(MG-SS)REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE SEASON 5(BETRAYED)TH#7PART 47/PG 74(June 22 - Page 20

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mitu-

coming after many days and read couple of parts together ...

I loved the way truth come out throught geet demand of sasha working under her is littlw bit childish but I m enjoying it ... as its perfectly go with geet innocent bubbly mischief nature ... Maan was always there to save her from sasha n her bad intentions... Maya nad maan bondind is like eyc candy throught I love to see payal n visual n maya as family but i dont think payal is going to be back ... maya is going to be their part i think ...


dii plz plz right bossy maan ... so many days went no one writing original akroo maan in office like few starting episode of ghsp or u can start a new story qith original maan


welcome back sweets... Thanks for the views...

Ahh For that, you gotta wait and read RM Season 6... Shall start as soon as RM Season 5 gets a closure... 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: piya27

Wow awesome update yaar

Nice and interesting part


Hmm, thank you dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 44

Geet and Maan have reached home only to be welcomed by Maya, who came running to her Maan Uncle and he took her in his arms in no time... forgetting all the tiredness of his work...Geet looked and adored the bond...Sometimes Geet really missed Payal Di, seeing Maya...But, she never felt sad coz she had Maan and Geet with her...as her guardians...as her parents... They have adopted Maya legally after Payal's death...

But Vishal was left all alone to sulk in the sorrow...He still was Geet's bodyguard...and living in mansion, still was Maya's best buddy but he couldn't really share his tears with anyone, Geet tried to be his friend and share his pain but he only tried to be strong in front of her and this was breaking him slowly...That was when Pari entered again in their lives and found him, her crush...and her hopes again went high...

But Geet told her everything and her crush for him become more strong...developed to love...She became good friends with him in no time and Vishal too started to become normal like when he was with Payal...yet he couldn't stop retorting back at her for troubling him...But, Pari never minded his harshness for she has started to love him more...

So here they were, again arguing with each other...One glare from Maan, and Vishal was back to his soberness... Geet tried to suppress her giggle as the guy who was fighting with her bestie like a kid now was in BG avatar...

Vishal:- Good Evening, Master...Ma'am...

Geet(sighed):- How many times I will have to tell you, you are a part of my family...

Maan(completely ignored the talks and was interested in Maya):-Let's go Maya, brought chocos for you...Let's have them...

Maya:- wow... yes yes...

With that Geet saw Maan and Maya, had left them alone and she turned to Vishal and Pari...Her haze went from Vishal and ended at Pari...

Pari:- What??? I didn't do anything...He started the fight...

Vishal:- Oh come on Pari, stop lying... I didn't...You started...(Geet smiled he was being himself at least not hiding that from her)

Pari:- I started??? Really???

Vishal:- Yes, you did...

Geet:- Both of you, keep quiet...Let's have some peace???

Vishal glared at Pari and turned his attention to Geet, offered her a glass of water that she took with a weak smile...

Vishal:- What happened Geet??? Are you okhh???

Pari:- Just now you called her Ma'am and now Geet???

Vishal(explained):- In front of my Master, she is Ma'am...But, when he is not near,(he looked around instinctively) we are friends...

Geet(smiled):- Pari yaar, can you make coffee for me??? Am really tired...

Pari:-Sure...

With that she was gone...with a smile on her face, Geet noticed as Vishal stared her way till she was off his sight, and that was when Geet commented...

Geet:- You like her now, don't you??(Vishal looked back at Geet in Q)Why don't you accept...Why do you fight with her...

Vishal(sighed and smiled):- It's a nice feeling to fight with someone like this...(He looked at her and then added) just like, you were fighting with Master today at office...No???

Geet(was taken aback):- How do you know??? And by the way, I wasn't fighting... was just....(She stopped abruptly and Vishal smirked)

Vishal:- Was just what???

Geet:- Hey, I know where you want to take me with this confusing talks...Don't change the topic we are discussing...(Vishal looked away and nodded) Give yourself a chance...Give her a chance...You know she is in love with you and I think you too are being nice with her and being friendly...And good thing is, she knows the past...When I look at you, I really feel bad for you...She is gone, she won't be back but you are alive...Sooner or later you will have to forget her...and ...(She placed her hand on his arm)Vishal move on plz...

Vishal:- I will try Geet... I will ...

Geet(still tried to convince him):- She is perfect for you... Do think abt her and...your happiness too...

Vishal:- Thanks Geet for your concern... I was appointed to take care of you as your BG but now, you are behaving as a big sister to me... and I certainly can't deny you...

Geet:- So, shall I tell her, it's a yes from you??? (Suddenly Geet quizzed and waited for his reply)

Vishal(smiled and nodded at her):- As you wish...

With that word leaving his mouth there was a loud noise of something...and turning around they both found Pari sitting on floor, with the coffee spilled around the place...She was happily crying...Vishal shook his head at Geet,looking at the dramatic side of Pari and Geet shrugged...

Geet(whispered):- Well, sometimes, she's a bit clumsy...

Vishal(whispered back before he headed to help Pari):- Actually she always is...

~~~

Next day,

Geet saw as Sasha was applying a bit more makeup on her face, coz she was going out with Maan for site seeing...and she hated the smirk, Sasha passed at her while crossing her...Geet only glared her and was turning to go back when Maan came out from his cabin, all ready to go...Their eyes met and Maan's eyes softened looking at her, with a smile ...

Maan:- Geet, are you free??? Wanna take you out for site visit...

Geet(s eyes beamed and her heart jumped in happiness):- Sure, why not...Am all free...

Sasha(tried to intervene):- But MK..Who will look after office matters here???

Maan:- You are forgetting, Geet is the owner of KC, and not some staff... and abt work, I don't have to worry coz you are going to look after everything here till we are back...

Sasha:- What??? But, am coming with you...

Maan:- Who said??? Did I tell you that you are coming???

Sasha:- But, am the Head Architect...You will need me there...

Maan:- Yes, you are the head architect but I don't think, I need a HEAD architect there... A simple architect will be sufficient...and MY WIFE can take notes as well...So am taking Adi with me...You stay here and look after office matters...

Sasha(still argued, seething in anger and embarrassment):- That's injustice...You are being partial MK...

Maan:- I think, am still being so nice with you even after what you have done Sasha...Am just letting you work in here for Geet's sake, coz she is against of firing you...if it was in my hands I would have threw you outta here long back... So, be in your limits and be happy, whatever you are left with...(He was angry and in his anger, he shouted Adi's name, who was delaying their exit from there)

Adi(came running to Maan):- Yesss...Sssirrr... (He fumbled and Geet instantly felt for him)

Maan:- Where were you??? Don't you know, we are getting late???

Adi:- Righttt Sirrr...Sorrryyy Sssirr...

Maan glared him as Adi tried to get away from his angry Boss...Geet came as his savior and circling her arms around Maan's arm, she made him walk with her...not before passing a smile and a look at Sasha's way...Though, she has felt bad for Maan outburst at her but she deserved that, she concluded and left with her Maan all happy...

Well, Sasha wasn't going to take this insult lightly, but she has to since everyone was aware of her deeds and Maan was doubly conscious of her moves, she couldn't have done anything to Geet... 6 months ...and Sasha still was trying to vow him, yet was unsuccessful...and there were many reasons... She remembered his warning in the initial days to stay away from harming Geet in any manner else he would not hesitate to get her jailed for things she has done in past and for what she hasn't...Thus, her aim shifted from side lining Geet to vowing Maan... But she has failed to make an impression of her on him in these months of going out with him on sites...and today, she has lost her cool...

Sasha was throwing everything in her cabin, lashing her anger ...her failure on poor objects...Naina was seeing her with a sigh and smile, she knew the reasons of her anger, her frustration...But, she also knew no one stood a chance against Maan and Geet...Coz they were really ideal couple...Matched each other in all senses and no one could come in between them...So she kept her hand on Sasha's shoulder who glared her...

Naina:- No use Sasha Ma'am, they are meant to be together...

Sasha:- No, MK is mine...That Geet has come in between us... If she wasn't here for her internship, then today I would have been his wife... His love...I was so close of winning his trust and love...But, she entered and ruined everything ...

Naina:- Don't you know, they were married before Geet joined as an internee... and no one knew of their marriage...

Sasha:- I don't know anything I just want him...

Naina:- He is not yours...He can never look at you, the way he looks at Geet...

Sasha heard her and nodded, true...He never looked at her the way she wanted him to look at...instead he even ignored her whenever Geet was in picture ...And this realization doubled her hatred for Geet...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Teaser

Geet was getting bored now...patting Sasha on her shoulders virtually as she was a perfect for the post of head architect while Geet only tried to not to cry out being there for hrs, where Maan seemed totally lost in site,discussing with Adi leaving her to explore the area...And the typical girl she was, she got bored in no time thus praising Sasha in her mind for being so dedicative towards her work...only if she wasn't having a bad eye on her husband, she would never have wished to accompany Maan...And now, she was contemplating to not to throw her outta KC, coz she was the best...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Payal died
Geet and Maan adopted maya
They all are happy
Sasha is trying to vow Maan
But all get in vain
Vishal and Pari like each other
Thank for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh payal passed awayand so nice to read about Vishal and Pari good one

Looking forward for some romance in major couple please do right it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome part...maan done right thing but hope sasha dont do anything to separate them and liked teaser geet is so nice and appreciate sasha work
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely. So sweet the way geet made vishal accept Parim talking to him and kinda convincing him. Interesting how vishal calls her ma'am in front of maan and geet otherwise. So cute their relationship

Wonder what is going to happen between Sasha and geet. Crazy right how geet is praising Sasha in her mind for her dedication haha
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Posted: 7 years ago
WOW AWESOME UPDATE VISHAL AND PARI ARE CONFESSED AND LOVING SOON BUT THIS SASHA IS REAL DEVIL HOPE SHE WILL OUT OF THEIR LIVES

TEASER IS NICE
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ho ho payal died...Maya was adopted by maaneet
Vishal was the one who was most affected but pari look after him..
Vishal too was in love with pari
Geet was sulking seeing Sasha going with maan but maan asked geet to accompany leaving Sasha behind which made her burn...
Maan yet again put her on her place..But this dump head was still hating geet she thinks maan loves her and all...
Waha Sasha is cursing geet and geet is praising Sasha in mind...He he he

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