AvNeil OS : 'CONSCIENCE : A Wake Up Call.!' (Track based)

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

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LadyWhistledown

@EuphoricBee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

Riya

This is so realistic,logical and unbiased

Since the day neil and avni meet again,fans want neil to think like this and dig out the truth like avni did in jail track

But cvs are hellbent in showing their Najayaz track

You penned the words and emotions very well

Neil realization through his own inner chaos

Supperb.

Yayy ! First to comment

Waiting eagerly for shade story

Much love

Edited by Avneilll - 7 years ago

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

😭

I don't have words. It's so realistic.

Agar yesa huwa hota hum yeh din nahi dekte.

Anyway thank u so much for this.

Iam happy atleast in Ur story. He is thinking.

👏superb

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

This was damn good . Neil has literally sent his brains on a vacation as he found Avni was alive and there came a storm again in form of Mowgli being their son which unleashed the monster in him . This was really the need of the moment for this pseudo Neil . I thoroughly loved the argument between his conscience and emotional state . We are gonna get nothing from the show anymore . Thank you for this wonderful shot 👏😃

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GumnaamHaiKoii

@GumnaamHaiKoii

Stunner

+ 34

Posted: 7 years ago

This was so good

Just like we would have wanted

Epilogue maybe ?

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

Finally at least tumne neil khanna ko jaga diya. Isi ka to intezaar tha. Meri aankhen humare real wale neil khanna ko dekhne ke liye pareshaan thi . Jo nahi mila or saayad ab milega bhi nahi.

Par chalo koi ni at least kahi to mila wo sharp brained officer Neil khanna jiske hum sab diwaane ban gaye the.

Thank you Riya . This was much needed and it felt so realistic as if I am seeing it on TV .

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Would you mind continuing this?

Its really good! <3

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iris

@iris_diaries

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

Hi di, I am new here . Your writing is just awesome. Specially the debate portion. Wish something like this was shown in the show. Hope Neil Khanna gets a wake up call before he loses everything.

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SilentAvNeil

@SilentAvNeil

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

How I wish the writers had taken this angle rather than the Mithali route. This would have been the Neil we knew and fell in love with

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#10

Perfect!

A much needed wake up call for a certain Mr. Khanna. Neil Khanna, get up and awaken that brain of yours! Stop acting like an arrogant idiot!

Thank you for writing this. He really should use that officer brain of his. Till when will his brain cells stay dormant? Only if we could see something like this in the show. Sigh!

Keep writing more dear.. 😊

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