What I feel is wrong with this show........

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Naagin 3 has a great cast with the only exception of some people. It has an intriguing story that can outshine the previous two seasons of the show. However there are so many things that is wrong with the show that keeps it from shining. The show has many loopholes that writers don't care to acknowledge, they are introducing to many new characters, there is no character developments, the dialogues are not strong but instead cheesy, the supporting casts are sidelined.

I always stay away from Indian tv show because I never connect to them and there is no logic. I am still giving this show a chance because I like the lead actors. I notice in this generation the indian audiences are becoming more outspoken on twitter, facebook and instagram demanding more better quality written tv shows. I've read how many indian audiences are turning to international shows aka american shows and movies instead of watching their own. This is because we as audience wants to see logic and realism in the shows. We want to be able to connect with characters and story which is what Indian tv shows lack.


When you look at international shows like "This is us, The Crown, Stranger things, Black Mirror, One tree hill, The vampire diaries" etc. What makes people connect to these shows and so much more is because of it's realism, the dialogues, the acting, the emotional aspects of the story, the suspense, the thrills and relationship these characters have with one another. In these shows every character is given a story arc and their moment to shine. This is something Indian tv shows lack. Channels and creators are in competition with one another for ratings they don't bother to give well written shows. When a few try to, it gets shut down because of ratings.


Coming back to Naagin 3 let's talk about a few loopholes...
1) When Yuvi and his gang assaulted Ruhi and attacked Vikrant; Ruhi face was not damaged. But when they introduced Bela as Ruhi and the reason why she got the new face it did not make sense at all because her face wasn't damaged in the first place. Unless she did that damage herself. The writers should have addressed this issue better than they did. However I love Surbhi as Bela/Ruhi. Karishma is good but I like Surbhi more.
2) The second loophole is Bela and her dad relationship. The writers never dwelled into that properly. How did they meet, is her fake dad a naagin to, how did the proposal with Yuvi even occurred etc. The second episode just jumped right in to Yuvi and Bela engagement without showing audiences what happened and who Bela and her father was. We are now on episode 10 I think and nothing..
3) The next loophole is Yuvi. Apparently his parents don't care what happened to him and hasn't even acknowledge him since he "ran away". There are many complexities and more to show about Yuvi character. The way how the writers written him off was disappointed and even more so when his own family fails to acknowledge him in the show, Of course we as the audience know this and point it out but apparently the writers don't seem to bother which is a turn off for audiences.
4) The other loopholes are so many story arc are all over the place and they are introducing even more stories without giving closures to others. The story arc with Yuvi and his gang should have been played out more longer then bring in a few new characters.



As for character development...
1) Vish: We still don't know who Vish is other than being Ruhi friend aiding her in her revenge plot. All we can assume is we will come to know more about Vish in the future episodes and if she really is Ruhi friend or not.
2) Mahir: Not at all happy with his character development. These recent episodes are focusing on showing Mahir and Bela romance which is fine but we as an audience don't know Mahir as a character fully. I don't want Mahir to just be a love interest but I want him to have a great story arc to. Indian tv shows in my opinion always fail to give the male lead a great story arc and I hope the same doesn't happen here.
3) Andy Sehgal and Sumitra: The show has been focusing more on the leads they fail to portray the supporting cast in a better light. I believe these two characters has more to offer and should be given the screen space they deserve.


In all the show is an average for me but there is room for them to improve more. However I have my doubts because it's always about ratings more. I always say not one person makes a show but the entire cast and they need to find time to include everyone in a 1 HOUR episode. No one should be sidelined. Thank you.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very Well said . completely agree with your logic . N Makers r in too rush to makescenes . like it is too early to kill Yuvi , it is too early to show mahir's romantic angle for brla. like 2 din ke shadi pe woh bhi aise incident mai how could he say mere bela. it is too early ., Then without any power , too many attacks on human , n ruhi's face change reason r so lame. she had some glitches on face which could be cured. n she turned as a icchadhari naagin after 6 month . so she easily could change her face . so there were no need the drama of bela -ruhi n face angle. N also they dint gave any solid reason still now of Behir's marriage. ML janam janam , sath sath that is not point in character wise.

N vish character is still now in hide phase. many more story should be reveal soon . other wise mess will ruin the charm of show.

N so many villains omg , i made an list today . n i am thundered to watch this. how could ekta will manage them . n she has made entere so many characters in beginning stage. agar beginning mai itni kuch then age jake aur keya dikhyegi. villain ek sath kaise itne sare aa sakte hai .

Still now no logic build up perfectly . Hope ekta will merge all crowd smoothly .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well first one is - Ruhi face had lots of scratch after that incident even shown in flashback, when Ruhi was asking for new face.

Second one is - Bela's Dad is Naag Pandit and just helping his Naag Queen. That particular scene got shown in Episode 8. Just check...

Third one is - Everyone assuming Yuvi ran away with Raavi as Mahir got the evidence during the Wedding. So that's why they careless because Yuvi is like that according to them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is such an amazing post.
I'll get back here tomorrow after work b/c I know I'm gonna rant alot. 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such a nice post.
I don't know what the makers are thinking!! Logic in Indian serials on top of that super natural fiction ,,i don't expect any!!! But man ... There should a limit to be illogical !!!
There are so many loopholes , so many stranded strings...they could just try to put them all together to create a great story. Instead of developing any character further, they are introducing new characters which is unnecessary at this moment.
Sumitra, Andy, poloumi, yuvi , adi ...no development in their character...we know nothing !
Vish...o my god.such a strong cast..so many sides, shades can be portrayed if her characterization is well written .but again Alas!!!

They are not even concentrating on main leads characterization !! Yes , we got some "will fall for each other scenes " ❤️I absolutely love those scenes between them. But we need some more lights on their characters, instead of introducing whole new bunch of more charecters.

I started watching this show for surbhi, I love her...And I love Mahir and Vish. Liked most of the character thinking that they will grow as a character as the story progresses. But I've started doubting that now!! I know they might be thinking to run the show for a long time...that's why they are going this way ...so many enemies for naag rani means so many episodes! But there is something called "timing" please makers do some justice.

Please can we have a beautiful romantic revengeful supernatural fiction!! Such a strong hardworking cast...don't want this season to be wasted
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Edited by Surbhizoya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Regarding Bella and her fake father he is from the naag family and works for her because she is the Queen of naagins. They Said in one of the episode that they lived in a poor neighborhood for 6 months or something like that to adjust there and to live like humans. So they trained them self to live amongst humans. And this is how they meet Suhani and her father. The fake father Worked for seghal and took a Loan to make it look like that now he is stuck in a huge debt for seghal family. They alredy knew how yuvi is so When he saw Bela he wanted to know her. But as we can see bela acted like a sanskaari girl in front of yuvi. In the Begning he tells her that she is not like any other Girl and that he had waited for her in a long time. Its was their plan to take advantage of the family and make it look like that they are accepting the proposal only because of the debt. I agree that their might be some loopholes regarding ruhis face and the other things you mentioned.
But i still Think they are going to reveal more things.. That might give an answer to our questions...
I Think this is the best season so far.. 😊





Edited by sarahgul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I don't speak Hindi but I can understand some of it not all. So I watch the episodes and read the written updates online. I just post my honest opinions and I really like the cast. The concept of the show is intriguing but I feel it can be done better. I'm still watching it and hoping for the best and yes I do think this season is better than the last two.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: durga33

Naagin 3 has a great cast with the only exception of some people. It has an intriguing story that can outshine the previous two seasons of the show. However there are so many things that is wrong with the show that keeps it from shining. The show has many loopholes that writers don't care to acknowledge, they are introducing to many new characters, there is no character developments, the dialogues are not strong but instead cheesy, the supporting casts are sidelined.

I always stay away from Indian tv show because I never connect to them and there is no logic. I am still giving this show a chance because I like the lead actors. I notice in this generation the indian audiences are becoming more outspoken on twitter, facebook and instagram demanding more better quality written tv shows. I've read how many indian audiences are turning to international shows aka american shows and movies instead of watching their own. This is because we as audience wants to see logic and realism in the shows. We want to be able to connect with characters and story which is what Indian tv shows lack.


When you look at international shows like "This is us, The Crown, Stranger things, Black Mirror, One tree hill, The vampire diaries" etc. What makes people connect to these shows and so much more is because of it's realism, the dialogues, the acting, the emotional aspects of the story, the suspense, the thrills and relationship these characters have with one another. In these shows every character is given a story arc and their moment to shine. This is something Indian tv shows lack. Channels and creators are in competition with one another for ratings they don't bother to give well written shows. When a few try to, it gets shut down because of ratings.


Coming back to Naagin 3 let's talk about a few loopholes...
1) When Yuvi and his gang assaulted Ruhi and attacked Vikrant; Ruhi face was not damaged. But when they introduced Bela as Ruhi and the reason why she got the new face it did not make sense at all because her face wasn't damaged in the first place. Unless she did that damage herself. The writers should have addressed this issue better than they did. However I love Surbhi as Bela/Ruhi. Karishma is good but I like Surbhi more.
2) The second loophole is Bela and her dad relationship. The writers never dwelled into that properly. How did they meet, is her fake dad a naagin to, how did the proposal with Yuvi even occurred etc. The second episode just jumped right in to Yuvi and Bela engagement without showing audiences what happened and who Bela and her father was. We are now on episode 10 I think and nothing..
3) The next loophole is Yuvi. Apparently his parents don't care what happened to him and hasn't even acknowledge him since he "ran away". There are many complexities and more to show about Yuvi character. The way how the writers written him off was disappointed and even more so when his own family fails to acknowledge him in the show, Of course we as the audience know this and point it out but apparently the writers don't seem to bother which is a turn off for audiences.
4) The other loopholes are so many story arc are all over the place and they are introducing even more stories without giving closures to others. The story arc with Yuvi and his gang should have been played out more longer then bring in a few new characters.



As for character development...
1) Vish: We still don't know who Vish is other than being Ruhi friend aiding her in her revenge plot. All we can assume is we will come to know more about Vish in the future episodes and if she really is Ruhi friend or not.
2) Mahir: Not at all happy with his character development. These recent episodes are focusing on showing Mahir and Bela romance which is fine but we as an audience don't know Mahir as a character fully. I don't want Mahir to just be a love interest but I want him to have a great story arc to. Indian tv shows in my opinion always fail to give the male lead a great story arc and I hope the same doesn't happen here.
3) Andy Sehgal and Sumitra: The show has been focusing more on the leads they fail to portray the supporting cast in a better light. I believe these two characters has more to offer and should be given the screen space they deserve.


In all the show is an average for me but there is room for them to improve more. However I have my doubts because it's always about ratings more. I always say not one person makes a show but the entire cast and they need to find time to include everyone in a 1 HOUR episode. No one should be sidelined. Thank you.



The thing about bela's fake dad is not a loop hole and had already been cleared. He is her guru and a pandit of sorts, not a naagin, just like how in season 1, shivanya and shaesha had a guru. The guru is like a spiritual guide for the naag/ naagin, and in a way, is seen as a parental/ mentor figure to the naagin as these gurus seem to have formed not only strong knowledge about naags, but have great spiritual and religious knowledge that makes them respected by the shiv-worshiping naags.
Edited by sammy17 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice post and well written too
Though makers have answered a few questions like Ruhis face balas dad and Yuvi
Ruhi's face had hot scratches . They do show that in flashback. Bela's dad is Naag pandit and family tjinks Yuvi ran away with Ravi

i agree that these reasons are lame


i agree with you about things like charecter development too many charectets and rushing it


Actually if you see by Ekta show standards this is one if het better written shows otherwise most of her soups havr nothing in them

The problem with Indian shows is that makers dont believe in charecter development

They will just add charecters to drag the show



Edited by NandiniRaizadaa - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@NandiniRaizadaa Yes I agree with you, the reasons are lame that's the problem for me. I'm sure that even though Yuvi parents know he is like that still not to hear a mention of his name is unrealistic. I notice people have been saying similar things to.
As for Ruhi face when Mahir reached Yuvi and his gang and took them away and Ruhi made that declaration to avenge him her face didn't look the way in the flashback. I mean there were some scratches but it wasn't that bad. I rewatched episode 1 that's why I said that.
The characters Andy, Sumitra, Yuvi and his gang and Anu should have been developed more. They are bringing in more characters and introducing new villains. The story arc with yuvi and his friends could have carried out more because he was a compelling villain. But they might bring him back who knows.

Anyways I really love Surbhi and Anita as naagins and Pearl won my heart in the last episode. So hoping the show improves over time.
Edited by durga33 - 7 years ago

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