Udaan - bridal Swap - What if... TS COMPLETE

Hi

I know I haven't updated anything for a long time

Imli makes the bridal swap

So it's a double treat first OS will be by Imli n second part will be by Chakor swap.
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The story starts a bit different Suraj is ready to marry Imli! As he has started to fall for her but Imli isn't interested anymore as Suraj has no business n Vivaan stands on his own feet's.

The marriage took place n they took their blessings but then the veil were removed n all got shocked.

Chakor; Suraj?!. Tum {U}.
Suraj; Chakor what the hell?!. Where is Imli?
Chakor was crying. Where is Vivaan?!.

Imli n Vivaan were taking their rounds on the second mandap.

Sukor were watching how their loved ones r getting married.

Vivaan n Imli ended their wedding rituals.

Vivaan was shocked to see Chakor standing next to Suraj her hairline is filled n her neck is decorated with the nuptial chain.

Vivaan removes the veil of his bride. Imli?!.
Imli looked at Vivaan then to Sukor. She gulps in fear... Chakor!!! Chakor what u did?!.
She walks to her. What have u done?!. Look I'm married to Vivaan Babu not to Suraj Babu. U told me that Suraj agreed to marry me! Y u did this?! Y?!.

SuVaan looked at Chakor in disgust. U did this! Suraj shouts. Y u did this?!. I told u that I will accept Imli n my child I was ready I let Tina go! Still u interfere. Y?!

Imli; Suraj Babu... she was crying fake tears. She is jealous of us. Now she is the baari malkin of this Mansion. Being Vivaans wife would mean she is the 2nd DIL although she is elder than me! She wanted my status... Suraj Babu...

Suraj turns to Chakor his eyes were red n anger. U did this all to become the baari Malkin I will make ur life to hell Chakor! I had stopped making people Bandhua but u r my personal Bandhua my Bandhua Biwi.

Chakor; just shut up I'm not ur wife! Vivaan please listen to me I... Thaadh!!!!

Vivaan slapped her. Chakor! U r death for me!

Chakor couldn't believe all turned against her she the one who has saved them many times risking her own life just for them. But now all villager pointed the finger on her. Vivaan raised his hand on her n Suraj took an oath for his revenge.

But the one who had no real problem with the bridal swap was Imli she did this all by herself!

Chakor was crying bitterly something was fishy n Teju couldn't believe that Chakor, the one who had fought her whole life for their freedom would sloop so low. No!

Teju comes to Chakor she supports her. Suraj!

Suraj turns to his mother. Chakor is ur wife now no one has a right to hurt her she is from now on ur responsibility.

Suraj; Maa what r u saying we will get divorce asap n then Imli n me can marry!

Imli; No Suraj Babu I'm scared what she might do to my child if I again enter ur life.

Suraj gave Chakor a death glare. If something happens to my child then I will not leave U! Chakor!

Teju; Suraj!!! Thaadh!!!!

Suraj looked at his mother. She slapped him what she never does.

Suraj; Maa u slapped me for her!

Teju; haan I slept U for her my DIL! N u know what I'm very happy that Chakor as become my DIL the one who can fight for herself n other too she will fight back n prove her innocent I won't allow U to divorce her!.

Chakor was crying on Teju shoulder. All left Chakor n Teju were left on the hall the last light of the holy fire extinguish... only the smoke was left...

Teju consoles her. Chakor don't lose hope I'm with U! U hear u r not alone! Chakor was happy at least someone who trusted her.

Teju helped her she walks to her bedroom in which Suraj was waiting for her! Teju come in. Suraj! If I got to know that u misbehave or even hurt her then u will see the worst of me!.

Suraj took a deep breath. Fine mom I won't do anything to her.

Teju; Chakor I'm just a few doors away. U can come to me anytime.

Chakor nods. She wipes her tears away n went into the room. Teju closed the door.

Suraj throws a pillow to her. Oh Bandhua Biwi {salve Wife} u will sleep there on the ground don't u dare to even think abt it to sleep on the bed. This is only for me n Imli.

Imli was looking at Vivaan. Vivaan was shattered. Y?! Y Chakor y u betrayed me?!. What was my fault?!. Was my love too less?

Imli; Vivaan Babu please don't blame urself it is all Chakor fault she is the one u have to blame! Please Vivaan Babu drink some water u will feel better.

Vivaan drunk the water in just on go. Vivaan sat on the bed. Imli it is quite late u should sleep! I will sleep on the couch.

Imli; Vivaan Babu No u too sleep here na the bed is big enough for us!

Vivaan nods.

Chakor took the pillow n lies on the ground she cried the whole night.

Suraj couldn't bear it. He lifts her n made her sleep on the bed. Ssshhh! No more tears! He took her pillow n placed it between them as a wall.

Chakor was confused. Suraj please trust me I didn't do anything y would I?! U did agree na then?! There was no reason for me to do anything!

Suraj has turned to the other side she was looking on his back.

Suraj turns to face her. Chakor I do understand but who did it then?!.

Chakor; I don't know?! But maybe we can find out?.

Suraj thought... fine we will but now sleep!

Suraj turns to the other side of the bed showing her his back. But Chakor was surprised he isn't that bad she thought. He lifts me up n places me on the bed yet he is helping me does he trust me for real?!. Y couldn't Vivaan trust my words n how could Imli blame me?!

Chakor fall asleep thinking of the real culprit.

On the next morning Suraj woke up first he too was thinking the whole night who could have done this? who has a reason to do this?!. N y?! What benefit the person will get?!.

Suraj comes out after his shower he was just in a towel when Chakor sat on the bed. She woke up n was looking at him... He is hot...! Oh what I am saying?!. No he is Imlis!

Suraj; hogaya?! {u done}? Can I wear my clothes?!. Chakor blushes she hides her face behind her hands.

Suraj smiles.. cute to hai {she is cute}. But no she is Vivaans.

They all went down Vivaan was giving Chakor a death glare.

Imli was happy she was getting the attention of Vivaan n from Suraj...

Vivaan; Imli what do u want to eat?!. I will make u everything?! Ranjhana; Vivaan u wait I will go n I make her something.

Imli now I'm the first choice of everyone. Suraj Babu loves me n the child n even Ranjhana Maa is ready to make me happy.

Chakor couldn't understand anything she sat on the chair next to Suraj.

Suraj was lost in his thoughts. Y is Imli still with Vivaan?! She could just leave the mandap... she could just lie n come to me... I'm confused what is going on y is she ignoring me?!.

Imli; Vivaan Babu... humko chaat khane ka Mann karraha hai. {I want to eat Chaat}.

Sura glares at her. Y the hell isn't she asking me?!. Okay Vivaan has become her husband but that child is mine! My blood!

Chakor coughs... as she ate chilli... Suraj turns to her at the same time Imli coughed as the attentions was shifted to Chakor n she couldn't see it.

Suraj took a glass of milk n gave it her. Chakor drunk by his hands. Thank U!

Suraj; if u can't eat n handle then y u eat?!.

Chakor; I didn't do it intentionally. It happened. I didn't saw it...

Imli; Suraj Babu... cough...

Suraj turns. Haan Imli...?!

Imli; woh Pani... {water}.

Suraj; it's in front of U!

Imlis gaze shifted to the glass in front of her. Oh haan silly me...

Vivaan was fuming in jealousy n anger. Suraj Chakor is mine how dare u to give her milk... to talk to her?! U r not gud for her. Now I'm stucked with ur used garbage. Imli...

Vivaan; Imli u want Chaat come! Chakor I will make u suffer I'm sure U n Suraj have planned this all... u never wanted our happiness only urs matters right?!.

Imli smiles she was happy having Vivaan on her side she looks at Suraj who wasn't giving her a gaze as he was arguing with Chakor.

Imli fumes. Chakor even now u r more important than me. No way I have both under my control n I will show u ur real state! U r nothing!.

ImVaan left n SuKor stays back. They finished the food n went to the Factory side.

Chakor; Suraj...

Suraj was driving. Haan!

Chakor turns to him. Thank U!

Suraj stopped the car. Thank u?! The Chakor Marathon Runner is thanking me?! For what?!

Chakor rolls her eyes. Please Suraj u know y...

Suraj; maybe I know but u can help me to confirm my guess.

Chakor smiles. Haha Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi wants my help?!.

Suraj; nice! Reply!

Chakor; thanks for trusting me!

Suraj; hmm abt that something is fishy

Chakor; ya what n who?!.

Suraj looked at her. What u think abt Imli?

Chakor looked at Suraj. U too feel that Imli might have done something?!.

Suraj took a deep breath. Haan there is something itching me. The way she behaved n blamed u... in just a fraction of seconds. Okay if u haven't done it then she as ur sis should trust u right?! N Vivaan too he loves u then y he couldn't believe u... not even on the next day?!.

I mean even I could hear the truth out of ur voice... ur eyes too r showing...

Chakor was crying his words. Don't stop... please I need to hear this...

Suraj could feel her hurt the pain all was shown through her tears... he took out a handkerchief n gave it her... we will find out who has done this. Please don't cry... I hate tears.

Chakor sniffs. Haan no more tears. They were now trying since weeks to find out who could have done this bridal swap.

Chakor was lying on the bed freezing of cold.

Suraj comes in the middle of the night. He was drenched...

Chakor saw him she was shivering but seeing him she shocks. She stood up n went to him.

Suraj u r completely wet. Come change...

Suraj; Chakor u... Arrey Chakor...

She dragged him into the washroom to change.

He was in the washroom taking off his clothes n drying his body.

Chakor knocks on the door. Suraj here ur clothes.

Suraj opens the door n took the clothes. I just come n saw Imli she ignores me completely having fun with Vivaan watching a movie like if I'm nothing to her. . Here this silly girl who is freezing stood up n made me change. Not to fall sick!.

Chakor; Suraj I will bring u food..

Suraj opens the door but Chakor was gone.

Suraj waits for her she was still freezing n shivering but she comes with a tray filled with food.

Suraj took it from her hands. Chakor sit!

Chakor sat next to him. He covers her in the duvet...

Chakor; Thx... now eat!!

Suraj are the food this hate relationship has changed to respect n understanding n even to friendship. Maybe more as both were concerned abt the other ones health.

He ate n come back with a glass filled with rum.

Suraj; I know u don't drink but it will give u heat?.

Chakor shook her head. No!

Suraj; uff okay fine I will drink it may it help me getting rid off the headache I have!

Chakor; No!!! She put the glass away...

Suraj; What?!!

Chakor moves aside she lifts the duvet to give Suraj place on the bed. Suraj come next to her. She cuddles with him...

On the next morning

Imli was in the kitchen when Chakor come down. She saw Imli n stayed out of the kitchen.

Teju; Chakor?! What happen?! Come!

Chakor smiles. Woh Suraj has headache he wants to stay at the bedroom could we eat upstairs?!.

Teju; Haan Chakor... u go I will send Girja...

Suraj; Chakor!!!!

They all turned to Suraj... who was coming no running down to her.

Suraj; Chakor y u moved?!. U r not feeling well!

Chakor; haan but I'm better now. U have headache so I asked Maa if we could eat upstairs.

Suraj scratches his head. He lifts her up. Maa send the food to OUR room.

Vivaan; Suraj... what r u doing?!. With which right r u carrying her in ur arms?!.

Suraj turns to him. With the same right u spend the time with Imli. Chakor IS MY WIFE!.

Imli comes out. Suraj Babu... but our child...

Suraj; has a new father Vivaan Rajvanshi.

Chakor was looking at Suraj. She placed her hands around his neck n rested her head on his shoulder. Tears were rolling down her cheeks but not of sadness of happiness.

Suraj n Chakor leave from there.

Suraj made her sit on the bed wiping her tears away. I said no tears!

Chakor sniffs. Sorry... She hugs him tight!

Suraj; I was blind n I was considering u as Vivaans... but now I'm sure... there is no Imli for me n no Vivaan for U. It's only me n u...

Chakor nods. Suraj... Haan... attraction not love but this here is love!!!

Suraj comes closer to her n kisses her lips... they both made their move...

Suraj n Chakor have moved on n were now no longer interested in Imli n Vivaan neither do they want to know who is responsible for the bridal swap.

But Vivaan was still the same thinking of Chakor.

Chakor was looking at Suraj who was admiring himself.



Suraj u r too much!!!

Suraj looked at her. Acha u say do I look good or bad?!

Chakor; very g... mh... mhh... oh... cough...

Suraj; Chakor?!

She was in the washroom vomiting...

Suraj comes in n saw her. Chakor?!.

Chakor looks at him... she cleans her face n walks out.

Suraj; Chakor?! He come closer...

Chakor; Suraj... no woh... ur aftershave... I'm smelling it...

Suraj; okay...

Chakor; Suraj go or take a shower. No aggressive perfumes...

Suraj; oh okay!

He went n took a shower... he comes back just in a towel.

Chakor; Suraj... I'm...

Suraj smiles. He pulls her toward him. Pregnant?!.

Chakor looked at him. Haan!!!

Both kisses each other. They come down just to see ImVaan having a fight.

Imli; I'm pregnant!!!

Vivaan; u r not U were fooling us!! The whole time u were carrying nothing than this... he shows a fake belly.

Suraj was shocked so was Chakor.

Imli; Vivaan Babu... I... She saw Chakor...

Imli: Vivaan Babu... Chakor did this... she pushes me

Suraj; enough!!! Don't u dare to point ur finger on Chakor...

Chakor; Imli how deep will u fall further?!. First u made this bridal swap then u blamed me n now u r trying to defame me! She hold her belly.

Chakor turns to Suraj.

Suraj felt her fear. Maa Chakor n I r leaving. We will return when the time will come.

Imli; Suraj Babu but u love me u can't leave me?!.

Suraj; I never loved u. I loved the fake child u were carrying. But now u have ur husband Vivaan I'm sure he will make u pregnant.

Vivaan; wait...! U can't leave like this! Chakor is mine!

Suraj; what?! What is she?! Urs oh Haan Ur SIL. Not more! She is my wife. Mrs. Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi!

Vivaan; Chakor say him u don't love him?!.

Chakor; Vivaan I love him more than myself! She was holding Suraj hand as tight as possible. Let's go!

Suraj n Chakor left. Vivaan n Imli were just looking at them.

Vivaan; this all happens bcz of U!

Imli; me no u did this!

SuKor left n didn't returned...

Vivaan; I want Chakor!!!

Imli; Vivaan Babu... I'm here I'm ur wife!

Suraj n Chakor shifted to Mumbai. Suraj started a small business n reached with his hard work a success after another.

Imli got to know that Vivaan was facing loses... she was fuming in anger as she wanted power n money.

Chakor was on Suraj side never leaving him. Both were having a wonderful child Raj...

Now SuKor has found what they always wanted to have a family who loves them...

They r a family now...

Vivaan n Imli got divorced as Vivaan found out that Imli did this all with the help of Shikhu who was the real father of the "child" Suraj never slept with Imli he was too drunken to sleep with her.

Chakor; Suraj!!!! Where r u?!.

Suraj n Raj were sitting on the ground behind the tree.

Chakor; Suraj!!!!! Raj?! Look we have a guest!

Both come out. Guest?! Who?!.

Chakor turns to the side.

Vivaan, Teju n Ranjhana were there... they apologised well Not Teju but Vivaan n Ranjhana did.

Vivaan; so I'm a chacha {Uncle}?!.

Suraj; yes!

Raj; yes!!!!

Vivaan; I'm sorry.

Chakor; it's okay...

Suraj pulls her toward him. Mine okay!!! Only mine!

Chakor; hmm I don't think so!

Suraj; y...?!!

Chakor points down .

Suraj looks at the direction.

Raj was hugging her. Being on Suraj arm he was hugging Chakor... MINE ONLY MINE MAA!!!!

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Hope u liked it

The next will be the one when Chakor will do the swap

Please do not copy my story

Lovely story

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Lovely story

Loved how Sukor's relationship gradually changed. It's good that Vivaan and Imli divorced.

Looking forward to Chakor making the bride swap, I'm curious to know her motives.

Thank u I will post soon should I post it on this one or as a separate tread?

Originally posted by: _Sukorian_

Thank u I will post soon should I post it on this one or as a separate tread?

Hi

Here the 2nd Part

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So here I will give u first an intro...

Chakor was sitting in her house looking out of the window... this is all happening so fast I don't love Vivaan but still he is behind me. What if Tina marries Vivaan n Imli could marry Suraj?!. Haan this is will work n everyone will be happy.

She looked out of the window n saw something...

Chakor made the plan to make the right decision.

Chakor was in the mansion she was changing her clothes n giving them to Imli.

Imli; Chakor Di what r u doing?!

Chakor; Imli u want to Marry Suraj right?!

Imli nods.

Chakor; gud. Then here wear this dress.

Imli; r u sure it will work?!

Chakor; haan Baba I'm sure! U go n get ready.
Chakor left the room n locked the door from outside.

Chakor knocks on the door of Tina... she had hides a bag in the floor... unfortunately Chakor couldn't contact Tina on time. When Chakor didn't hear a word she enters the room.

Chakor saw the empty room. Where is Tina?! Oh no she runaway?!.

A knock a crowd of women. R u ready?!.

Chakor Shit what now?!. Uff..,

Chakor wore the clothes of Tina... then the door opens n brides were taken down...

Chakor sat next to Suraj... she knew it is Suraj as she was wearing Tina's clothes. She couldn't do anything or she doesn't wanted to do anything...?! What does she saw n what does it mean for her?!.

The rituals were done.

Vivaan removes the veil n saw Imli. He was shocked. Imli U?!.

Imli; Vivaan Babu???!!!

Suraj looked at his bride he removes her veil n it was Chakor. Who wasn't afraid or scared. She was giving a stern look to Imli n Vivaan.

Suraj; Chakor where is Tina?!.

Imli; Chakor Di what happen U said I will marry Suraj Babu...

Suraj; Ey!!! U illiterate woman how dare u even think abt it that I, Suraj Narayan Rajvanshi, will ever marry a woman like u.

Imli; Suraj Babu... what r u saying I'm pregnant with ur child.

Chakor; R U?!.

Suraj looked at her... what u mean?!.

Vivaan; Chakor did u made the swap?!

Chakor; Haan bcz I never wanted to marry Vivaan... I wanted that Tina would marry U but unfortunately she left before I could contact her as u all know she never wanted to marry Suraj. But I couldn't made Imli ruin the life of Suraj by faking a pregnancy. U know I can't see anyone being framed.

Vivaan; so u sacrificed my life!

Chakor; No Vivaan I have locked her in the room. But I don't know who let her out! I'm sorry but I never wanted to hurt u...

Suraj turns her. Y u marry me!! Y didn't u just told me the truth, abt ur sister?!

Chakor; Suraj if I have told u the truth u might have killed her...

Suraj; now what?! I'm married to u... my biggest enemy!

Chakor; better an enemy than a fraud... besides we can divorced anytime!

Suraj; do u think I will divorce u?! Hell no... he pulls her close! Divorce is not an option!

Vivaan; Suraj!!! Chakor is mine!

Suraj; she willingly married me... she is not urs! She is mine... n I will make her mine...

Chakor hold his collar. I said better an enemy than a fraud.

Vivaan; r u saying I'm a fraud?!.

Chakor; didn't u met Imli a few nights before?!.

Suraj; What?!.

Imli; How do u know?!.

Vivaan glares at her. Imli!!!

Suraj; so it is true... but y?!.

Chakor; even I would like to know!

Vivaan; Chakor I love U... but I hate Suraj... I couldn't see a woman like Tina with him. So I helped her... I helped her with Imli to runaway. Actually Imli should be in Tina's room n wearing her clothes. But this idiot stayed n Chakors room, and U made ur own plan.

Suraj; Vivaan!!! U made Tina runaway?! Thaadh!!!

This slap come from Chakor.

Chakor; u r still lying! Say what were ur real intentions?!

Imli; Chakoriya Suraj Babu is mine!

Suraj pulls Chakor. Haan better an enemy than a fraud... He places his lips on hers in front of everyone... to keep them shut once for all!

Chakor didn't stopped him...

Vivaan was fuming in anger. Suraj!!!

Suraj broke the kiss. Haan Vivaan say?!

Imli; Suraj Babu... u can't...

Chakor hold Suraj close. U know what my Husband... its time for our Suhaagraat {wedding night}.

Kasturi: Chakor what r u saying... u will stay with Suraj?!

Chakor; Haan Maai I will stay with Suraj! Marriage isn't a joke. I took this decision bcz I don't wanted to be cheated...

Vivaan; But Chakor with Suraj u have the biggest fraud near U!

Chakor; I don't think so... as far as I know he hasn't betrayed U! Neither he had betrayed Imli... u were hurt by Teju Maa, Imli just had an imagination of Relationship with Suraj. Nothing was real.

Suraj; She is right Vivaan I haven't done anything to u nor to Imli...

Vivaan; u could have helped me! U never thought of me... u were using the situation of my weakness.

Suraj; Bcz of Ur mother she took the right of my mother. Do u really thought that I would be that mad n let u take my place. No!

Chakor; Vivaan I do understand this but y do u cheated on me... I saw u with Imli. More than just in a talk...

Suraj looked at her. What u mean to say?!.

Chakor; haan Suraj the night before I saw them again... how they hugged n even kissed each other.

Suraj was numb. U want to say Imli n Vivaan r having an affair?! Wah n I was really feeling bad while kissing u... but now.. I will enjoy my life with U.

Chakor; Vivaan u r just a liar. U r cheap like Imli I'm sure my life is better without u than with u.

Suraj looked at her. That means u think I'm a better partner than Vivaan?!.

Chakor; haan! U have a problem!

Suraj; y r u shouting at me now?!

Chakor; bcz u r having a problem with me?!

Suraj; no I don't have a problem with U!

Chakor; fine!
Suraj; fine!

Teju; Suraj... Chakor. She goes to her... U saved my son thank U...

Teju; Chakor is now my DIL. A divorce is not going to happen in a Rajvanshi family. As far as I got to know Vivaan n Imli U both r in a relationship so there is no problem with u. I never wanted Imli as my Bahu n if Tina doesn't wanted to Marry Suraj then that is her choice too.

Suraj; Maa take my wife to my room...

Vivaan was fuming.

Suraj; one for fun n one for name! Wah Vivaan u r smarter than I thought!

Teju; Chakor Gud u told me that all... hmm ur idea worked Imli wore ur clothes stupid girl.

Suraj was at the doorframe.

Chakor; Teju Maa... Imli n Vivaan have played wrong. But Tina runaway I wanted to talk to her once to explain her everything. But it's okay she runaway... so I could Marry Suraj.

Suraj; hmm u could marry me... he closed the door. Gud U made the pics still we don't have a full confession of them two... I want to know more...

Teju; okay I'm going now... u two take rest...

SuKor nods. Teju left n closed the door.

Suraj falls back on the bed. He folded his hands behind his head. Chakor comes n lied over him. Suraj u kissed me.

Suraj; u marry... aren't we married now?! I mean I should have a right on u!

Chakor; Haan But... she rested her head on his chest.

Suraj; hmm if I haven't heard ur conversation with Maa then what would u have done?! Didn't u thought once what I would do with U?!

Chakor looked at him. No bcz u love to fight with me... Suraj rolls over her. Tell me y u agreed to the wedding we could have faked it all.

Chakor thought for a moment. I never wanted to marry Vivaan. He always thought abt himself. He never asked me what I want. I wanted to be a marathon runner only.

Suraj; then go n run... oh n if u need some advice how to run... ask Tina... hahaha..!!!

Chakor hits him. Suraj U stupid.

Suraj kisses her neck...

Chakor; Suraj nahi... dehko I will think of it...

Suraj... smiles... hmm u r thinking of it... I will make it easier for u...



Chakor; Suraj u tell me Y u wanted it?!.

Suraj; hmm u were the better choice. I mean Imli she can't do anything besides pouting the gun on someone... btw... u r my shield.

Chakor hits him. Suraj! U r my husband u have to be my shield.

Suraj; acha U tell me y u agreed to the wedding?!

Chakor places her hands around his neck. U were the better choice.

Suraj; my dialogue?! Very bad...

Chakor laughs. Okay I will tell u. I like to be with U bcz I like to fight with u. U give me a feeling of I can reach more... the way U tease me it gives me more strength n courage to reach a new high...

Suraj; so I'm ur motivator!!

Chakor; kind of... .

Suraj; then let me give u the motivation for the rest of ur life...

Chakor; What...?! .

On the next day...

Suraj was under the shower when Chakor was waiting for him.

She doesn't wanted to go alone n waiting for him. Suraj comes...



Suraj; naughty girl... U want more?!

Chakor pouts. No what I got wasn't that gud!

Suraj; What..?!

Chakor; I thought I could be ur motivation too!

Suraj chases her n she runs away from him...

Chakor; aahh... leave me Suraj it's tickling me... aah ...

He was lifting her by holding her belly.

Suraj; do u think my motivation worked?!

Chakor; shh if it worked then I have to stop my career...

Suraj put her down. Right! He scratches his head. Okay let's go..

Chakor; wear something!

Suraj wore a shirt. Happy?!.

Chakor; yes! U r mine! I don't want anyone to look at u with lust it is only my right!

Suraj; So true!!! He took her shawl n placed it on her properly. Just covering my marks...

Chakor places her hand on her neck.

Suraj smirks. I was joking come!

Chakor; Suraj!!!

They come down together.

Vivaan n Imli were glaring at them.

Suraj; what r u looking at?! Lower ur gaze n don't stare.

Chakor was holding Suraj hand. Both sat on the table next to each other.

Suraj; Maa I'm starving...

Teju; Chakor please come it's ur rasooi.

Chakor stood up. Haan Maa What should I do?!.

Teju; what can u make at best?

Chakor; nothing...

Suraj heard it. Nothing yeh main kahan phas gaya {where got I stucked in}?. Will u keep me hungry?! Come on I need some energy after the last night.

Vivaan stood up in anger like Imli.

Suraj; huh idiots!

Chakor comes with a bowl she filled with milk n cereals.

Suraj; I hope u have time to learn bcz I'm not going to eat this everyday.

Chakor; I will learn pakka but now it this.

Suraj ate n left for the factory... he was still hungry.

Imli was looking at Chakor with hate she went into the kitchen n prepared some food for Suraj.

Chakor was getting ready. She went to the kitchen once n made a tiffin ready for Suraj. She prepared a meal with the help of Teju.

Chakor left from there to meet Suraj at the factory side.

Suraj was sitting in his cabin. A woman was inside his cabin trying to talk to him but Suraj was pushing her out of the cabin.

Chakor opens the door.

Suraj; Get Out Imli!

Imli; Suraj Babu listen to me!!!

Suraj; Get Out!!!

Chakor; Imli leave!

Suraj looked at her. Imli Get Out!

Imli was thrown out.

Chakor glares at her. Imli Suraj is my husband stay away from him.

Imli fumes in anger. Chakoriya u did this all for ur benefits I won't leave u for that!

Chakor rolls her eyes. Get out!

Imli leaves from there n Chakor went to Suraj. She places the tiffin on his desk... n turned with a pout face.

Vivaan was on the opposite cabin n was witnessing everything.

Suraj; what happen Chakor?! I tried but she wasn't listening to me. Thank God u come otherwise she would sticked on my like glue.

Chakor was still not talking to him n standing there with crossed arms.

Suraj turns her to face him. Sorry!!! Please?!

Chakor; y r u saying sorry I mean for what?!

Suraj; sorry that I didn't saw u coming...

Chakor; haan... she still had a pout... but Suraj knew how to changed it... he kisses her slowly n short strokes.

Chakor blushes. Suraj I made something.

Suraj; really?! Grrrg... .

Chakor; haan... haha she made him sit n serves him. She even feeds him with her hands.

Vivaan was fuming more n more. Chakor u played a big game but in the end I will win. U will be mine!

Chakor sat on Suraj lap. Both were sharing kisses...

Chakor; I don't want to go but I have to go...

Suraj; what where n y?!

Chakor; Mumbai for my next marathon run...

Suraj bend is head. Fine Go! But call me... I can't leave from here. I have to free all...

Chakor; Thank U...

Suraj; haan u can show me ur gratitude when u r back... he nuzzles on her neck...

Chakor; Suraj... let me go...

Suraj releases her from his grip...

Vivaan stood up n follows Chakor.

Vivaan; Chakor I will tell u everything but then u will have to become my wife!

Chakor looked at him in disgust. I'm Suraj Wife only. I have no intentions to be urs.

Vivaan; what?!

Chakor; Haan Vivaan enough of this. U can tell me or not I don't care. Bcz of that I just got the man I love Suraj! Our fights were real but more than this our love was. I don't care y u did this.

Vivaan; bcz u left us alone.

Chakor claps. Wah I left u that means u have no brain, hands, arms, legs or feet's. U r handicapped?! No right?! Y r u blaming me n y r u blaming Suraj?!

Vivaan; Suraj is the son of KN!

Chakor; Ur step father! Right!

Vivaan; Chakor he isn't gud for u!

Chakor; he is the best! If I had married U I will be in the mansion carrying for u nonstop. But being his wife in free I can do whatever I want to do n I can archive what I want to have. Now please let me live my life with my husband.

She leaves from there directly to Mumbai.

Suraj was at home. When his mobile rung.

Suraj looked at the display the caller ID was Chakor...

He picked up. Hi!

Chakor; Hi... wait accept it!

Suraj looked at her request. Video chat. Nice.

Chakor; Suraj... What r u doing?! She was checking the room.

Suraj; wait I will show u.

Chakor; what?!

Suraj; that I'm alone!

Chakor lowered her gaze n Suraj moves in the room with the mobile phone.

Chakor; it's okay. Suraj... I love U!

Suraj; can't u say it in person?!

Chakor; okay! The door to his study room opens.

Suraj; Chakor...?!

Chakor runs to him. I love U!

Suraj hugs her back. I love U too!!! What r u doing here?!

Chakor; testing u...!

Suraj; what?!.

Chakor; actually I don't have a run... but I wanted to see ur reaction n u did well... no u did perfect.

Suraj lifts her in his embrace. He places her on the bed n lies next to her. I'm happy u come into my life.

Chakor; haan... I'm happy to be in ur life...

Suraj; very bad Haan...

Chakor bites on his cheek. Thank U for trusting me n accepting me the way I am.

Suraj; I love U... I'm crazy abt u... he hugs her tight...

All the plans of ImVaan failed finally they gave up n tried to move on in their life.

Suraj was the support Chakor was needing.

Chakor was doing a run. Suraj was standing there waiting for her arrival.

Chakor win the marathon run.. Suraj took her in a tight hug. Suraj... that is my last run.


Suraj shocked. What y?! Something happened?!

Chakor was called to take the medal. Suraj tried to stop her as he wanted an answer.

Chakor went up n gave a small speech.

This one is dedicated to my biggest enemy who has become the biggest priority in my life my husband Suraj Narayan Rajvanshi. Who has given me the biggest motivation... today I want to announce my break. I will return but not for the next few months.

Suraj smiles brighten. She comes to him n he again hugs her but not so tight.

Chakor; ur motivation worked!

Suraj; haan something had to work...

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Months later well years later

Chakor was playing on the bed with Suraj.

Maa!!! Unfair...?!

Chakor; no u said u don't want to play with me!

Suraj was smiling.

Chakor; so now I'm playing with ur papa only!

Suraj; hmm my princess come... papa will play with u.

Chakor; Suraj no she doesn't wanted to!

Suraj; I don't care. She is my princess my girl. Come!

She comes up. No more runs.

Chakor; haan no more runs u r too bad.

Suraj; don't listen to her Jaan.

Jaan; Okay Daddy.

Chakor pouts. Only she is ur Jaan {life} right I'm nothing...

Suraj; oh Mrs. U r carrying my 2nd Jaan so u r my double Jaan. N when my champ is there u will be my DP {Dharam Patni}.

Chakor; bas {only}.

Suraj; okay how is that... I love U.. .

Jaan; not more than me!

Suraj; hmm I love u same

Chakor; no u have to love me more I'm double!?

Jaan; I'm ur only daughter

Chakor; I'm ur only wife!

Jaan; ur first child

Chakor; I saved u from Imli.

Suraj; ur mom wins!

Jaan; ya!

Chakor smirks.

Suraj kisses her n the belly

Months later...

Jaan was holding her brother Raj

Suraj; can... I...

Jaan; No! Mine!!!!

Suraj; okay!!!

Chakor; I told u no chance!

Suraj; I want to hold my son.

Chakor; u said u r here by the morning but u come today evening! Jaan won't give u Raj neither will I!

Suraj; fine I will make a third one..?!.

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