AdiYA OS -II-Love that Consumes-II-

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Wonderful update

It was beyond wonderful..

awesome update yar

It was beautiful Mariam!

Hey sumiya, this OS is written beautifully. Every emotion, pain, misery Adiya are going through or anyone in their situation, is phrased beautifully.
I loved the poetry u added in OS, lovely words.
I loved every bit of the story, esp. mother son moment. Adi needs his mom, he'll realize sooner or later. THANKS for the PM dear. Lovely reading this.

Keep writing more. Ur writing is magical in describing emotions to words.

You've done a great job collaborating the emotions of Adi & Zoya together & could totally relate to what Adi was saying. Though Pooja seemed to be in love with Adi & all her allegations, accusations were for him & the caring quotient too but she loved someone else Zoya obviously does realize the situation of his life & as in the show, you've portrayed their sorrow beautifully. Thanks for the pm & this was so soothing, if I may end my comment on a fine note 😊

It so so so beautiful ❤️ 😭 I really want something like this to happen in the show.. like really really!

This one made me emotional! You have written it beautifully and the way you've described their pain... One can easily feel those things while reading this! 👏