||FAN|| ~ A PreeRan Three Shot : Page 1 updtd. - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aye hayyee! I'm excited šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aqua.m7

OMG Sudee! this is amazing! šŸ‘šŸ¼
im looking forward to this, please continue! šŸ‘

Thank you soo much.. Will update shortly!😃
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Originally posted by: abhiya23

Mind blowing Sudee šŸ‘ will be waiting for next

So happy to get positive comments from you. Thank you soo much!😃😳
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Originally posted by: Angel2002

Amazing start keep updating would love to read ahead

Thank you dear!😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

it seems to be different.loved this -

Not a FAN, Way more Than That...

Woh sirf KARAN nahi, Duniya hai meri...

Awww! thank you soo much for this lovely feedback! 😃😃😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArHi.PreeRan

Amazing start dear. Pls continue.😊

And that last line is brilliant šŸ˜‰

Thank you soo much yaar! Will continue!😃😃
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Originally posted by: kb_always_96

Aye hayyee! I'm excited šŸ˜‰

Aye Hayyee! I am happy! Thank you!😳😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is beautiful story plzz continued soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Heyy guys.. Even though it is a three shot, I will write it like an SS with about 10 parts totally with many sub parts in each shot. Hope you guys like it..😊
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PreeRan Three Shot
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*Shot 1*
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With a heavy heart and happiness filled in, I feel.. really? Happiness? My mind says No. My heart says YES. I am writing with my heart now, keeping aside my mind for a while.. Where I am now, What Am I doing now.. You will get to know when you read this. I want to write it from the start, What exactly happened to me from the first, which circumstances lead me here.. Or maybe who? Yes, HE. You were, sorry are the reason why I am here. Why am I writing this now? i thought.. but I want you to know how I exactly felt about you, sorry. feel about you.. What exactly happened to me. I want you to know, Just you.

I still remember, the day of 9th September, 2016, There was happiness in my eyes that day like now.. All were dancing around me. I felt so happy. I was like the heroine of the day.. A princess who was made to get ready for the arrival of her Prince. Yes, Deepak. He was so kind hearted, Or I thought he was. My mother was so looking forward for this marriage. Like a typical Indian Daughter, I too agreed for her sake, even though I had dreams to chase. He was a well behaved person, had good looks.. Are you jealous reading this? I wish so. Everyone in that hall.. No, Deepak's house it was, Everyone were dancing. I was made to sit at a corner, stretched my hands to two people who was drawing in my hands. Yes, it was the day of mehendi.. My mehendi, An incomplete mehendi.. No, The mehendi was complete. It was beautiful with Deepak's name on it which only I and the designer knew where it was. I saw my maa who was as usual teary-eyed seeing this. I hugged her with my arms, exactly and saw the photo of my papa behind her, gave a smile seeing him. Maybe, on that day, If he was present, I wouldn't have been here.. Usse chodo.. Coming back to the tragedy..

My would-be saasu maa was so strict in her virtues and her son's life. Phew! I am happy that I am not her bahu now.. Bach gayi!! Hahahaa.. Thoda smile karlo ab.. baath mein sirf rone ko milega dekh lena! Just kidding.. Aage pado yaar, Tragedy story samajh ke close karke math jaana, Iss story meri hai par HERO tu hi hai boss!.. Thoda bookmarks paas mein rakh le.. Thoda snacks bhi, so that you can eat them.. Aane wale gusse pe usse phek mat dena.. You know how much I hate wasting food.. Arre yaar, phir se baahar chali gayi mein. Coming back.. Kahan choda.. Haan, would-have-been-saasu-ma-but-not-now waali ke bhaare mein. Yeh ek arranged marriage tha na aur unho ne apni bete ki raksha ke liye mujhe blood test lene ko kaha, So that I have no problems. But the problem was that I had a Problem That ended up being a big Problem in my Problematic life. Hahaha! Samajh mein aaya? Dheere pad le.. Aa jayega samajh mein. The test reports was not paid heed by my mother as she knew that I have no issues of such problems. But, on the day of mehendi.. Woh aaya. Ek kaand ban ke, ek toofan ban ke.. Jo ek hi hawaa mein mere pe hue sabke Barosa, Pyaar, zindagi.. Sab utakar le chali..

Before the colour of my mehendi stuck to my hand, it faded away, Or made to fade away. the reports came. My mom without opening just gave it to my would-be saasu ma (at that time, not now.) having much confidence in me. She too just opened it for a formality. I never bothered that because that was not a big issue for me then. But, It was an Issue. It created an Issue. A huge issue infact.. Kabhi socha nahi tha yeh hoga..Tum jante ho kya likhe the un mein? Tum kaise jante ho.. Main bhi na, Pagal hoon.. Us mein likhi thi ki mujhe actually

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That's it guys.. I hope you liked it.šŸ˜›

P.S: I know the size of the page is shortšŸ˜† Par kya kare.. I will give you a lengthy update baad mein.😃

Cheers,
Sudeeā¤ļø
Edited by ArDeep.PreeRan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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YES YES YES!!!
Thank you sooo much for finally updating this, I was worried that u might have abandoned all of us.
fabulous!! I really love the way u write, its like ur bringing all the events and feelings out of preeta.
i loved it!! ā¤ļø

please dont make us wait so long for the next part! šŸ˜›

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