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sonia khanna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Congratulations

For new thread

Good one

Love it

Thanks for pm

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IMA9167

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Congo onnew story painful parts

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ns.1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Congrats for the new story. Very interesting prologue already showing pain of two souls, geet and maan. Eagerly waiting to see how they meet and own each other and their pains also. Continue soon.

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Will be waiting for you to update

I'm already intrigued by the prologue

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jeyanthi123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Congrtaz dr
Nice prologue
Update soon
Waiting

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T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: taahir004
Prologue is Intriguing

Geet feels her life is a curse and happiness is far away from her
while Maan lives in pain

I'm looking forward to reading this story too

Thanks

Let see how much pain they are facing

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T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Characters sketch

Maan Singh Khurana

He is 30 years old, his name is taken in one of the top business man. In business world he is known as MSK also he own Khurana construction (KC) and when he start working with his father in KC it's number was 15 but now it is in top 2 in Asia. He lost his parents at the age of 23 and then at the age of 27 he lost his Dadi. When he was child from that he know how this world is which is full of cruelness. He is rude, arrogant and ruthless for the world and his enemies are scared from him but he didn't care. He doesn't have anyone who he called as his as he know his relatives are just for name same as for his property as for them he is also MSK. In his dictionary there is no forgiveness who betray him also he hate those who speak lies or who speak more but didn't show any progress in their work.

Geet family

Geet Handa

She is 17 year old girl, soft spoken, scared and innocent girl. She always do what her elders say and she lost her mother at age of 8 also only get love from her mother. She is scared from her other siblings and her parents but she do what they say also get scared from all small things.

Geet parents

Geet father Mohindar who did 2 marriage, from his first marriage he had he 2 sons, he did second marriage with Geet mother Rano who was his boss only daughter so he married her without telling them that he is already married. Rano father was land lord and after his marriage with Rano he become owner of her everything Kamini who is Mohindar first wife she was also fine with her husband second marriage because after that they all become rich. Rano Handa (Sharma) Geet mother had arranged marriage with Mohindar as her father chose him for her but after their marriage in 6 months her parents had accident also that after that she came to know that she is Mohindar second wife but she can't do anything as that time she was pregnant with Geet.

Geet father and Step mother

Geet Mother (Rano)

Geet siblings

Brij he is 28 year old, he work with his father, he is truly evil as for his benefit he can kill anyone also didn't care about anyone feelings except him, also he spend many nights with girls.

Vikram is 26 year old he had every bad habit also use girls like a tissue paper also force them. For both of them Geet is just like other servants.

Kamini is Mohindar first wife from there he had 2 children which are Brij & Vikram

Rano is his second wife and Geet mother

Others sketch will be introduced in story...

Edited by T.Peru - 7 years ago

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T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Note about the story

Friends this story in future updates will be dark

And remember about Maan character he is very dark

Also didn't care about anyone

I just want to say this story will be post here

But when there will mature part

It will be on blog also it will be password protected

And password will be given to those who will comment it

Thank you..

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T.Peru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: angeldream14
intriguing
so both their life is full of pain
will they heal each other or drag each other deep down.

this songs for this story

"The Lonely"

2am; where do I begin
Crying off my face again
The silent sound of loneliness
Wants to follow me to bed

I'm the ghost of a girl that I want to be most
I'm the shell of a girl that I used to know well

Dancing slowly in an empty room
Can the lonely take the place of you?
I sing myself a quiet lullaby
Let you go and let the lonely in
To take my heart again

Too afraid to go inside
For the pain of one more loveless night
Cause the loneliness will stay with me
And hold me till I fall asleep

I'm the ghost of a girl that I want to be most
I'm the shell of a girl that I used to know well

Dancing slowly in an empty room
Can the lonely take the place of you?
I sing myself a quiet lullaby
Let you go and let the lonely in
To take my heart again

Broken pieces of
A barely breathing story
Where there once was love
Now there's only me
And the lonely

Dancing slowly in an empty room
Can the lonely take the place of you?
I sing myself a quiet lullaby
Let you go and let the lonely in
To take my heart again