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Posted: 7 years ago
Haww!!😲
Geet is android..
Maan asked her out & they are on date now..
Very interesting update..
Especially the last part where she said about them meeting again at the same spot..
You know this story is giving me Terminator movie wali feeling..

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Posted: 7 years ago
aww so sweet...maan very accepting of her inspite of her drawbacks...half human...hardly have heard of this concept before...interesitng...waiting to see what happens next...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Maan like Geet
But Geet is mystery
She also went with him
& seems happy
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting..

Thanks for the pm..

Thanks for the update..

Continue soon...

Maan came to know more about geet ...
He met her father... Who told him about her ...

She is an Android...
He informed his family about his date , Was surprised to know they knew about geet ... They all celebrated...
They both went on a date ...

She told that , this is the place where he will meet her again...

Now what does that mean...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Geet's father revealed about geet being nt a robot but human with a Android heart .n think herself as a robot
Maan ask frm Geet's father to take her out was lovely
Maan's informed his family about going to date with geet ..much to his surprise they already knew about his liking towards geet n they were happy fr both
Maaneet on date ...maan was happy seeing geet smiling
Waiting for nxt

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful update Buddy:):):) Loved it a lot...But am super curious about Maan's future that is making Geet very sad...And she said this is where you will meet me again? What is going to happen? Is it bad? I am hoping not pls buddy...Don't make Maaneet sad na...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Please update Part 3, thanks



I will b updating soon, I'm extremely sorry for these delays 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you for your support 😃

I apologize for the delay actually had a writer's block regarding this one but now I have revised the storyline and it will end in the next part like I planned








Part 3









Heartbreak



"This is the place where we will meet again, She smiled. "What do you mean by that, I asked. "If I'm ever lost ...and you want to find me...come find me here, She said. Before I could ask anything further I saw a flash of something coming towards me. "Sir..., She called and in a moment I was saved by her. "Did you ...teleport..., I asked amazed. "Y..Yes Sir, it is one of my powers, She said.



"Thank you Geet for saving me, I smiled. "Sir, there is a danger lurking around you, She said. "Danger...from whom or what ?, I asked confused. "Sir, no matter what, I will protect you, She said determined not answering my previous question. "Geet, why do you want to protect me, I asked. "Sir, all your queries will be answered...but not now, She said. I did not ask any further questions from her. I dropped her home and found her dad waiting for her.








"So did you enjoy, He asked Geet. "Yes father, She smiled. "Good now go inside and rest awhile dear, He said. "Thank you Maan, I'm happy that you made her smile, He said once turning to me. "I'm the one who should be thankful Sir, she saved my life, I said narrating what happened back there. Her father listened attentively. "I think he was right when he said only Geet could protect you, He said. "Who...Sir, I asked. "You ...from a different future...or should I say another universe...the one who created her is you, He said shocking me. "Me...but Sir I haven't created anything as of now...I think you might be mistaken, I said. "Follow me, He said leading me into a door other than the main one. I saw a huge laboratory there and many Robots working on them. I was amazed seeing such inventions. "Did you like them, He asked. "This is amazing Sir, I said. "I created all of them, but I have not shown them to the outside world yet, He said. "Why sir..., I asked. "Because they are not ready yet, He said. Looking at my curious face he further continued, "The world today is full of people who want to be in control of the world ...these will only be useful if they are in the right hands but if they fall in the wrong ones it may lead to destruction, He explained.




I walked with him to come to a different room. I looked around to see pictures of Geet along with me... "This is her room, Her dad said. "Is that ...me, I asked. "Yes...it is you, He said. "When did we take these...I don't recall meeting her, I said. "6 years back ...she did meet you when she accidentally came here using time travel from her world, He said. "Why don't I remember her then, I asked confused. "Your memories were erased that is why, He answered. "Erased..., I asked. "Yes...erased...by her as she was sad when she had to leave you, He told. "Why..., I asked. "As it was not the time for you to meet her...Let me explain to you something Maan ...Let us assume a situation A where a person meets the other and then lives on without meeting them again ...their life will be different in that situation ...Now think about a situation B where that lonely person makes a humanoid artificial intelligence version of that missing person to help the past them meet that person and write a new future. The future changes in both the cases. Your future depends on whether you fight or you give up, the same person may face two different futures in the same time line, He explained.





"I understand Professor but what does it has to do with me and Geet, I asked. "The you in the different future could not find that girl whom he met during his college days but he remembered her and he made a version of her to meet you so you could write a happy future for the two of you which he couldn't, He said. "You mean to say that he wants me to help Geet ...for our future together, I asked. "You will be meeting Geet again ...so don't give up if you ever lose her too is all I can for now, He smiled. "Thank you Sir...I will never let go, I said determined not wanting to waste the efforts the future me did for the current me.




Days passed and with each day I fell for Geet more. It had been four months now since she has been working for me..I decided to finally propose to her today. I felt nervous but excited at the same time. I don't know if she would accept me or not but I still wanted to try. Geet walked into the restaurant where I had arranged everything for us. I walked up to her and got down on my knees.






"Geet...I know this might be unexpected for you but I really love you ...and will promise to remain with you till eternity, please will you marry me, I asked. She was surprised but then I saw tears in her eyes... "I'm sorry... "It is alright Geet, I tried to cover my tears with a smile not wanting her to feel bad.






"I'm sorry Sir though I want to accept you but ...our future is uncertain, She said sadly. "Geet we can rewrite a future the way we want it to be, I said. "Sir ...I.., Before she could complete there was another attack and I barely dodged it injuring my arm but I looked ahead to see why I could dodge it ...Geet risked her life again ...




So here is the next part, please do give your honest reviews


Precap- Last Part
Edited by pixelflower620 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Buddy didn't d I miss any part
Because I didn't feel connected

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