AdiYa OS- Leap Of Faith

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DMGThings

@DMGThings

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Yaar, I absolutely loved this. Matlab, AdiYa OS mein Devakshi wala twist. Waah, kya baat hai! Absolutely amaze!

Adi was so good in this one. I adored him!! <3

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anilalibra

@anilalibra

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#72

It was a very well thought and written os. I enjoyed it a lot. You are a great writer. I think you should write a nice FF on AdiYa. I would love to read one. Coming to the os, the way you wrote Zoya's pain, her fear for trusting Adi after getting betrayed by her ex husband, the way Adi convinced her, it was all surreal. I loved your OS.

PS: SORRY!! for reading your os now..its been months since you pm me..

Thankyou for the pm. kindly pm me whenever you'll be posting another os, ss or ff on AdiYa.

Love,
Anila.

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@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#73

Oh my God!!! This was beautiful! How on earth did I miss to read this one, I really dont know...😕

But bro, what an epic story! 👏⭐️ Very well written too..👍🏼

Circumstancial marriages!!! 😃 I loveee those kind of marriages!😆

Zoya looking up for Adi's bride...😉 sath sath dil per chhuriyan bhi chal rahy thyn katakat!😆😉 Loved it...

I also loved how you explained Zoya's P.O.V. Although its not yet revealed in the show ke aakhir iss ladki ke dil aur dimagh mien chal kia raha hai, but still I also feel that somewhere, shes very scared of getting into a relationship again... 😕 Poor girl... Shes more damaged than Aditya, I think...😭

About Adi and his scheme... 😆 He took my heart once again and i m sure of all those girls too, whom he met for fake alliance.. 😆

Dard ka rishta- that line was so beatiful ..

Ankita, you are an excellent writer. ⭐️

I know how hard it is to write emotions in such a way that the readers also feel them...and mashaAllah, you have the ability to do that amazingly... 👏

Thank you buddy for this beautiful OS .. Do write more whenever you get time.. 😊

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