#3Song Osthon #3 Thank you note on pg 96 May 22 - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago
Such a lovely os
Its so amazing
Raman fall in love with ishita voice
And ishita told her past
Its so scary and emotional too
Thanks for os
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os akku...it was just lovely.
Simple yet a very lovely concept... Just pure innocent n true love nothing else...u wrote it beautifully.


The concept gets along with the song so beautifully.

Loved it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb and Beautiful os
Raman fell in love with ishus voice
he even joined her office to impress her
finally he confessed his love and after telling him her story even ishu accepted him
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
what a lovely concept. the title suited the story perfectly beautiful song.Raman in love with RJ ishita's voice and falling in love with her was romantic. shocking that when he proposed her she rejected..she was married and was burnt by her hus .shocking. sad that though she survived burn marks remain.but loved raman saying that its not a prob and she is still beautiful. happy that toshi too accepted ishita.trio hug was sweet
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb os ...
Loved it ..
Raman fell for RJ ishu..
He joined radio just to be close to her..
Ishra became friends n raman proposed her.
Ishu denied him ..
Raman saw burn mark on her neck..
Her past was painful ..
Raman accepted ishu making her overwhelmed..
Raman introduced ishu to toshiji she accepted her wholeheart edly as she too was victim..
Beautifully written...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice os di..
Totally loved it so much.
Raman fell for Rj ishu. He leaves his business and join radio to stay with her. Ishra become friends. Raman proposed ishu on her birthday party. She denied him. He saw her burn mark. Ishu past was painful. And raman bring ishu to his home. Toshiji also accepted ishu
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome
poor ishu and toshji
gland they found partners who love them
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hlw frnds here I'm with my Os which based on the song "Nazm Nazm" suggested by "immad2..


My love resides in my heart

Ishita getting ready when her partner in crime in short her bestie mihika called


Ishita - haan mihku bol..


Mihika - ishu r u ready ? I'm coming in just 10min


Ishita - ha re tu aa..saying both hung the call then she picked her bag & comes out of room where her mother arranging the break fast table when she saw ishita coming


Shweta(ishita's mother) - ishita puttar aa nasta taiyar hai ..


Ishita - no mumma mujhe late ho rha h mihika aa rhi hogi I will eat in canteen.. she was saying when her brother kabir too has comes


Kabir - tu late ki tension naa le I'll drop you ...


Ishita - bt bhai apki bike pe main or mihku kaise aa payenge upr se aajkl traffic rules kafi strict h..


Kabir - bt main aaj..he was saying when mihika comes there & greets them


Ishita - bhai u don't worry hm chale jayenge..


Shweta - chl thk bt ye le..saying she handled Ishmi veg roll & ask them to eat in way which they happily nodded & they about to go when doorbell rungs ishita opened the door & seeing the person she was so happily surprised & starts smiling like an idiot seeing her he too can't stops himself from smiling he called her name bt she is totally lost when mihika pinched her & she winches in pain


Ishita - ahhh kya kar rhi h mihku when mihika said "arey ishu inhe andar aane de which make her realise & she gave him way & he comes inside


Ishita - mihku what is he doing here?


Mihika - mujhe kya pta its ur house naa..


Ishita - chl dekhte h ..saying both too went behind him where her brother kabir introducing him with his mother seeing ishita he said "ishu meet my new friend raman (then turned to Raman) and raman she is my baby sister ishita ..


Raman smiles then forward his hand for handshake she too shake hand with him then kabir introduce mihika also ..


Kabir - maa aaj se main roj raman ke sath college jaunga actually his father gifted him a new car so he want me to accompanied him ..


Raman - haa aunty actually main idhar se hi hokr jata hu so socha sath hi jayenge..


Shweta - ok puttar achha come have bf


Raman - na aunty ji my stomach is full bt will have next time..which she nodded


Kabir - chl raman chlte h..


Raman - haa BTW they also going college naa toh chlo Sab sath chlte hai ...hearing this ishita start dancing in her mind when kabir interupped " no raman I had asked them bt they r not ready


Raman - ohk not a problem..


Kabir - hmm u just wait I'm coming taking my bags.. Saying he went from there while raman starts talking with their mother


Ishita - mihku do something mujhe mere prince ke sath hi Jana h..


Mihika - what can I do? Tune khud hi mana kr diya Kabir Bhaiya ko wo to lift offer kr rhe the naa..


Ishita - bt that time I didn't knew naa ki he is going with my prince..


Mihika - mujhe kuch soojh nhi rha h..meanwhile kabir to had comes & he and raman starts going which make ishita so irritated & in this she put her leg on mihika's leg & she shouts in pain hearing this kabir & raman turned


Kabir - arey what happened ?..mihika was saying something bt ishita interrupted " arey bhai suddenly her leg starts paining mihika glared her while she pleaded from eyes not to say anything


Raman - bt suddenly ..


Ishita - haa bt ap dono jao main meri frnd ko support krke bus stop tk le jaungi its ok mihku agr hme late ho jayega mam will punish us bt I'll not leave u..she said so dramatically


Raman - arey aisa kuch nhi hoga u both too come with us..


Ishita became excited "really then seeing kabir she changed her tone "really thank you so much raman


Raman - its ok..


Kabir - ye Kya hain ishu u r calling him by his name he is elder than you & also ur brother's frnd u should be call him bhaiya...hearing this she felt like ground slipped from her feet


Kabir - ishu call him bhaiya..


Ishita - but bhai he is just one yr elder than me..she said with sad pout


Kabir was saying something bt raman said " its ok kabir aajkl itna chlta hai


Kabir - but..


Raman - leave it yrr..


Kabir - ok as you say..soon all settled in his car raman & kabir sat on front seat while ishmi settled on back seat raman was driving while ishita ogling over him feeling someone gaze he turn bt she immediately starts talking with mihika soon they reached college Raman & Kabir headed towards their class & ishmi to went towards their class after finishing all lectures ishmi went to canteen & orders some sandwiches & cold drink when mihika suddenly starts laughing



Ishita - pagal ho gyi h kya why are u starts laughing suddenly?


Mihika - just tere expression yaad aa gye when kabir bhaiya asked u to call him bhaiya... saying she again starts laughing


Ishita - ha toh he is my love or main use bhaiya bolu jiske pichle ek saal se main uske piche pgl hu or I'm planning to propose him on Valentine toh kyu bhaiya bolu u know mujhe toh lga tha ki abhi hi heart attack aa jayega bt glad he interrupted between us or main bach gyi..


Mihika - achha ishu tune toh use ek love letter bhi likha tha naa uska kya hua..


Ishita - not only write bt also I had send him last month bt don't know wo pahuncha hi nhi ..


Mihika - ohh..after break they went inside their class where teacher announced that they are planning to take all the students on lonavala for picnic so whoever are interest gave their name ishmi immediately gave their name soon college got over & trio kabir, mihika, ishita settled inside his car soon they reached ishita's house where kabir insist raman to come & he agreed and after parking the car he came where Shweta served snacks all starts eating when ishita informed about trip


Kabir - bt ishu u have to ask me naa..


Ishita - bt bhai sb jaa rhe..


Kabir - but I'm not going & I'll not allows u alone..


Ishita - bhai I'm not alone all teachers, students is coming & also mihku too..


Kabir - no means no..hearing this ishita became sad when raman said " kabir send her I'm also going on this trip & I assure u I'll take care of her..her this ishmi became happy..


Kabir - ok if u r going g then I don't have any prblm..


Raman - tu bhi chl naa..


Kabir - nhi yrr actually mujhe or maa ko hmare Dadi ji ke yahan Jana unhone koi Pooja rakhi h..


Raman - ok..soon he drove towards his house next day ishmi,raman reached college & climb on bus which arranged by college & ishRa settled on one seat while mihika sat beside them soon bus starts everyone starts singing ishmi too enjoying it while raman is smiling seeing her soon she became tired & slept keeping her head on his shoulder bt sudden jerk on bus broke her sleep she opened her eyes & said sorry bt he nodded in no & pats her head then she again slept while he wide awake



Na na...

Tu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar ja
Main khwab khwab sa teri
Aankhon mein jaagun re


Soon they reached lonawala he wake her " utho ishita we reached & she lazily opens her eyes bt seeing the scene Infront of her she became so excited its a beautiful cottage surrounded by greenery & lots of flowers immediately she climb down of bus he too went behind her she plucked a flower & closed her eyes feeling the fragrance


Raman - what are u doing ishita?


Ishita - taking the fragrance of this flower & u know my hands also smelling so good try this..saying she forwards her hand & closed his eyes taking the fragrance bt suddenly mihika called her & she rum towards her while raman to follows her


Tu ishq ishq sa mere

Rooh mein aake bas ja

Jis ore Teri shehnaai

Us ore main bhaagub re


Na na..


Everyone enjoying a lot playing lots of games & also cooking food ishita too made paneer pakode raman's favorite evryone praised her a lot but she was looking on him for his praise bt he is busy in relishing the taste when mihika asked him " raman apko achha nhi LGA kya?


Raman - achha it's too tasty (turned to ishita) u r an awesome cook ishita I loved it..


Ishita - thanku.. Like this 4 days passed ishra open up with each other tomorrow is last day of this trip & ishita was lil sad


Mihika - don't be sad ishu ek naa ek din toh jaana hi tha..


Ishita - hmm that I know bt main aaj ka poora din raman ke sath bitana chahti thi bt pta nhi wo subah se kahan h..when a girl comes & informed ishita dat raman is calling her backside of this cottage she became happy & immediately run towards there


She reached there & find him standing near a pond she placed hand on his shoulder & he turned


Ishita - raman where r u from morning? U know I'm finding u like a mad as tomorrow is last day of our trip & I want to spend it with u bt aapka toh koi pta hi nhi..she was continuously talking not letting him say anything so he closed her mouth


Raman - chup kr yrr give me a chance too..she nodded & raman removed his hand


Raman - actually I want to tell u something..


Ishita - what?


Raman - that I'm in love ..hearing this her body became numb she felt like her all dreams to live a happy life with him now shattered bt gathering all courage she asked the name of the girl whom he love


Raman - she is my princess.. hearing this her eyes brightens & twinkling like a star..


Ishita - that mean u got that letter..


Raman - yes I got that love letter which written by my princess..


Ishita glared him " hawww u know this that I love you bt phr bhi u never replied or mujh buddhu ko LGA ki wo letter kahin kho gya jao I'm not talking to you saying she make cute pout like a cute baby


Raman saw her "aww my princess became angry bt plz give me a chance to prove my point


Ishita - boliye


Raman - yes its true that I got ur letter bt didn't replied bcoz I was waiting for Valentine day to propose u & madam for be with u I did friendship with ur brother & also offered him to come with me or u know maine apne papa se zid krke car li but not as a gift bt in return I'm handling his accounts bcoz I always want to bought a car for my princess that to from my money..


Ishita having tears in her eyes which he wiped it & bend on kness " so ms ishita kapoor will u be my princess for forever & i promise you that i will love u my whole life will never hurt u always became reason of ur smiles I can't take stars moon for u bt if u asked I will give my life for you (she closed his mouth nodded in no while he continue ) I will never see any other girl except my princess" saying he forward his hand



Haath thaam le piya
Karte hain vaada
Ab se tu aarzu
Tu hi hai iraada


Mera naam le piya
Main teri rubaai
Teri hi tto piche piche
Barsaat aayi, barsaat aayi


She nodded happily & placed her hand on him then both hugged each other & closed their eyes feeling fragrance of their love



Tu itrr itrr sa mere
Saanson mein bikhar jaa
Main faqeer tere qurbat ka
Tujhse tu maangun re

Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss ore main bhaagun re



After sometimes they broke the hug when ishita realize that this placed place is decorated with lots of flowers


Ishita - wow raman ye Sab..


Raman - its for u pta h subah se ish poore ilake mein ghoom ke sare flowers laaya hu bt tumne notice itni der mein kiya do you like it?


Ishita - I love it raman wo letter kaha h Jo maine diya tha?


Raman - wo toh maine kho diya..he said teasing her


Ishita - raman its our first love letter & u lost it..saying she became sad


Raman - don't be sad yrr how can I lost my first love letter by my princess ...


Ishita - really then show me..


Raman - use main apne dil mein sambhal k rakha h ..she saw him with confusion when he put his hand inside his jacket's pocket which is on left side of his chest & he take out that letter


Mere dil ke lifaafe mein
Tera khat hai janiya

Tera khat hai janiya
Nacheez ne kaise paa li
Kismat yeh janiya ve

Oh mere dil ke lifafe mein
Tera khat hai janiya
Tera khat hai janiya
Nacheez ne kaise paa li
Jannat yeh janiya ve


She became happy bcoz he actually keep that letter close to his heart & both hugged each other saying I love you..



Tu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar ja (x2)

Main khwaab khwaab sa teri
Aankhon mein jaagun re

Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss ore main bhaagun re

Na na...



That's all for this I hope u all liked it so hit like button do comments also..


Love

Harshita

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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