Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 40

Created

Last reply

Replies

832

Views

123414

Users

108

Likes

1459

Frequent Posters

Samaina_1990 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Being so busy in your life and work and still writing  such long and beautiful  updates  is commendable  πŸ€— I enjoyed reading it . Sadly such a romantic trip comes to an end but obviously  on such sweet note .  All the kisses they shared were just β˜ΊοΈ Voh song h na lahu  muh lag gya wala πŸ˜‰ Naina  sameer par fit baitha hai exactly πŸ˜† .. And that fireflies wala secret spot must be something very beautiful I can imagine it  everything was so lovely . Sameer forgetting his own bday but naina remembering it was such a sweet gesture and buying him a designer watch with all her saving was heart warming . 

Hey Suman! Thank you darling! I know kaafi time baad reply kiya maine...but you know my situation! I'm glad you like my efforts and this story! Varna mera aadha mood ho raha tha IF quit karne ka...it's you and two-three more people that I'm still here...still taking a chance with another update! πŸ˜³ So thanks a lot dear!
Love
Sur
Samaina_1990 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: vidrev

Thanks for the pm. A very nice update. 

Thank you! 
Samaina_1990 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

An amazing romantic update Sur...sorry for being so late in commenting my dear😳

The coffee at a canteen amidst rains and the fireflies later was so beautiful dearπŸ˜ƒ
Their romantic moments were nicely penned down as we get to see how they are getting closer to each otherπŸ˜ƒ
Loved reading this update...thanks a lot for the pmπŸ˜ƒ

Thanks Manisha! No worries. You took out time to comment- I'm honoured yaar! Happy to see you enjoyed the romance in this update as well! 
Love
Sur
Samaina_16 thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 5 years ago
Heya didi, I know I am super slow, *Kaan pakad ke sorry* and uthak baithak bhi. Chahe jitna marzi time Laga ke pdhun ye story chodhungi to nahi ;)


Part 4

This story is a dream. Every moment that Is wanted to see between Samaina in our show,  is being shown here part after part and I can not thank you enough for giving this story to us.

The thing that I loved the most about the part was Sameer trying hard to get admission in Patel College. I am so happy that Naina didn't ditch her chachaji here. I might be the odd one out but seeing Naina hide money to get admission in VJN was a big disappointment for me. Chachaji had always stood by her. He had been more than a father to her. Naina's own father doesn't give a damn about her existence but Chachaji had always fought for Naina and I am so happy that Naina maintained the trust of Chachaji here. Sameer very well knew that his Naina can go to any extent to be near him and he made things easier for her. I love this guy. How can he be so sweet ? He understood her predicament even without her telling him. His hard work and dedication finally paid off. Ladka 76% laya matlab Kamaal hi Kar diya chore ne. Hayeee Aisa boyfriend Bhagwan sbko de. Btw didu, the same happened in Suhana Safar, the only difference being Samaina ek dusre Ko jante nahi the but nevertheless our thoughts match a lot.


I am so glad that you told the whereabouts of everyone in the group. Yay Preeti is finally doing the thing which she loves. Chachaji is an amazing parent. The level of understanding and care he shows is incredible. Do kids need anything else in their lives? Bela Chachi and chacha are love.

Oho Swati wants to do acting, vaah. 
Sameer discovering and nurturing his passion was such a sweet addition to the story. I hope Sameer show me bhi kuch Aisa kre par meri hopes hopes hi reh jaenge. Such an understanding boyfriend he is. Not only he persuaded Naina to give auditions, he even made sure that her studies are not affected. Kahan milte hain aise ladke Zara batana?

The dialogue 'kiss bhi add kr dena' had me in splits. Jagah aur mahaul kuch nahi dekhta. Dekhna bhi nahi chahie, pyar Kiya to Darna kya ;)


You finally closed the play vala loop too. The play got it's perfect Romeo Juliet. Who can better enact a love story than our Samaina. I could visualise the entire scene as you described it. Ladke ne mauke par chauka maar Kar finally kiss kr diya play me bhi. I am proud of him. Bda flirty hai ye ldka.




Ahaan so their first kiss happened in Darjeeling. I can not control my excitement to read about their first kiss. Would read the next part soon. 




Samaina_1990 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: AaishaM

Heya didi, I know I am super slow, *Kaan pakad ke sorry* and uthak baithak bhi. Chahe jitna marzi time Laga ke pdhun ye story chodhungi to nahi ;)
Arey tension not kudiye! πŸ˜‰ Tennu sab maaf hai master ji! πŸ˜†


Part 4

This story is a dream. Every moment that Is wanted to see between Samaina in our show,  is being shown here part after part and I can not thank you enough for giving this story to us.
Aww thank you dear...these Samaina are actually inspired by our show's Samaina...haan ye thode se fast hain...but not unlike 90s I hope! πŸ˜†

The thing that I loved the most about the part was Sameer trying hard to get admission in Patel College. I am so happy that Naina didn't ditch her chachaji here. I might be the odd one out but seeing Naina hide money to get admission in VJN was a big disappointment for me. Chachaji had always stood by her. He had been more than a father to her. Naina's own father doesn't give a damn about her existence but Chachaji had always fought for Naina and I am so happy that Naina maintained the trust of Chachaji here. Sameer very well knew that his Naina can go to any extent to be near him and he made things easier for her. I love this guy. How can he be so sweet ? He understood her predicament even without her telling him. His hard work and dedication finally paid off. Ladka 76% laya matlab Kamaal hi Kar diya chore ne. Hayeee Aisa boyfriend Bhagwan sbko de. Btw didu, the same happened in Suhana Safar, the only difference being Samaina ek dusre Ko jante nahi the but nevertheless our thoughts match a lot.
Maine padha Suhana Safar mein bhi Aaisha! Yes, our thoughts are alike! Mujhe bhi yahin laga...pyaar mein insaan ko behtar banna chahiye na ki badtar...Agar Naina Sam ke saath hai to I would expect her to help him in studies...he does learn fast with her...remember the headboy competition...Naina use pura padha bhi nahi paayi thi fir bhi he scored so well...life mein tab tak kabhi nahi kiya tha...n yes I didn't like Naina hiding the money too...but nadani n pyaar mein pagalpan samajh ke I ignored that. 

I am so glad that you told the whereabouts of everyone in the group. Yay Preeti is finally doing the thing which she loves. Chachaji is an amazing parent. The level of understanding and care he shows is incredible. Do kids need anything else in their lives? Bela Chachi and chacha are love.
Yes dear...halaki focus Samaina pe hai...but now there are so many other couples...I wanted to show inka kya ho raha hai parallely...would actually slowly unravel for each of the couples...bas time mile likhne ka! πŸ˜†

Oho Swati wants to do acting, vaah. 
Sameer discovering and nurturing his passion was such a sweet addition to the story. I hope Sameer show me bhi kuch Aisa kre par meri hopes hopes hi reh jaenge. Such an understanding boyfriend he is. Not only he persuaded Naina to give auditions, he even made sure that her studies are not affected. Kahan milte hain aise ladke Zara batana?
Wahi na yaar...I was inspired by Sumeet sir saying he wanted to do acting n tried his hand at it...so Sameer ka bhi interest jaga diya...especially after Romeo-Juliet play! πŸ˜†
BOLD: Sapno mein milte hain! πŸ˜† Kitabon mein, kahaniyon mein bhi...n I hope so ki tumko bhi jaldi milega...😳
The dialogue 'kiss bhi add kr dena' had me in splits. Jagah aur mahaul kuch nahi dekhta. Dekhna bhi nahi chahie, pyar Kiya to Darna kya ;)
Hehe...wo to hai...he takes the song "pyaar karne wale kabhi darte nahi!" πŸ˜‰ And hai to wo flirt vaise- though only for Naina! πŸ˜†

You finally closed the play vala loop too. The play got it's perfect Romeo Juliet. Who can better enact a love story than our Samaina. I could visualise the entire scene as you described it. Ladke ne mauke par chauka maar Kar finally kiss kr diya play me bhi. I am proud of him. Bda flirty hai ye ldka.

Haan yaar...I so wanted something on this play in college...itna kuch hai dikhane ko lekin inki musibatein hi khatam nahi hoti show mein! πŸ˜† Chance pe dance kar liya na! πŸ˜‰


Ahaan so their first kiss happened in Darjeeling. I can not control my excitement to read about their first kiss. Would read the next part soon. 

Padho padho...I would love to hear your views on the section on Darjeeling! πŸ€—


Hey Aaisha! Thank you for the awesome comment yaar!
My replies in pretty pink! 
Love
Sur
anuridi thumbnail
Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
Hey...thanks for the pm and sorry for replying late...I wish all this can happen in the show!!!  Beautifully written and hope to find a new update soon !!!
Samaina_1990 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashika

It seems they are using most of their time to spend in each other's presence, making most of their Darjeeling trip. I have said, visiting Darjeeling is confirmed and now, I will be reminded of you and Samaina. 

Yes dear...do visit Darjeeling someday...and other portions of North East...till date they remain my most favourite place in India (after home that is πŸ˜ƒ)! 
Coffee can be the best prop for all lovers. πŸ˜‰
Hehe...yeah I was reminded of that song while writing this...dunno if you've heard it "tere sang...ek simple si coffee bhi kick deti hai..."...film flop thi but gaana mast tha! πŸ˜†
I am always pleasantly surprised when Naina makes a bold move, enticing the man before her but every game has consequences, she would know that by now, some consequences pleasurable than the other. 

I was on the edge of my seat when Sam was teasing Naina about Shaadi, my face matching Naina's and Sam's simultaneously, I was blushing so much☺️
And I was cracking up at the same time when Naina was telling what happens after kiss so innocently that too to an already well informed SameerπŸ˜‰
You had the dialogues on point there, a clear visual in my mind. 
Hehe thanks dear...Sam loves to tease her...he knows how innocent she is...n Sam obviously knows everything now! πŸ˜† 
The fireflies being the witness to their action of love was simply prepossessing! You know how vivid my imagination is, i simply melted away when the imaginary scene played before me. The obvious symbolism is light, illuminating their life with happiness or else after hurdles, they will achieve happiness together. 
Aww, the birthday wish in the forested area, away from the noise of the cities and consumed by their love. Lovely!
Thank you dear! Yes the symbolism is light here...(tum bhi Minu ki tarah hamare forum ki symbolism specialist ban gayi ho! πŸ˜³)...sometimes...we find peace n serenity n a sense of closeness in the lap of Nature...as we see the miraculous things Mother Earth has to offer! πŸ˜³

Loved how you brought in Sam's control in her emotions and the absence of females in his life and the first female in his life would always remain Naina. So, the reassurance he asked for was simpy beautiful. πŸ˜³

The kiss they shared, I don't have any words to describe it with. It was filled with love and nothing else, a pure action of love, feeling the taste of each other's lips. 
The mention of his restraint had me admiring him again, along with the love, he respects her and her boundaries, not once he had thought of going far with the intimacy before marriage.  
He loves her too much...so much that even when he wants to love her with no restraints attached, he realizes the consequences of their actions n doesn't want her to be in an uncomfortable position ever! πŸ˜³
Well, my eternal love for Mount Abu makes me fall in love with any piece which has the place or its memories mentioned. Reading those parts were an absolute treat, baap re, he wanted to kiss her from 11th itself and then, the control he had on himself, him closing his eyes. Strange, if his eyes are open, he would have a view of Naina and her luscious lips and if he closes his eyes, he would have a much more view than that. πŸ˜‰ 
Yes dear...Mt.Abu was one of the best executed tracks in the show...yes, he did. I tried to show that in the sequel that Sam dreams of kissing her...his subconscious knows he's attracted to her...n yet he tries to defy it all...n runs away from her whenever he sees her, in the fear he might actually kiss her for real. πŸ˜ƒ
The dig at Bhalu wali dress was quite funny. πŸ˜†
Sameer ka birthday ho aur bhalu wali dress na ho...aisa kaise ho sakta hai na! πŸ˜‰
The wrist watch had my heart and the symbolism in their life you added along with it.❀️
surely, the watch will be forever reminding them about each other's presence, the tick-tick will make them remember the time they had in Darjeeling, exploring more of each other. πŸ˜³ 
Beautiful! β€οΈ
Wahi na dear...a time-piece is one of the best gifts I feel...kuch special feeling aati hai...coz time se badhkar kya hum apni kya valuable cheez de sakte hain na! 
The trip to Darjeeling ended on a good note, with kisses and hugs and memories which will stay in our heart forever. πŸ˜ƒ

Waiting for the next section, their adventures are always a pleasure to read and of course, Surbhi Di, written beautifully! β­οΈ
Glad you loved this section dear! Thank you so much! Well the pretty flashback is over...ab time to get back into the present and read about the marriage proposal! πŸ˜Š

Thanks Shreya for the super lovely comments dear!
My replies in Pink!
Love
Sur
Samaina_1990 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 5 years ago
Hello guys! 
I know I'm not updating this story as regularly as I want to. My apologies for the same. Somehow I find writing this one much more complicated than my other stories. Lots of characters and situations to deal with, plus all this trying not to make it boring! Hope I've succeeded though till now! πŸ˜†
I'm beginning a new section where I'm taking the story back to the present, right where we left off at Section I, where Sameer proposes Naina. Section II was about some past reflections on a few of their firsts. 
With this section, we embark on the journey to convince the families. 
Hope you all like it. 

                                                                        SECTION III
                                          
                                                                 The Secrets are Out

                                                                Part 1: The First Steps

Wednesday, 14th September, 1994, 9.00 pm:

"Chachaji! Naina called out to her uncle at night, after dinner. Chachi was busy winding up the kitchen and Preeti was helping her. Taiji and Tauji, along with Rakesh and Arjun had retired to their home. The same morning Sameer and Naina had carefully discussed about the course of action for future. That included Sameer informing his parents about Naina and his plans to marry her. And Naina informing chachaji and chachiji about Sameer and his proposal.

"Haan Naina beta bolo na...kya baat hai? asked chachaji, as he was going over some official documents. "Aapse kuch baat karni hai chachaji...z...zaruri hai! Naina stammered, her heart pounding against her rib-cage. "Bol na meri gudiya! Chachaji encouraged her. "Chachaji wo baat aisi hai ki...ki...wo main...wo...wo..., Naina started. "Naina...tum itna hichkicha kyun rahi ho? Ghabrao mat...tumhare chacha tumhare dost bhi hai na! Bolo! Chachaji tried calming her down. Naina took a deep breath and blurted, "Main Sameer se shaadi karna chahti hun! And then she breathed out.

Chachaji looked stunned at her, his expression back to formal and solemn. After a pause of a few seconds, he voiced, "Sameer? Naina lowered her eyes to the ground. "Ji! Sameer Maheshwari...Mujhe maaf kar dijiye chachaji. Maine aapko yeh baat pehle nahi batayi, lekin Sameer aur main ek dusre ko pasand karte hain. Aur usne kal mujhse pucha hai ki kya main usse shaadi karungi, Naina spoke hurriedly.

The clanking of the utensils stopped as Bela chachi and Preeti stood frozen in their places. The entire house suddenly became pin-drop silent. As she took in a few minutes to let Naina's words sink in, rage came over Bela chachi and she stormed into the living room. She pulled Naina aside and screwed her ear, as she started lambasting her. "Hamare bharose ka aisa fayeda uthaya tune...ek ladke ke saath tera chakkar hai chee...Naina humne tujhpe kitna bharosa kiya...tujhe apni betiyon se badhke pyaar kiya...aur tune aaj ye chura hamare kaleje mein hi ghonp diya..., Chachi was in tears, while Naina looked ashamed, about to cry herself. Preeti was terrified seeing the reaction of her parents.

Not that she and Preeti hadn't expected this, but seeing the response from Chacha and Chachi, Naina trembled to think how Tauji and Taiji would react. Not to mention her father. He would try to rip Sameer off in rage. Overcome with fear, Naina stood silent as Chachi kept on berating her.

Suddenly Chachaji raised his hand, commanding his wife to show restraint. His eyes had a strict look as he peered at Naina and asked, "ye wahi Sameer hai jo hamare ghar aaya tha...jo tumhare saath school mein padhta tha...wahin jispe Arjun ne paper chori ka galat ilzaam lagaya tha...? Naina nodded her head slowly.

Chachaji asked again, "aur kab se chal raha hai ye sab? Naina remained silent. Chachaji prompted, "school se? Naina nodded again, feeling guilty and embarrassed at the same time. Preeti was as sure as Naina that now she will get a slap. Naina had already closed her eyes tight in anticipation, ready to bear the brunt. But the slap did not come.

"Wo tumse pakka shaadi karna chahta hai...? Chachaji questioned instead. Naina opened her eyes and a moment later, nodded.

"Usne kaha hai tumse? Kya usne apne gharwalon se baat ki hai? Uske Nanaji to ab is duniya me nahi rahe...fir uske maata pita? Chachaji asked reasonably. Naina knew she had to reveal Sameer's background now. "Wo chachaji...uski mummy Dilli me rehti hain. Unhone dusri shaadi ki... Ignoring the gasp by Bela chachi, Naina continued, "kyunki Sameer ke papa uske bachpan mein hi guzar gaye the...uske sautele papa Dilli mein hain. Wo wahan uske sautele bhai Rohan aur uski behen Deepika ke saath rehti hain.

Chachaji pondered over the new found information. He couldn't deny he'd felt betrayed by Naina's revelation, but as his initial bout of rage gave way to lines of reason, he felt concerned for Naina's future and happiness.

"Hmmm...Naina tum jaanti ho na wo log kitne ameer hain. Sameer abhi baccha hai. Kal to uske mata-pita ne mana kar diya ki ek middle-class ladki se use shaadi nahi karni to tum kya karogi...aur usse zaruri hai wo kya karega? Aur upar se uski mummy ki dusri shaadi...tum jaanti ho na...bade bhaisahab aur bhabhiji ye kabhi baat nahi maan payenge...aur Rakesh bhaisahab  to shayad hamesha se hi Sameer ko pasand nahi karte! Chachaji tried to reason with Naina.

Naina stood listening to all this. Chachaji's eyes flickered onto Naina's determined yet abashed face. Then he spoke again, "Lekin mujhe Sameer pasand hai...!

Naina, Preeti and Bela looked up in surprise. "Ji...aap ye kya keh rahe hain? Bela interrupted but paused at her husband's gesture. A smile crept across Naina and Preeti's lips as they saw Chachaji smiling. "Par jitna main use jaanta hun...sirf us hisab se...main ye baat ghar pe kisi aur ko batane se pehle Sameer se milna chahunga...aur agar wo meri gudiya ko hamse zyada khush rakhega to main tum dono ki shaadi zarur karwaunga, ye mera vaada hai tumse! Chachaji declared happily.

Naina was overwhelmed by Chachaji's words. She could not believe that he had accepted Sameer's proposal so easily. She'd thought she would have to go about convincing him and Chachi for days before they relented. Of course he wanted to scrutinize Sameer and his character to his satisfaction. But that was normal considering how protective Chachaji was for Naina. With tears in her eyes, Naina couldn't help but hug her chacha, as she started crying out in joy. "Thank you Chachaji! Thank you so much! Seeing her husband's support for the couple, Bela too softened. After all, she too had liked Sameer when he'd come over to help during Puja-Varun's wedding. And also when he'd forgiven Arjun and in a way saved his and his father's reputation in school.

***

Wednesday, 14th September, 1994, 9.30 pm:

"Mom! Vishakha heard Sameer's voice and was surprised. "Sameer...kaise ho tum? she asked. "Main theek hun...actually mujhe aap logon se kuch zaruri baat karni hai...kya aap log kal Ahemdabad aa sakte hain? he spoke. "Ahemdabad? Kal? Lekin kya hua Sameer...aisa kya zaruri baat hai jo tum phone pe nahi kar sakte? Sab theek hai na? Vishakha asked in concern. "Nahi...sab theek hai...bas hai ek baat...agar aap aa payenge to acha hoga...kamse 3-4 din ke liye please...mujhe is waqt aapki zarurat hai maa...Nanu nahi rahe...varna aapko pareshan nahi karta! Sameer confessed, his heart heavy as he recalled his grandfather. How he wished Nanu was here with him. He would have taken care of everything then. "Theek hai...main tumhare papa se baat karti hun...kal subah phone karti hun okay? she said as she hung up. Sameer looked at the receiver and sighed. He wished he would be together with Naina, soon!

The next morning, Vishakha called Sameer and informed him that they would be arriving on Sunday. His step-father, Mr. Somani had taken a few days leave on her insistence and since it was Rohan and Deepika's mid-term break from their college and school respectively, they would bring them along. Sameer had formally thanked Mr. Somani before he replaced the receiver.

***

Thursday, 15h September, 1994, 2.00 pm:

"Sameer! Dheere chalao! Naina yelped as she tried to cling onto him for support. "Hahaha! Sameer was laughing joyously and celebrating with an overspeeding bike ride. "Gir jaungi main! Naina shrieked. "Mujhe kas ke pakdo na...mere hote huye kaise girogi! he shouted back as he accelerated more. "Sameer! Itni kya excited ho rahe ho? Naina shrieked. "Arey Chachaji maan gaye...mujhse milna chahte hain...Step 1 done...ab hamari shaadi hogi! he declared happily as he swerved the corner around Rajshri Park. "Sameer...zinda bachenge to karenge na shaadi...dheere karo...! Naina commanded. "Tum to abhi se biwi ki tarah order dene lagi ho! Sameer exclaimed as he slowed down. Naina breathed a sigh of relief as the bike jerked to a halt and propped herself down immediately.

"Tum na...sudhroge nai! she tapped his arm feigning anger. "Ye umar sudharne ki nai...bigadne ki hai jaaneman! he winked at her as he climbed down the bike.

As they made their way inside the park, Sameer wrapped his arm around her shoulders and said, "Naina...Sunday ko mom bhi aa rahi hain...unse bhi baat karni hai...phone pe batana sahi nahi laga isliye bula liya...par unke saath mere khadus pitaji bhi aa rahe hain! Naina smacked him for disrespecting an elder and he grinned.

A few minutes later, they settled down on the grassy lawn as they discussed the dos and don'ts that Sameer should follow when he met Chachaji and planning on how to tactly broach the topic in front of Sameer's family.


Edited by Samaina_1990 - 5 years ago
Yudkbh30 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
Oh wow
So Amazing update 
Ab toh rishta pkka samjho 
PehliDafaHai thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
A short yet an important update! πŸ˜ƒ

Chachaji and Chachiji's reaction was so apt, I could imagine the bubbly Bela Chachi scolding her for falling in love and ruining the 'izzat' but in a more nice way, in Naina's language katti meeti daant, Chachi as usual we know accepts what her husband says or if she doesn't get convinced, then we have Chachaji to convince her πŸ˜‰

Preeti getting scared of the reaction was just love, she is awesome. I am just too fond of the equation these four of them share with each other. πŸ˜³

The questions raised by Chachaji is valid, it's the parents' right. I am keen to know how the conversation would play out between Chachaji and Sam. Give us some moments of fun between them πŸ˜›

 The build up to the conversation with Vishaka was nicely written, I'm eager to know how the family dyamics and the status will produce different reactions. I am so happy the siblings are arriving too. πŸ˜³

I miss Nanu too. β€οΈ

At the end, Sameer and Naina being just happy together makes me feel elated too. πŸ˜³
Excited for this section! πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Mayashika - 5 years ago