Teri mohabbat se saansein mili hain,last st on pg 129 updt on 13/7 - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb very nice update dear
Thanks for the PM waiting updates
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Update...Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic Teaser

The canteen owner scolds Raman though Ishita warns him but the owner fires Raman
and it was so sad his pleading and crying
Ishita spoke to her Appa about Raman and he takes Raman to a orphanage and get him admitted into a govt. school
Raman is reluctant to be friends with Ishita as she is a rich girl but she wants to be friends she does not measure friendship on monetary scale and this fact about her I like
Amma however dislikes the friendship between Ishita and Raman
Appa tells Raman to start a coaching classes
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Teaser
will be waiting for the chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update di
Ishita helped Raman and he started living a better life
Ishra became best friends
Ishita is so cute praising Raman
awesome
updt soon di
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SHOT 3

Raman was arranging white board and markers for teaching the students as today was the first day of his coaching classes while ishita went to bring her friends to make them study from Raman.

After arranging everything raman sat on the chair to wait and aftef half an hour ishita came back all alone with a sad face. She came to raman with a sad face and said -sab gande hai, bahut gande. Mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni. Kisi se bhi friendship nahi rakhni. She said with a baby pout.

Raman smiled at her cute pout and said -kya hua??

Ishita -nobody is ready to study by u. Maine kitna kaha ki aap achcha padhate ho. U r very smart but no, no one is ready.koi padhna hi nahi chahta Aap se.sab kehte hai Aap govt school mein padhte ho toh aapko kam aaya hoga. Bolo yeh bhi koi baat hui. Just because u study in govt school, they can't say this for u. Main naa kisi se baat nahi karungi. Sabse friendship tod dungi. She said making Raman smile.

Raman -aise sabse dosti nahi todte. If they don't want me to teach them, then let it be. Waise bhi maine toh sirf tumhe padhana shuru kiya hai. Agar koi aur nahi padhna chahta toh it's their will. Chodo yeh sab, let's start.

Ishita -sorry, aapko bura lagaa naa, sabne aapko aisa kaha.

Raman -jab tak tum mere saath ho, mujhe kisi baat ka bura nahi lagta. Bas sab achcha lagta hai. Now let's start. He said to which she nodded and he start teaching her. He made ishita understand everything very easily. Appa who came to check on Ishra got happy seeing ishita studying with such dedication. He went to amma and said -jao dekho, tumhari beti kitne achche se padh rahi hai. Humne itna tutor rakhe but no-one could ever make her study with such dedication. Raman usse zarur padhayi mein bahut achcha kar dega. I don't understand tumhe raman se kya problem hai.

Amma -mujhe kya problem hogi, kuch bhi toh nahi. Bas main itna chahti hoon ki woh ishita ke tutor rahen, friend rahen, usse jyada kuch nahi.

Appa-kya Matlab??

Amma -yahin ki I don't want them to be in any kind of relationship. Arey woh ladka hai, ishu ladki. U r understanding naa what I mean to say.

Appa -agar waisa ho bhi gaya toh kya problem hai.

Amma-yeh tum kya keh rahe ho vishwa, ishu aur raman. He is an orphan, uska koi ghar bhi nahi hai.

Appa -aaj nahi hai, but he will not be the same always. Aur waise bhi mere liye insaan ki honesty aur loyalty important hai. Aur raman bahut hi loyal aur honest ladka hai, commitment se bhaagne walon mein se nahi hai.

Amma -u mean to say that u r OK with their relationship.

Appa -nahi, I am not telling that. Main bas itna keh raha hoon ki agar kabhi ishita aur raman ke beech kuch hua toh sirf issliye ki raman orphan hai, I am not going to stop ishita. Kyunki woh meri beti hai, uske liye quality har cheez se upar hai. He said and went making amma think.

On the other hand, Raman finished the class and said -aaj ke liye itna hi. Baaki kal.

Ishita nodded and said -chaliye, khana kha lijiye. Phir jaiyega wapas.

Raman -nahi, u go. Aunty ko mera ghar aana jyada pasand nahi. Waise bhi mujhe wahan ke khaane ki aadat hai.

Ishita -par wahan toh achcha khana nahi milta.

Raman -but still, I prefer that only. Tum jao, and let me go also. He said and was going when ishita hold his hand. He looked at her all confused when she pulled him to herself and took him in a bear hug.he got shocked with her action when she said -aap itne achche hai, Raman. Phir kyun woh aapko pasand nahi karte.

Raman -kyunki main tum mein se Ek nahi. Main tum logon ki society ka hissa nahi hoon.

Ishita -mujhe bura lagta hai jab koi aapko hurt karta hai, kaash main aapke liye kuch kar paati.

Raman -just stay with me, stand beside me and I don't want anything in life.

Ishita broke the hug and said looking at him -i will always stand beside u, Raman. She said and hugged him alone while he too closed his eyes and wrapped his arms around her.

Slowly time start passing and ishita start improving. Seeing her getting smart and scoring good marks, all her friends start coming to raman for coaching. Slowly Raman coaching classes start to flourish. He took a two room apartment for his classes.he use to take classes in batches and ishita use to attend all his class.

Ishra were getting used to each other as they spend all the time with each other. Slowly amma too was OK with theif friendship as raman really take very good care of ishita and protect her against everything.

One year passed like this and now raman passed his twelve with flying colours and was trying to take admission in graduation while his coaching classes were also running all packed.

One evening, Raman was teaching the class but his eyes was constant on ishita who was looking too sad today. He told the class to solve the maths problem and walked to her.

He sat next to ishita and said -what happened, u r looking sad. Koi problem hai kya??

Ishita look at him and said -appa ka transfer ho gaya hai, we r going to Mumbai. She said making him shock.

Raman -kya?? Is all he could utter.

Ishita -aisa hota hai kya, itne saal yahan rahi. Itne friends banaye aur ek din achanak sabko chod kar chale jao. Mujhe nahi jaana, I just don't want to go leaving all my friends. She was saying with moist eyes while Raman was thinking how he will live without her.

Raman was just looking at her when she said -raman,aap sunn rahe hai. Appa ka transfer ho gaya. Main nahi jaana chahti. She said with moist eyes while Raman didn't said anything and went out of the room. He ran out of the class room and went to the backward.

He sat on the floor and said -nahi, aisa kaise ho sakta hai. How can she go leaving me. Mujhe chod kar nahi jaa sakti woh. How I will live without her. Main nahi jee paaunga uske bina,nahi woh nahi jaa sakti mujhe chod kar. How I will live without seeing her. He said and cried hiding his face in his palm.

Tu jo nazron ke saamne kal hoga nahi
Tujhko dekhe bin main
Mar na jaaun kahin (x2)

Tujhko bhool jaaun kaise
Maane na, manaaun kaise?
Tu bata...

Roke na ruke naina
Teri ore hai inhe toh rehna
Roke na ruke naina...

He sat there and cried for long and finally went when his students called him. He took the class halfheartedly while his eyes was constantly on ishita who was also sitting all lost.

Soon the class got over and all went to their houses whike raman was just sitting on the terrace looking at the sky thinking about his life without ishita and his life after she came. He was lost in her thoughts while tears were flowing continuously from his eyes.

Kaat'ta hoon laakhon lamhein
Kat'te nahin hain
Saaye teri yaadon ke
Hat'te nahin hain (x2)

Sookh gaye hain aansu teri judai ke
Palkon se phir bhi baadal
Chhant'te nahin hain

Khudko main hasaaun kaisi
Maane na, manaaun kaise?
Tu bata...

Roke na ruke naina
Teri ore hai inhe toh rehna
Roke na ruke naina..

He looked at his palm and said -kyun meri kismat mein aisa akelapan likha hai aapne bhagwaan ji. Kuch toh nahi tha mere paas siva ishita ki dosti ke, siva uske. Usse bhi kyun mujhse alag kar rahe hai. Please don't do this, main nahi reh paaunga uske bina. He said looking at the sky and cried hiding his face in his palms.

Haathon ki lakeerein do milti jahaan hai
Jisko pata hai bata de
Jagah woh kahaan hai (x2)

Ishq mein jaane kaisi ye bebasi hai
Dhadkano se milkar bhi dil tanha hai
Doori main mitaun kaise?
Maane na, manaaun kaise?
Tu bata...

Roke na ruke naina
Teri ore hai inhe toh rehna
Roke na ruke naina..

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Updated next shot ,enjoy .
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Awesome chappy Di
Poor them
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

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Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely update
Raman started coaching classes along with his studies
his classes were going well and ishra become very good friend slowly amma also accepted their friendship
loved ishus cute antics
every thing is going well but appa got transfer making ishra sad
poor Raman is crying as he can't live without ishu
continue soon

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