REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 6

Wow.loved the update.waiting fr akhil's gf reaction.

Loved the first part! Can't wait until the next one =)

Maan all set to take revenge from Akil his plan of accident got successful

Lovely update 

Part 2

 

Baaki raat ko plan bana ki time to impress the Akhil's girlfriend

 

He changes his look from the nerdy middle class boy to the suave industrialist with stylish gelled hair, branded designer suit with the right fit to show off is muscular frame, designer shoes and accessories and the walk of a king all complementing his oozing handsomeness and effortless style

 

He got the flat in the same apartment as Antara (Akhil's girl-friend)

 

Antara was reversing her car in her parking lote, she was getting late for her date with Akhil

 

Achanak zor se awaaz aai kisi cheez se car lagne ki

 

She brakes immediately

 

Maan aaya bhagta hua holding a bloody tiny thing

 

M-You killed my pet! (That was just a toy in some fake blood)

 

Antara-I am sorry...I am sorry!

 

Maan ne ek look di lip tight...ankhon men gussa chalak raha

 

Agle din Antara lift mein chadi...door khula

 

Subah -Subah Maan is in his vest and track pants

 

Antara-Hi, Sorry for your dog...I really didn't mean to...

 

Maan ne total ignore maara aur kaano mein headphone laga liya

 

Antara found him intriguing. Usne dekha ki jog pe jaata hai roz. Usne ne kuch din try ki baat karne ki

 

Maan ne ignore mara

 

Maan ke liye delivery aayi...Armani suit ... 6^th floor ki jagah 7^th mein chale gaye

 

Antara ne le liya socha ki bahana mil jayega Mr dude se baat karne ka humein bhi to pata chale ki itna attitude kis baat ka hai

 

Aayi Maan ke apartment par knock kiya

 

Maan ne gate khola in crisp shirt and trouser

 

Antara-Your suit go-

 

M- Oh there it is! Wait a minute

 

Antara ko wahin chodkar gate kholkar he goes inside his room

 

She can sees the interior is tastefully and richly done...bada TV... sleek sofa and stuff

 

He comes back in a minute carrying a bunch of notes, takes the suit and hands the her the money and closes the door on her face

 

Now this is just insulting to ignore and act cold is one thing; to treat her like a delivery/laundry girl is...does she look like a frigging laundry girl!!! She is an actress!!!! And she is wearing designer clothes original designer clothes and not rip offs and how dare he insult her like this

 

Dekha ki rs 5000/- diye hain

 

She bangs the door angrily

 

Maan ne gate khola 1 min baad frowning..

 

She throws money at his feet

 

An- I am not a laundry girl!! Your stuff got delivered to MY apartment! Next time I'll just burn it

 

Keh kar mudh kar chali gai

 

Next morning

 

Antara gets this huge delivery of orchids with a simple sorry note

 

Anatara ko laga ki huh.. agaya na line par.. he is another fan of mine now

 

Incidentally raat ko club mein thi

 

Maan dikha

 

He was with a beautiful leggy girl too

 

Wo Maan ke paas gai atitude dikhane ki you are a manner less and rude person and no flowers can compensate for your behavior

 

She wanted him to grovel in person

 

Maan looks at her ki who are you...

 

M-So throw them away. You killed my pet; I don't care what you think of me or who you are

 

Kehkar He pass a charming smile to his girl

 

M-Lets go. The crowd is uncivilized here

 

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Wahan roz Maan chup chap subah apni achi gaadi mein nikalta hai; raaste mein ek badi building ke andar car parking mein switches his get up and vehicle and fir office jaata hai

 

Office mein everyone just says ki he is the new guy he is pretty uninteresting and boring and aloof too, bas apne kaam se matlab rakhta hai...kisi se baat nahi karta bakwaa naih gossip nahi koi joke nahi, koi joke mare bhi to hasta nahi jaise samajh naa aaya ho but he is polite and a hard worker

 

Udhar behcrai Geet...slavery; idhar se udhar ..udhar se idhar bhaage jaaye

 

Saare demand poore kare jaaye

 

But she likes the slavery she feel needed

 

She is always running around

 

Maan cabin mein Akhil ke saath baat karte karr raha tha when Akhil barked "Hungry!! picking up the intercomm

 

Geet bhaagke khana le aai

 

A-I am speaking to Maan, and would take notes; can't dirty my hands

 

She starts feeding him as he is busy talking

 

Maan looks at Geet ki kya bewakoof gadhi ladki hai

 

He can see the adoration in Geet's eyes for Akhil

 

Besides there is office gossip how Geet would give her life for Akhil and how he treats her lower than a Negro slave

 

There are stories...ki aesa hua tha...waisa hua tha Akhil ko and Geet did this did that...for him...

 

Akhil is a wimp too and hell moody, afraid of ghosts and dark

 

Geet would stay with him if he has to work late so that he won't be alone

 

Maan also plays small pranks

 

Akhil late kaam karke jaa raha tha beech mein light ruk gai batti gul

 

Geet peeche aa rahi thi lock karke, lift mein Akhil ke saath nahi thi

 

Jab 5 min baad lift chalu hui; Akhil bahar Geet ki worried bahon mein

 

A-I was so scarred...what if I got trapped forever in there

 

Geet dilaasa deti hai jaise 3 saal ke bachche ko samjha rahi ho

 

Maan ko mazze nahi aaye..

 

Maan ko laga ki it would be much better to take Geet away... he wouldn't be destroyed emotionally or financially but he would be helpless...like through a pampered kid out on streets and make him work

 

But Maan ke paas time and patience nahi tha ki wo Geet ko pataye

 

Ek din Maan araaha tha

Geet Akhil ke liye coffee le kar bhaag rahi thi

 

Ger di Maan par

 

G-Sorry-sorry...oh my the coffee...oh god now he won't get coffee on time

 

Geet bhaagke phir se coffee laane gai

 

Maan looked at her ki how...just how...he is at loss of words

 

He can't be himself, can't get a new shirt either, jo hai ussi mei thoda dho ponch kar kaam karta hai

 

Ussi din Akhil ne bhi bulaya kisi meeting ke liye

 

Maan ko daaanta ki dhang ke kapde pehnkar aaya karo... pay to kar raha hu main..

 

Maan ne socha ki chugli karu ki nai

 

M-Someone spilt coffee on me in the office...should I go home and change?

 

Wahin Geet aayi

 

G- Akhil sorry-sorry wo coffe gir gai thi tumahri...I am late...ye lo

 

Akhil tells Geet ki

 

A-You are becoming so clumsy these days. Thoda to dhayan se kaam kara karo aur Mr Singh ke liye ek shirt order kar do. He can't work in this

 

Geet ko gussa aaya ki meri chugli kar di...chugalkhor kahika... kuch pait mein nai pachta

 

She asks ki kya size hai tumahra

 

Maan ne bataya ki kya hai

 

She smiles veryyy sweetly

 

Adhe ghante baad she walks into his office and drops a paper bag on his table on top of papers he was working on 

Nice update..

Nice part. So finally Maan started his mission to get Akhil's girl friend. N I guess she is already behind Maan now. Geet is completely mad for Akhil. She handles him like he is some kind of fragile thing. Waiting for next dear 

Revenge is one at a whole other level. Seems like he really is playing his game well and no one is aware at all. Poor Geet is going to be stuck.

great update! superbly written!