MEEVAN TS : TERI MERI LOVE STORY

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Happy sunday everyone ,
Here comes another piece from me plz like , and comment so i know where to improve

CHAPTER - 1
THODHA PYAAR THODHI TAKRAAR
Kapoor's house
( two ladies fighting)
Mrs kapoor : aacha tu meine jaan k apki gadi thoki
Haye rabba
Mrs dhingra interrupting
Oye zyaada na hoshiyaar banan di lodh nai hai meine khud dekhatune kadhe kadhe hamari gadi thoki
Mrs kapoor : haa haa subah subah tu mujhe yahi kaam hai itni problem.hai na tu chale jao na (shouting)
Mrs dhingra: jaye meri jutti kiraya dete hai hum asa kaise chale jaye
On Road
Two random people talking
Lo ji ho gai savare ik din asa nai hai jab yaha kutta kani( ladai) ni hoti
Chado ji sanu ki dono hi sadiya hai

It was daily routine in kapoor house . Every morning mrs kapoor and mrs dhingra used to fight for some or the other reason but nobody understood why after so much fighting dhingras were staying as tenants in kapoor house
Mrs dhingra : tujhe thokna ka bada shaunk hai na ruk
Amongst their fight a small boy came to meera and small girl came to vivaan
Manu: Bua! Bua
Meera ( sleepy voice) manu yaar sone de na
Manu: bua yaar vaha dadi aur kapoor aunty ki ladai ho rahi hai
Meera : ye to roz ka hai na ja na sone de

Vivaan's room
Suhu: mamu ! Mamu!
Vivaan was working
Vivaan: kya hua kya hua
Suhu: o ho mamu pe gaya siyaapa aaj tu na world war vali ladai hai
Naani ne na dhingra aunty ki car ke head light thod de
Vivaan shocked and rushed hurridily to stop fight
Meera' s room
Manu: o ho bua dadi ki car
Hearing the word car she got up with the jerk and hurrudly ran downstairs to stop fight
Meera blabeering to herself
O ho aaj tu tsunami aa jani hai mata shri ki car ko tu hum itna bachate hai
Aaj to kapoors gaye
Kapoor portion living room
Mrs dhingra:tujhe todhne ka vada shaunk hai an rukh
She picked up vase close to her
Mrs kapoor: dekh dolly ye vase ni kuch bhi bus ye vase nai
Mrs dhingra ( sly smirk) threw the vase
The fight of the ladies escalated
Vivaan and meera reached and saw each other with anger
They both pulled their mothers apart
And both started fighting
Vivaan : tum logo ki problem kya hai kyu baar baar jagda karte ho bloody middle class
Meera : oye amiro k raja tum itni tichi harkatan kyu karte hai
( with swag ) kiraya daar hai magar izaat se varna ( showing finger)
Vivaan : ( irritated mode) varna kya ha aur ye ungli na neeche karo varna
Meera: nai karungi ja
Chalo mumma inke muh lagne ki zaroorat nai hai subah subah mood kharab kar diya
Vivaan : yes mom hum kyu inke mu lag kar apna mood kharab kare we have a class
Meera with dolly dhingra went to their portion giving vivaan angry glare
Both started making their mothers understand not to fight but as usual it was going to meet deaf ear
LATER THAT DAY
Meera' room
Meera was reading when she suddenly heard sound coming from her window
She got up and checked , there she saw cute handsome guy was struggling to climb the window
Meera smirked
Boy : oye hasna baad mein hath to de
Meera : mein kyu do aur tu pagal hai kisi ne dekh liya na tu heer ranjha banana padhega
Boy : yaar plz na hath to de upar to ane de
Meera turned and crossed her hands
Meera( full attitude) tera mu to bahut chal raha tha na latka reh
Boy : oye meri sherni dekh to sahi mein tere liye kya leke aaya
Meera ( smelling something)
With smile
Meera : aye hai meere ranjha tu mere liye kheer baana k leke aaya tu pehle kyu ni bola
She gave him her hand and pulled him into her room
Boy : tu na kitni bukhad hai
Meera : oye mr vivaan kapoor meri vajah se na tere khaane ki demand hai le ab de
She tried snatching the box full of kheer but vivaan to irritate her tried to resist. As a result they fell on bed
Vivaan : sorry yaar kuch zyaada hi bol diya subah
Meera: me too . Yaar vivaan mummiya to ladhti hi bahut hai aaj to shukar hai papa log ghar mein nai hai
Varna
Vivaan kissed meera's forehead
Tu na tension mat le aur le kha apni kheer bukhad
Meera face lit up seeing the kheer and she started eating making yummy voices
Vivaan was smiling seeing her like this . He was so in love with his food monster
Meera noticed : oye meri bukh ko nazar na laga
Jab jab tu mujhe khaana dega tab tab mera pyaar payaga
Vivaan : aacha ji
He pulled pillow and soon their sweet bantering and pillow fight continued
They both were so tired of hiding their love and faking hate
Soon they heard footsteps approaching meera' s roo
Both looked at each other with shock and fear


Plz guys do tell if you want me to continue and anything you would like me to change
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AMAZING!! What happens next? I really want to know now? Continue soon!!

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wow nice update
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This is really good! Next update pleaseee! 😆
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I am loving this plot yaar!! Do continue!

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