Samaina FF :||Falling in love in another time || teaser updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello friends this is shagun with my first fan fiction on samaina I hope you like the teaser .Happy reading 😊
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The time stopped for naina her little world was being shattered how can it be possible it was destined for sunaina to be a time traveller then how can she travel in time ?? How can the predictions which was done 100 years back gone wrong? How can it be possible...All these thoughts were making their way in her little brain and she was too shocked to even cry .She know sitting in the washroom in the very first period was wrong .But she dont have any option what if she went to her class and from no where again she travelled back in time ?No No it cannot happen she dont want everyone to think that she is an alien or a ghost.

How much she hope that a miracle happen and that swati come to washroom .She is the only one who would have the solution of this problem. " Naina a voice boomed in her ears and when she turned her face to see the owner of the words she saw swati her best friend standing all shocked seeing her in a miserable condition."Naina what are you doing here I thought you were absent and why are you crying is everything fine?"swati boomed her with questions.."swa..swati I ..I dont know how it happened ..I have no idea where it is going to head me" naina said between her hiccups "What happened naina? swati asked anxiously .."Swati I travelled in time" and she broke to tears .Swati was hell shocked but she know she need to handle naina with care there is no time for her getting shocked she cupped naina's face and wiped her tears . "Naina tell me how did it happen ? Tell me from starting" Naina nodded her head and started "It all started from yesterday when nanny told me to bring vegetables from the market and when I stepped out of the house just few steps away and I dont know but I was pulled ,my whole body was getting on to other land in the the other world and swati I landed just at the same place where I was but the time was changed I was lying on the road with the bag that nanny gave me and the people around were gawking at me as they have seen a ghost and when I stopped a couple to ask which year it is they gave me a look and went away after what seems like eternity I was again travelled back to my house same time same year ...


So guys how was the teaser ..should I continue?

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suhaaniladki thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ok frankly speaking m little confused but still very different concept ... Would love to read further ...pls continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Btw i think you are new to this forum .. welcome shagun ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey a very interesting twist! I want to read further. Reminds me of the movie Baar Baar Dekho...which contrary to popular opinion, I loved! Do continue soon!
Btw...welcome to the forum!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shagun is that you?? The same "letter" wala Shagun...? 😊 Did you change your username??

About the teaser... It's well phrased but at the same time left me in confusion... I would like to think that this means the story would be great... because your teaser didn't give us an idea of the plot line... I am interested to read more... Please continue. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Ok frankly speaking m little confused but still very different concept ... Would love to read further ...pls continue soon

I know the teaser is very confusing but with time the mysteries would be revealed 😃
Btw suhani you forget me easily weekend activity yaad hai sixteen again??😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hey a very interesting twist! I want to read further. Reminds me of the movie Baar Baar Dekho...which contrary to popular opinion, I loved! Do continue soon!

Btw...welcome to the forum!!

Thanks surbhi 😳
I have not seen baar baar dekho but if time permits I would love to see it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: moumita04

Shagun is that you?? The same "letter" wala Shagun...? 😊 Did you change your username??


About the teaser... It's well phrased but at the same time left me in confusion... I would like to think that this means the story would be great... because your teaser didn't give us an idea of the plot line... I am interested to read more... Please continue. 😳

Haan mou I have changed my username vaise mujhe tumse tumhari lovestory ki link chahiye thi I was trying to ask you from 1 month but then I always forget asking you

Thanks for your feedback I know my teaser has left you in confusion but I think a prologue will help clearing all your confusions😉

Will comeback soon with my prologue😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kangana_11

I know the teaser is very confusing but with time the mysteries would be revealed 😃
Btw suhani you forget me easily weekend activity yaad hai sixteen again??😉

Oh so u changed your username 😆 ... I got confused
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Oh so u changed your username 😆 ... I got confused

No problem it happens .😆

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