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Hay !! Please don't feel disheartened ..I seriously love your story... It has all the ingredients needed to make a story interesting and engaging
The way you have crafted Sameer's character is out of my reach ..what is with this man ..its sooo difficult to understand me
Vishakha Sameer's conversation was the highlight
I might be wrong but I feel their is something which he don't know
I felt Sameer's pain .. Addressing your mother as Mrs Maheshwari itself says it all .. He is lonely to another level and to cover his inner broken self he has build this stiff wall around himself .. It will be so interesting to see his character growth
Just like Naina Sameer amused me also all the time
The little conversation they had in the office was my favorite from the entire update..
Was she feeling jealous seeing the ladies ogling at her husband ..well that's nice
I'm not getting good vibes from that Mr Suxena but we don't need to fear when Sameer is here
I font know why I'm feeling that this party is going to be somewhat a turning point in their story
Waiting for the next part ...you left it at such a crucial point
I really appreciate your efforts for this story ..its worth praising
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