Roses and thornes[a fan fic]part7-Pg 11. - Page 3

hey it doesnt matter that u r goin slow or not!!

it matters that u r writin a gr8 n faboulous fanfic!!
so keep up the good work!!n keep goin on with yr fanfic!! u hv a wonderful imagination!

cheers!! 😃

Originally posted by: nigam_radhika

hey it doesnt matter that u r goin slow or not!!

it matters that u r writin a gr8 n faboulous fanfic!!
so keep up the good work!!n keep goin on with yr fanfic!! u hv a wonderful imagination!

cheers!! 😃

i agree.u'r gr888888888888 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi guys thanks😊 a lot for replying.Here is the fouth part.

part-4

Ashi didn't knew whether it was just her instinct which had brought her to shed.When she entered the shed she was relieved to see yuvi there but also shocked.The broken guitar was enough for Anvesha to guess that something was seriously wrong.Ashi went near yuvi who had fallen asleep.

Ashi:Yuvi Yuvi...
Yuvi opened his eyes
A: Tum kal raat se is shed mein ho?
He doesn't reply.After waking up all his pains returned in full fledge form.Ashi sits besides him.
A:Yuvi tum kal raat se yahan ho aur wahan sab tumhare liye pareshan ho rahe hai

He still doesn't reply she is worried.
A:Um Yuvi...

Y:Ashi,mujhe akela chod do please.
A:duh uh tum itni der se akele hi to the ?
She notices that his arm is injured.
A:Yuvi tumahare haat ko kya hua?
She touches his injured arm he doesn't allow her coz of pain.
A:Yuvi tumahare haat pe to chot lagi hai, chalo mere saat[holding his hand and getting up to go].

Yuvi is not able to get up immediately as he was sitting in same position for a long time and he didn't wanted to too.
A:[sits again and asks with concern]Yuvi kya hua tumhe?Please mujhe batao ki aakir baat kya hai?
She notices crumpled letter lying there picks it up and reads it.She is shocked too, she looks at yuvi with shock on her face.
But yuvi is not looking at her not wanting to meet her eyes not wanting to answer her questions and not wantig to accept the truth.

Please guys tell me if it is getting boring.Should I continue?