Arshi FF:An Unforgettable Night #2 COMPLETE NEW FF

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c85rie

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Posted: 8 years ago

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A very beautiful story. I never saw the twists coming. It was a very emotional story. I felt the pain, the numbness, the hope of both Arnav and Khushi.

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J P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

I've read this before. But, I couldn't help myself from re - reading it and I have no regrets.

Such a lovely story you've penned down. Just too good.

Brilliant work man. Emotions in tact and story at a pace that's actually possible and realistic.

Just brilliant.

Cheers

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Savera84

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Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Wonderfully written story.

I read it in one go.

The twist was painful but understandable.

Shyam in the show had glimpses of this trait. So, this is also possible.

By giving it a happy ending, you proved that nothing should affect the love they feel for each other. It is Arshi hamesha.

PS: I think to bookmark it, I posted a comment a while ago after reading prologue and last chapter. Then must have wandered off knowing that I can always come back to this story.

Cheers...

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Sandya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#234

This was a beautiful story, Rose.

I loved how you brought the gangster with the heart of gold, alive. He reminded me of Nayakan(Tamil movie-if you have watched it, you would know)

And Khushi!! I can't imagine the pain she must have been in. When I read the prologue, I thought you were talking about Arnav but after reading the story, I realized how difficult it must have been for Khushi. The man she had unknowingly fallen in love with had fallen in love with her sister!!! The first few months of her marriage must have been pure torture for her! And even after she comes to know that her love and husband had feelings for her, she felt unworthy of reciprocating.

More than the physical pain it is the mental pain that takes forever to fade. I am just glad that she was finally able to overcome her insecurities.

I really liked it.