Adiya ....Untitled

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I have been an inactive IF member since long... And i have no idea what I am doing now...But..I am trying to write something...I don't know what am I about to do... I have no idea whether I am gonna write this as an OS, SS or FF...or just some crap which I think... Please read through this patiently and suggest me something if it is okay ...Point out my mistakes, please...


Zoya...that one and only person who can make him go crazy to his extremes...She was not his type...In fact, he hated such women who are too naive, who are too weak and who are too selfless... because...they remind him of his mother..

Anjana was the most caring mother any child could be bestowed with. He loved her. He even used to be the typical Mamma's Lil Boy in his childhood. His mornings started with her hugs and evenings, he used to spend lying on her lap, narrating the events of the day. He loved his mom to the moon and back. But then, everything changed.

He was twelve when she started sending him along with his brother Arjun to Sakshi Aunty's house. And this happened every single day. In the beginning, he used to be happy that he gets to play with his brother and his best friend. Then, he started to miss her and one day, he came early from Sakshi Aunty's house to surprise her. He had got first prize in triathlon his school had conducted that year. What awaited him in their home was something altogether a different scene than what he had expected. His parents were fighting.Truth to be told, it was only his father fighting. His mom was listening to everything his father shouted at her, crying. They didn't notice him. Once his father went away, he ran to his mom hugging her. He was angry at his father for shouting at his mom. His mom had calmed him down telling that it's nothing to be worried upon and that married couples get into such fights often as more the love between two people, more they fight.

He believed her again. But only when he was sixteen, he noticed how his father used to demean his mom at every chance he got. He started knowing and understanding certain things which he failed to do before. Then, one day his father came drunk to their house bringing another woman. And again, she didn't believe that her husband was cheating on her. She pleaded to him, asking him to stop this prank. But Mr.Harsh Hooda just have a smile, asking her to stop her drama as nothing can stop him from doing what he wanted. That's when my mother should have left him, applying for a divorce.

She didn't. The other woman had left when there started a war of words between me and Mr.Hooda. My mom, instead of supporting me sent me to my room that night. Next morning, everything seemed to be alright. It was like last night never happened. She had created a beautiful illusion of a happy family and she still continues to live in one such illusion...

This is the reason why Adi became Aditya Hooda in his own house. The child in him never entertained Mr.and Mrs. Hooda as his audience. He hated cheaters like Mr.Hooda. More than his hatred for him, he hated spineless woman like his mom who don't stand up for themselves and are too naive.
He hated Pooja for cheating on him...But he hated Zoya more. Not just because she reminds him of how his wife cheated on him. But because of the reason she is like his mom...

Aditya Hooda hates Zoya Siddiqui
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow this sounds intense...and beautifully written. YOu have a way with words so please continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you..will continue soon
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Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

Wow this sounds intense...and beautifully written. YOu have a way with words so please continue.

Thank You so much!! Will continue soon

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