi's pain, Loved it :)

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Kiki

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Posted: 7 years ago

This was amazing...my heart really went out to Adi 😭

Great work!

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@Coffee_Chips

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Posted: 7 years ago

This was nicely written. The way Adi was struggling with his own feelings for Zoya & how frustrated he felt were beautifully penned. While reading the OS only I also realized why had Arjun, Noor & for that matter also Zoya had kept Arnoor's affair hidden from Adi? ROFL 🤣 Bechara, because what you said with regards to Pooja's pov about Adi is what rings inside his head many times. "Main bachcha nahi hoon"; he has said this few times in the show too.

Will ya be continuing this? This can't be just an OS! 😆 The endimg is literally inviting a part two, to make this a TS 😃

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Silverrmoon

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is a lovely OS, you expressed Aditya's emotions so well, keep writing more.

If possible please make this a SS.

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