RiKara SS - THE FORBIDDEN FRUIT - EPISODE FIVE UPDATED Pg TWENTY - Page 15

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

I am first 🤗

Your are back with a sanskaari update 😆
Loved it 😳
check out my os ..got inspiration from you to write something like that 😳

Aaru 🤗
Thank you ... Yes Sanskaar is in my every vein 😆
I read your OS it was fabulous ... Thank you for the dedication ... I have commented on your thread.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it, at least we get nice Rikara scenes through great writers like you

Thank you so much ... Will try to deliver as much rikara as possible.
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Posted: 7 years ago
And you successfully took away my neend..abhi main kaise so paungi..?? 😲
Mere dimag mein abhi se yeh ghoom raha hain..and I don't think I'll be able to sleep.. ☺️
No wonder what took so much of time to update this.. 😉
The kiss..!! Haaye..!! ☺️
I'm still in a mess..
This is so intense..
They never need words to express anything..she was upset and he could sense it looking into her eyes..as their eyes met, they started to talk with eyes...
Omkara didn't want to ask her the reason of those tears in her eyes..but he knew how to brush away those..
He did something that could divert her mind from every other thing in the world..A simple kiss aroused both of them..they couldn't get enough each other..so their mouth started to fuse in each other..
Gauri drooling over Kara..
I can imagine you trying to edit that 8 page of kiss.. 😆
Believe me even if it was long everyone would've read it khushi khushi..you know the reason right..?? 😆
A flirty Kara is adorable..I agree Ri should not wear sarees in the office..she looks ravishingly beautiful..Omkara behek jata hain.. ☺️
Tell me the address of Ajay..main apni nayi wali chappal leke darshan karke aati hoon uska.. 😡
Spineless man he's..
Ek toh sex maniac..upar se girlfriend ke paiso pe palne wala kutta hain woh..you've no idea how much I hate him.. 😡
I want to barsaofy gaalis now.. 😵
My poor Ri was feeling to disgusted that she loved someone like him..she's not strong enough here to say a no to him..neither she can tolerate him..she's in a dilemma now...
Ajay ko jaldi bhagao behna..pleej..
Abhi uske naam se hi dimag aise bawra gaya hain..uske seene mein mummy kasam tamanche ki saari goliyan utar ke rakh doon..ek baar bass mil jaaye.. 😡
Okay..abhi I'll be a shan't chiraiyya..
Ajay jaaye bhad mein..
My Rikara and the elevator kiss..
Uff..ka gajab ki scene tha..hum toh sharam ke mare aise red red tamayar ban gaye hain mummy kasam.. 😆
What's coming up next..?? 😉
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ahem Ahem... "badi der kardi huzoor, aate aate..." 😆 😆
Uff Poo... What was thiss... pehle toh ik questionwa humka bahut pareshaaan karatraha... ee lipht kahan se kahan ko chali thi behna jo rukti hi naahi ?... Chal oo chod, lekin ee lipht KAHAN SE KAAHAAAN pahunchi ! humka toh majaa aagaya kahat rahe tumse...😆



You Go Giirrrlll... too much awesomeness in your works ! ❤️
Matlab, kamaaall ho chirayyaa tum 😃 ❤️


Hah Omki 😆 kehta hai no sarees in office for you... 😆 hum bhi dekhe, kitna paalan hota hai Iss arderwa ka...😆
Keep it goooiinngg 😳 ❤️
Edited by Farri25 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Their kiss ☺️
Hott and passionate😳😳
I was lost in their 'ahem ahem' moment
Totally Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

And you successfully took away my neend..abhi main kaise so paungi..?? 😲

Neend udaayi Teri ... Kisne o sanam Maine ... Maine

Mere dimag mein abhi se yeh ghoom raha hain..and I don't think I'll be able to sleep.. ☺️

Dhola waali thaat ... Ghoomar ghaoomar ghume re baisa ghoomar ghumme re...

No wonder what took so much of time to update this.. 😉

Mood nahi ho raha thha likhne ka 😆

The kiss..!! Haaye..!! ☺️

1368 words

I'm still in a mess..
This is so intense..

Goal achieved then

They never need words to express anything..she was upset and he could sense it looking into her eyes..as their eyes met, they started to talk with eyes...

Exactly ... Omkara understood that she is having a weak moment and she needs support ... A glimpse of their emotional dependency.

Omkara didn't want to ask her the reason of those tears in her eyes..but he knew how to brush away those..

He is Omkara

He did something that could divert her mind from every other thing in the world..A simple kiss aroused both of them..they couldn't get enough each other..so their mouth started to fuse in each other..

☺️

Gauri drooling over Kara..

Trust me she is going to drool more

I can imagine you trying to edit that 8 page of kiss.. 😆

I did edit that 😆

Believe me even if it was long everyone would've read it khushi khushi..you know the reason right..?? 😆

I know every reason 😆

A flirty Kara is adorable..I agree Ri should not wear sarees in the office..she looks ravishingly beautiful..Omkara behek jata hain.. ☺️

I am imagining this lift sequence now.

Tell me the address of Ajay..main apni nayi wali chappal leke darshan karke aati hoon uska.. 😡
Spineless man he's..
Ek toh sex maniac..upar se girlfriend ke paiso pe palne wala kutta hain woh..you've no idea how much I hate him.. 😡
I want to barsaofy gaalis now.. 😵

Jitna gussa hona hai hoja ... You know naa he is going to become worse Ri is going to get in some more trouble.

My poor Ri was feeling to disgusted that she loved someone like him..she's not strong enough here to say a no to him..neither she can tolerate him..she's in a dilemma now...

Gauri is a flawed person here aand she accepts it ... That being that very reason this story began.

Ajay ko jaldi bhagao behna..pleej..
Abhi uske naam se hi dimag aise bawra gaya hain..uske seene mein mummy kasam tamanche ki saari goliyan utar ke rakh doon..ek baar bass mil jaaye.. 😡

Areee shaant hoja ... Main putwaaungi usko 😉 Gauri se hi maar khaaega

Okay..abhi I'll be a shan't chiraiyya..
Ajay jaaye bhad mein..
My Rikara and the elevator kiss..
Uff..ka gajab ki scene tha..hum toh sharam ke mare aise red red tamayar ban gaye hain mummy kasam.. 😆
What's coming up next..?? 😉

Ab tum humre saath aise bakbakaao gi toh dil pe thha karke lagega ... Aakhon se bhaatar bahega mummy kasham 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Farri25

Ahem Ahem... "badi der kardi huzoor, aate aate..." 😆 😆

Haan Farro ji ... Der aate hai lekin durust aate hai 😉

Uff Poo... What was thiss... pehle toh ik questionwa humka bahut pareshaaan karatraha... ee lipht kahan se kahan ko chali thi behna jo rukti hi naahi ?... Chal oo chod, lekin ee lipht KAHAN SE KAAHAAAN pahunchi ! humka toh majaa aagaya kahat rahe tumse...😆



You Go Giirrrlll... too much awesomeness in your works ! ❤️
Matlab, kamaaall ho chirayyaa tum 😃 ❤️

Thank you Farroji ... Aapko commentwaa humka bahut pas and aayaa aapko bohot Sara thankoo

Hah Omki 😆 kehta hai no sarees in office for you... 😆 hum bhi dekhe, kitna paalan hota hai Iss arderwa ka...😆

Woh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata 😆

Keep it goooiinngg 😳 ❤️

Okies

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Their kiss ☺️

Hott and passionate😳😳
I was lost in their 'ahem ahem' moment
Totally Loved it


Thank you so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
Tooo hawt😳😳
This omkara is too hott to handle☺️
His sangaskari words are enough to melt her like ice cream
Loved it so much
Waiting for more hawtness
Continue soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
I'm so in love with this ss. Can we get an update soon? Please? I really miss your writings. I'm so excited for the next chapter.

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