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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank u very much poorvika...🤗

Haaye...mere ShivLana par story likha hai finally

Pehle thanks bhol Diya ab jaake padungi...😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: UjjuSoulSisIndy
Thank u very much poorvika...🤗

Haaye...mere ShivLana par story likha hai finally

Pehle thanks bhol Diya ab jaake padungi...😆

Thank you baad mein bolna tha, Indy... Pata chale padhne laayak hi na ho yeh...😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Excellent Poorvika...👏

Ahaaa...first things first...Shivaay ki Shaadi yaha bhi peecha nahi choda🤣

Originally posted by: Rainy-Season
TS: NAFRATBAAAZI

PART 1: When Hatred Prevails

An evil smile adorned her face as she waited for the person she had called for the destruction of the Oberois.
She knew the person had the mantle of ruining the lives of the Oberois and turning it into hell. And, she was eagerly waiting for that to happen.

Roop often thought that how her blood became so venomous that she couldn't help but turn a sadist when it comes to the Oberois.

But her mind used to answer her the reasons distinctly. These Oberois separated her from her lover,separated a child from his real father, married her off to someone else, almost disowned her, sent her to jail. And, the most painful thing they did was to separate her from her son by putting him in jail. He was the only one she could call as her family and these Oberois even took him away from her. Weren't these sins enough to wish for the devastation of the Oberois. Weren't these enough to wish them to dissolve in dust. Ofcourse, they were. These were enough to decimate the clan which was once hers.

The knock on the door made her eyes gleam with the shine of victory.

"Wahi aai hogi.", she spontaneosly thought and rushed to open the door.

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Shivaay waited for Roop in her room as she had called him. Every passing second, Shivaay became more restless.

Lol...u know what...😆 by reading till this line above...I expected this is about blackmailing SSO for Shaadi with svety...😆

But tbh, I absolutely loved it...😳

Aahaa I was imagining Svety's smirk, Roop bua daanth and hairstyle, SSO's tadi Wala answers esp when he said "kaisi Sharth??"...😆 .and also the ramp walk with which svety would have entered the room when she was to be introduced as dulhan😆

This is such an awesome story...😳

Waiting for next update now eagerly...😆

But I'm guessing this story would go in some way...let's see if u have the same thoughts..😉😆

Once again thank u very much Poorvika...😳

@ujju: Meri behen, soul sister, neend see jaago...yaha dekho Shivlana ki story aagayi🥳

Edited by UjjuSoulSisIndy - 7 years ago

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292274

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rainy-Season

Thank you baad mein bolna tha, Indy... Pata chale padhne laayak hi na ho yeh...😆😆

Hahaha...no yaar...I absolutely loved it...😆

I'm doing naagin dance like this...😆

P.s. ur disclaimer in shudh hindi is superb and fantastic..😆

Shivlana ki tarah khatarnak hai...😉😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: UjjuSoulSisIndy
Excellent Poorvika...👏

Ahaaa...first things first...Shivaay ki Shaadi yaha bhi peecha nahi choda🤣

Lol...u know what...😆 by reading till this line above...I expected this is about blackmailing SSO for Shaadi with svety...😆

But tbh, I absolutely loved it...😳

Aahaa I was imagining Svety's smirk, Roop bua daanth and hairstyle, SSO's tadi Wala answers esp when he said "kaisi Sharth??"...😆 .and also the ramp walk with which svety would have entered the room when she was to be introduced as dulhan😆

This is such an awesome story...😳

Waiting for next update now eagerly...😆

But I'm guessing this story would go in some way...let's see if u have the same thoughts..😉😆

Once again thank u very much Poorvika...😳

@ujju: Meri behen, soul sister, neend see jaago...yaha dekho Shivlana ki story aagayi🥳

Oh man same to same thoughts . Really. "Kaisi shart" I really imagined with that in tadi wala accent 😆

@Poorvi it is really good 😳 no chamelis and chandanis 😆

Thank you poorvi 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: UjjuSoulSisIndy

Hahaha...no yaar...I absolutely loved it...😆

I'm doing naagin dance like this...😆

P.s. ur disclaimer in shudh hindi is superb and fantastic..😆

Shivlana ki tarah khatarnak hai...😉😆

Disclaimer was hilarious 🤣

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: UjjuSoulSisIndy
Excellent Poorvika...👏

Ahaaa...first things first...Shivaay ki Shaadi yaha bhi peecha nahi choda🤣

Lol...u know what...😆 by reading till this line above...I expected this is about blackmailing SSO for Shaadi with svety...😆

But tbh, I absolutely loved it...😳

Aahaa I was imagining Svety's smirk, Roop bua daanth and hairstyle, SSO's tadi Wala answers esp when he said "kaisi Sharth??"...😆 .and also the ramp walk with which svety would have entered the room when she was to be introduced as dulhan😆

This is such an awesome story...😳

Waiting for next update now eagerly...😆

But I'm guessing this story would go in some way...let's see if u have the same thoughts..😉😆

Once again thank u very much Poorvika...😳

@ujju: Meri behen, soul sister, neend see jaago...yaha dekho Shivlana ki story aagayi🥳

Hahahaha. Yepp, woh SSO ki kya jo shaadi ke liye blackmail na ho. And, I was fulfilling my adhoore armaan of watching Shivaay marrying to Svetlana on show. Trust me, uss episode ko dekhne ke liye, I would have broken my Vanvas mode from watching Ishqbaaaz. But, mere armaan aansuon mein beh gaye.😭😆

@bold: Hehehe... woh toh character traits hain unke. Will always accompany them. 😉😉

You are guessing something. I haven't thought of anything other than the end. What I am going to write in the second part is still unknown to me. 😛😛

Thank you for being able to read it till the end. I thought it wasn't worth reading but stiil you read. Thankoos in bulk. 🤗🤗

P.S.: Kise pata tha ki mera pehla TS ShivLana par hoga. Mujhe soch kar hi hasi aa rhi hai. 😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: UjjuSoulSisIndy

Hahaha...no yaar...I absolutely loved it...😆

I'm doing naagin dance like this...😆

P.s. ur disclaimer in shudh hindi is superb and fantastic..😆

Shivlana ki tarah khatarnak hai...😉😆

Hahahaha. Naagin dance. Lage rho.😳😳

Chalo Svetlana ne iss thread ki shobha badha di hai with this GIF. 😆😆

P.S.: Hehehe. Disclaimer is necessary while posting anything on this khatarnak jodi. 😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rainy-Season

Hahahaha. Yepp, woh SSO ki kya jo shaadi ke liye blackmail na ho. And, I was fulfilling my adhoore armaan of watching Shivaay marrying to Svetlana on show. Trust me, uss episode ko dekhne ke liye, I would have broken my Vanvas mode from watching Ishqbaaaz. But, mere armaan aansuon mein beh gaye.😭😆

@bold: Hehehe... woh toh character traits hain unke. Will always accompany them. 😉😉

You are guessing something. I haven't thought of anything other than the end. What I am going to write in the second part is still unknown to me. 😛😛

Thank you for being able to read it till the end. I thought it wasn't worth reading but stiil you read. Thankoos in bulk. 🤗🤗

P.S.: Kise pata tha ki mera pehla TS ShivLana par hoga. Mujhe soch kar hi hasi aa rhi hai. 😆😆

Trust me Poorvika...even I thought Roop would definitely use Svetlana as dulhann lol😆 .that would be awesome twist in the story.

Matlab, I know SSO ki Shaadi nahi hogi kisi aur see but still the amount of drama that would have happened with svety as dulhann would have been entertaining.😆

They should have created enough drama and then without Shaadi should have ended it..😆 but na our makers are on different tangent as always "Expect the unexpected"😆

Yes, I have something in mind abt how the story can move forward. Sach mein it would have been interesting if the track took that form but again our makers didn't take that route..😆

Anyways, I will wait and see what are your thoughts from here on this story.😳

Aww...we should thank you Poorvika for taking up our request and writing a story on Shivlana..😳 jappis for u🤗

Lol...this will be a memorable experience for you for writing your first ever TS on Shivlana - the swag&style Jodi 😆