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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

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Posted: 8 years ago

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A thin line

That can easily snap

A thin line

That can become eternal bond

A thin line

Between

Trust and distrust

Between

Hate and love

Between

Guru and shishya

Between

A brother and sister

Between

A king , a queen, a kingdom

Between

Life and death

She kept drawing swords

He kept drawing hearts

She persisted

He insisted

The sword bent

Her heart to him she lent.

PS: A huge thick line between a brainless channel and classic serial.

Edited by jayvenk - 8 years ago

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@Navyya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#2

Lovely ...will miss reading your poems now 😭

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Mano.M

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Posted: 8 years ago

#3

Just perfect!!

Fewer words but deeper thoughts!!👍🏼

Loved ur take on the channel🤣

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 8 years ago

#4

Beautiful Jay

Awesome lines 😊

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Bhaskar

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Posted: 8 years ago

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A thick line was awesome. I couldn't stop laughing😆

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