Adiya OS- My friend

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Zoya and Aditya are exhausted after running for long. Now they were in a jungle trying to locate a safe spot to spend the night. Finally they reach an old dilapidated Shiva temple.

" It's bit rusty. But I guess we can spend the night here Zoya," tells Adi.

Zoya sees the idol covered with leaves and she goes to clean it asking Aditya to help her.

" Zoya this place is only good to sleep. You are not going to get anything by doing God's seva. Sleep. Tomorrow early morning we have to find some way to reach out to Mr Hooda."

" Aditya this is a place of worship. Maybe not belonging to my religion. But I have been taught by parents to respect all faiths. You sleep. Let me clean this idol. "

Aditya keeps his hand on the head and goes to help her. Together they clean the idol and Zoya pays reverance. Aditya looks on. Once she opens her eyes he asks after getting a cheater husband and again getting cheated at multiple levels does she believe in any God.

" Aditya if you truly believe God never keeps you in darkness."

" Zoya do you have any proof if he listens to you."

" Yes, you are the proof that he listens to me. When I had nothing you held my hand. For me it is as if God has sent me a friend understanding my plight."

Zoya smiles as she moves to corner and Aditya first looks stunned at her and then at the idol and slowly moves to opposite corner pondering over what Zoya said.

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AuthorSneha thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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BeautifulšŸ¤—
Well explained the stark difference btwn both Zoya n Adi's characters and their faith in God
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Zoya and Aditya are exhausted after running for long. Now they were in a jungle trying to locate a safe spot to spend the night. Finally they reach an old dilapidated Shiva temple.

" It's bit rusty. But I guess we can spend the night here Zoya," tells Adi.

Zoya sees the idol covered with leaves and she goes to clean it asking Aditya to help her.

" Zoya this place is only good to sleep. You are not going to get anything by doing God's seva. Sleep. Tomorrow early morning we have to find some way to reach out to Mr Hooda."

" Aditya this is a place of worship. Maybe not belonging to my religion. But I have been taught by parents to respect all faiths. You sleep. Let me clean this idol. "

Aditya keeps his hand on the head and goes to help her. Together they clean the idol and Zoya pays reverance. Aditya looks on. Once she opens her eyes he asks after getting a cheater husband and again getting cheated at multiple levels does she believe in any God.

" Aditya if you truly believe God never keeps you in darkness."

" Zoya do you have any proof if he listens to you."

" Yes, you are the proof that he listens to me. When I had nothing you held my hand. For me it is as if God has sent me a friend understanding my plight."

Zoya smiles as she moves to corner and Aditya first looks stunned at her and then at the idol and slowly moves to opposite corner pondering over what Zoya said.


Aww that was so cute but short😳
Love OS
Shruti I really loves your work be analysis or anything
This is short OS but really meaningful
I want to learn from you how you get so meaningful things
Continue your work and take it new height
God bless youšŸ¤—
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Rabia. You are always welcome to learn things from whatever I write. Infact I had 2 such girls in Siya Ke Ram forum. Today both of them write quite well, their independent analysis.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Thanks Rabia. You are always welcome to learn things from whatever I write. Infact I had 2 such girls in Siya Ke Ram forum. Today both of them write quite well, their independent analysis.


Thank-you and I really loves to learn from you and always will be thankful to you😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely n meaningful os.. bt it ws very short, pls write such os more n lil longer ones.. 😳 this os shows how well u have caught hold of the characters personality n traits😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rabialuvsadiya


Thank-you and I really loves to learn from you and always will be thankful to you😳

Rabu loves maska maaroingšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SnehaDoll

Rabu loves maska maaroingšŸ˜‰


Snehu ye Sach nahi h😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sneha let her do maska marroing šŸ˜†šŸ˜†.
Thanks geet. I will try to write longer OS as I get more grip on them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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short n cute
loved the last part very much

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