Taiji Ka Tinchu Tae Tae (fun post)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Naaa naaa this is not a spoiler but another khurafat of my khurafati mind.

Wo mere Tinchu Tae Tae wale din


"Aaj Taiji ne firse Megha ben ko unke Premi ko lekar tana mara."


"Huh! Unhe aur aata hi kya hai! Khud ko to pyaar ka pa bhi nahi pata hoga na to kabhi unse kisi ne pyaar kiya hoga aur na unhone kisi se aur dusro ko pyaar par lecture deti hai"


Taiji overhears Naina and Preeti's conversation and their stabbing words bring tears in her eyes. (Taiji ka puarana jhakm hara kar diya ab tumhara kya hoga Naina aur Preeti he he ha ha 😆) If only she could shout and tell those stupid girls Mujhe pyaar ka pa bhi pata hai aur ra bhi. Haan haan Maine bhi kisi se pyaar kiya tha, haan Maine bhi kabhi kisi ko dil diya tha, koi tha jo mere liye subah 4 bje hi kheto mei pohach jata tha taki jub mai apni saheliyo k saath subh halke hone jau to ek baar mera deedar kar sake, Jo mere liye kabhi ganne to kabhi aam todkar lata tha mera aashiq mera deewana.


Aur is tarah Taiji kho jati hai yaadon ke samandar mei, hum yaha par kya achaar dalege hum bhi chalte hai Taiji ke saath unke gaav Baineh Wah jub Taiji 16 baras ki kachchi kali thi. Jab Taiji Taiji nhi sirf Beena thi.


Beena jab 2 saal ki thi to uski maa chal basi aur uske Papa ne usko akele hi bada karne ka faisla kiya. Dheere dheere beena hone lagi badi. Na phoolo sa chehra, na kaliyo si muskan aur na hi thi rang roop uska dekhkar kudrat hairan lekin fir bhi to wo apne papa ki jaan.


Ab jab Beena 16 saal ki hui to uske Papa ko uski shaadi ke kharche ki chinta hni chaiye thi lekin unhe to apni daru ke kharche ki jyada tension thi. Gandi lat jo lag gayi thi. Baapu bevde ho gaye aur ab unhe apni daaru ke Siva kisi aur se pyaar nahi raha.


Beena sits down on the floor to chop up some vegetables to prepare lunch, while her Father has been drinking. "Beena ja Khoke(desi wine shop) par ja aur mere liye ek Pauwa (desi whiskey) lekar aa" he says under the influence of Pauwa. 😆


To say Beena is shocked will be an understatement chalo Baapu pite to the hi lekin aaj to had hi kar di matlab!


"Baapu ye aap kya keh rahe ho mai khoke par kaise ja sakti hu aur apne phle hi bht pi li hai ab jakar naha lo 4 din se nahae nahi."


"Chup kar! Mai sher hu sher aur sher nahata nahi! Smirks Beena's bapu and says. " Aur tu khoke par kahe nahi ja sakti per diye hai na bhagwan ne"

Beena tries to protest once again, but her bapu angrily throws down the empty bottle of pauwa, stands up from his seat, "Apne baapu se behas karat ho ek lapat lagage abhi kaan ke niche"

Beena is walking on the road to desi wine shop tears are flowing down her face 😭continuously. She curses the day her bapu became a bevda. She reaches the wine shop in a while, wipes her tears away and feels very awkward for she is the only girl present there..A group of three goons see her standing at the counter and a wicked smile stretches their lips out. 😛They go and stand beside her.

First Goon (looks at her from head 2 toe and whistles): Wah aaj to khoke par ronak lag gayi!

Goon2( cheeky grin and speaks in a husky voice): Kasam se kya maal hai..

Goon3(smiles mischievously): Aao janeman ek jaam hamare saath ho jae.

Beena is shivering now. A goon tries to touch her, she moves back at once, another goon comes forward and touches her shoulder, she pushes him and runs away from there. Goons also run behnind her to catch her. While running Beena bumps into a boy who looks to be in his early 20s.😳 When she is about to fall he catches her by her waist and they share a fleeting eyelock.

"Agar apni jaan pyaari hai to ladki ko hamare hawale kar de" roares a goon, glaring at the boy with murderous eyes.

"Aur agar mai na kahu to?" Says the boy and moves Beena behind him.

The goon comes forward and tries to punch the boy, but the boy catches his hand and twists it the goon yells in pain. He punches another goon hard, blood oozes out from his nose. All the goons scamper fom there at one stroke.

The boy turns toward Beena and finds her shivering in fear. "Daro nahi wo gunde ab ja chuke hai."

Beena wipes her eyes and says, stammering a little, "Meri madad karne ke liye aapka bohooot bohooot dhanyawaad."

"Wah kitni meethi awaaz hai!" Thinks the boy, "Chalo mai tumhe ghar chod deta hu."

"Nahi nahi mai khud.." . Her eyes fall on his right hand, and she screams.. "O bai...khoon!"

"Oh choti si chot hai theek ho jaegi." He says carelessly.

Beena tear a piece of cloth from her dupatta and binds up his wound to stop the bleeding, while him stares at the face of the beauty before him. "Dhanyawaad waise iski koi jarurat nahi thi."


"Neh wah! jarurat kaise nahi thi. Apne itni madad ki meri aap to bhagwan hai mere liye."


He smiles, "Arey bhagwan mat banaiye mujhe(Saiyaan bana le saiyaan 😆) mai to ek sadharan sa insaan hu. Batuk Chand naam hai mera. Yahi pass hi mei ek daftar mei chaprasi ki naukri karta hu."


"Acha Ab mai chlti hu Batuk Chand..aapka ek baar firse bohooot bohooot dhanyawaad." Beena gives him a manmohak smile. Batuk Chand to gaya kaam se.

He keeps looking at her back until she vanishes away from his eyes and then he realizes that he didn't ask her name. He sighs and feels something he had never before, a strange emotion that he couldn't figure out what, at that time.


A scene After two years


Nahi!!!!!!!nahi Bapu nahi... mai Batuk ke siva kisi aur se byaah (shaadi) nhi krugi!!" Beena cries and lay down on the khatiya (bed) on her stomach.

"Par Beena byaah to tumrah bachpan me hi ho gaya tha jab tu 8 mahine ki thi Ahmedabad wale Aggarwal ji ke bade bete ke saath jab wo 2 baras ka tha. Teri Amma aur uski Amma pakki saheliya thi. Unhone hi tum dona ka byaah karwa diya tha. Lekin ye baat humne sabse chupai kyunki Aggarwal ji chawat nhi the ki unke khaandan mei kisi ko eeh baal vivaah ke bare mei pata chale. Ab to bas gona(vidaai) hona baki hai tumrah kyunki tu ab 18 baras ki ho gayi hai." says her bapu.

"Mai nahi manti aise kisi byaah ko bapu!" Beena literally shouts.

"Bas ab kuch aur naahi sunna humka. yahi tumrah naseeb hai aur tumka ise swikar karna hi padega." speaks her bapu in a low but determined voice.

Song plays in the BG

Choti si umar
Par lai re
Bapusa something something...(Aage nhi ata ye song mujhe) 😛

Jab pyaar karna to kya pyaar ka naam lena bhi paap tha kaise chada parwaan in 2 salo mei Beena aur Batuk ka pyaar? Aur kya Beena ne bina lade hi ghutne tek degi apne naseeb ke aage ya fir ek baar ladegi apne pyaar ke liye? Jawab yhi isi thread par milege kyunki ye Un dino ki baat hai jab Taiji ka kisi ke saath tinchu tae tae chal raha tha.

Thanks for reading. Hope you like it. 😃
Edited by IThinkALot - 7 years ago

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braveheartdoc thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hahahaha 😆🤣
You're awesome really... I could imagine Beena and Batuk Chand together and he holding her by her waist 😆

Please continue soon... waiting eagerly 😆👏

I think she used to apply chandan paste on her face to enhance her beauty... that's why her takiya kalaam 😉😆... chandan ghis ghis kar...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Taiji Ka Tinchu Tae Tae... OMG that was hilarious 🤣
Your sense of humour is amazing 👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Hahahaha 😆🤣

You're awesome really... I could imagine Beena and Batuk Chand together and he holding her by her waist 😆

Please continue soon... waiting eagerly 😆👏

I think she used to apply chandan paste on her face to enhance her beauty... that's why her takiya kalaam 😉😆... chandan ghis ghis kar...😆

Sach mei 😆 I to even wanna ask Taiji ki kaha se ghis gayi? Lgti to hai nahi kahi se bhi ghisi hui 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: msdfan

Taiji Ka Tinchu Tae Tae... OMG that was hilarious 🤣

Your sense of humour is amazing 👏

Thank you dear 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -HJ-

Hahahhaa too good!

Awesome one

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic 👏
Kya baat hai... Another one from you after yesterday's sholay one.

I died laughing reading about Taiji's tinchu tinchu tai😆... Batuk holding o bai's kamariya😆
It was amazing.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Too good!! Laughing so hard!
🤣


Taiji definitely has a back story like this... she is too apt at reading the lovelorn Naina.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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You are so good...I m laughing like an idiot in Office
But it is worth it 🤣


Tinchu tinchu taaye taaye
Edited by KashafZaroon30 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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🤣I am laughing so hard and mama is giving me weird looks.
Keep gracing us with these fun posts. Still laughing. Taiji ki pyaar ki kahaani 😆
I would like to conclude with the song you mentioned 😛
'choti si umar, parnai o babosa
kaai tharo karyo mhe kasoor?
itra dina to mhane laad ladaya
ab kyu karo sa mhane door?' 😉



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