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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame.
Just read this.
Different from the show. Sad but a really nice one :)
Keep writing.

Thank You I am glad that you liked it

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Santiago24

@Santiago24

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Posted: 7 years ago

I did a double take when i realised that she had died.. nice OS but the sad ending 😭

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Jasleen Atwal

@jasleen77

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Posted: 7 years ago

It was just perfect! But why did you make the ending so sad! Zoya and Adi's bond, their love and care for each other, everything was just perfect! And the heartbreak at the end, where he finished her unfinished thoughts with his own, joining both of the together for life... It broke my heart. I was honestly left in tears after this one! Please don't make the next one this sad! :)

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

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Posted: 7 years ago

I wish it was a HEA. 😭

My heart broke with the way you've portrayed their pain. 💔 👏

It was beautiful.

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Khushi

@Happiness514

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Posted: 7 years ago

Great one.. thanks for the pm else i would have missed such a beautiful story..do write more..

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Pori

@Pori

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Posted: 7 years ago

beautiful OS

but a sad ending😭

i loved the poems, inclined to ask, did you write them?

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