#3 Song Osthon #2 Jeene laga hu by divan19 on pg 133 April 17 - Page 34

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful and Mind Blowing OS
The song goes so well with the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
beautiful os
Raman is a reserved guy whereas ishu is a prankster
they confessed their love finally
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
rohit Anita and romi mihika as a couple. wow.poor raman ..ishita announced her engagement news before he could propose her.was surprised when ishita reached him and confessed her love.happy that both were loving each other.shocking that her dad faked illness to get her married to subbu.but happy that subbu let her go with raman.confession and kiss were romantic .sweet romantic os with nice song
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic os di.
Totally loved it so much.
Finally they confessed their love to each other.
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os sarthi.ishra r besties always in love
But her appa played a trick n hot her engaged to subbu
Ishita finally decided to put her feelings to voice hearing d truth
She confessed
Raman's happy
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Such a beautiful one shot dear
Mr iyer was just too much
He faked his heart attack
Glad ishu listened and comes to raman
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Posted: 7 years ago

hello dearies, I wasn't updating my OS today but since the writer of the day is busy, here I am with my OS. This one is on song DIL KYA KARE from kaabil suggested by divanru aka pooja di, hope you like it

YOU'RE MY LOVE

He opened his eyes lazily and glancing at the wall clock, jolted from the bed immediately realizing if he stays in the bed for a few more minutes, he would definitely miss the sight of her. Running to the balcony kicking away the duvet, uncared of putting on his slippers, he rushed to the balcony and smiled seeing her locking her house, sighing in relief that he didn't missed her.

His lips curled into a beautiful smile as he saw her leave in a cab and finally when her cab zoomed out of the society, he moved back to his room and threw himself in bed smiling dreamily. This was his routine, she had stolen his heart in the first sight itself and her being his new neighbour was just a treat for him. He got ample chances to bump into her or catch a glimpse of her while she would be going for work or while he would be returning from work. This silent love story was going on for the last three months as every time he tried to go in front of her and propose her, he would end up doing something silly and just walk back dejected.

But not anymore, today, he had decided to confess his feelings to her. He got ready wearing his crisp white shirt with black formals, gelled his hair and shaved his beard. Checking himself many times in the mirror, he picked the bouquet of red roses he had brought for her and moved out.

Zara zara si neend bhi
Ajnabi si hogayi
Zara zara chain se
Dushmani si hogayi

Tum mile kho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karun, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha
Samjhun kaise koi samjhaye

Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyar ho jaye
Jaane kaha kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyar ho jaye

He saw a man along with a four-five year old boy standing at her door, she opened the door and smiled at their sight.

"mumma" the boy jumped on her happily hugging her by her legs sucking the blood out of his system. The man with the boy, who seemed to be his father just walked away after saying something to her to which she just nodded her head.

I -adi mera baby

She said showering the little one with numerous kisses while her son began playing with her long locks and unaware of raman standing there, ishita walked inside carrying him in her arms.

He felt like his world has shattered all of a sudden. He walked back to his place with slow steps and threw away the bouquet of roses in anger, thrashing almost every single thing in the house.

The next morning, his friends romi and ashok came to visit him as they were aware of raman's plans of proposing his neighbour and they badly wanted to know if she accepted his proposal or not. Raman told them about ishita being married and both advised him to move on to which raman agreed.

A month passed, raman used to see ishita as avoiding her completely was impossible given she was his neighbour but he didn't talked to her. Ishita too was way too busy in spending time with her son adi to realize raman's indifference.

It was another normal evening for him, he returned from work a little early as he was having a headache and found ishita's son sitting outside the house with a grumpy face. Unable to just ignore him and walk off, he settled next to him. Adi was sitting there with a cute pout on his lips, his arms folded, anger written all over his face. Raman chuckled seeing the little one's anger and settled next to him in the same position.

Ignoring him for a while, adi finally looked at him and seeing him sitting in the same position, he couldn't help ask him

A -you too got scolded by your mumma?

Raman just nodded his head in negative hearing him

R -my mumma doesn't scold me, she loves me a lot

He said smiling making adi's face fall.

A -my mumma too loves me a lot but you know sometimes she scolds me too

R -because she loves and cares for you

Ishita, who just stepped out of the house to woo her angry baby halted in her tracks hearing them.

A(narrowing his eyes) -then why she scolded me?

R -ok first you tell me what had happened, why was she angry?

Adi looked at him once before he told him how today he tried to make ishita's favourite coffee for her and ishita had scolded him for the same.

R -aww baby, you shouldn't have done that naa. Kids don't turn up the stove, mumma was concerned for you, that's why she scolded you. Think once if you had got hurt, mumma too would have felt the pain. Mummas are like that only, they care for their babies more than anyone else, she loves you baba that's why she scolded you.

He said caressing his cheeks making him look at him.

A -your mumma had also scolded you when you tried to make coffee for her?

He asked him immediately to which raman just sighed.

R -I never tried to make coffee for my mumma, I don't know how to make coffee

He said with a sweet pout on his face making adi giggle.

A -hww uncle, you are a big boy and still you don't know how to make coffee?

He asked amusedly to which raman started tickling him making him laugh heartily. Ishita just smiled leaning on the door admiring the duo as she wished adi shared a bond with his father too but the next second, she chided herself for thinking about it and called adi gaining their attention. Seeing her, adi ran to her and hugged her apologizing to her to which ishita just kissed him mouthing an "it's ok" to him.

Ishra looked at the other, their eyes met and both shared a brief eyelock which was broken by adi's voice as he called raman to him. Raman moved a little close to them and adi pecked his cheeks.

A -thank you uncle, you are too sweet adi likes you

R -n I like adi too

He said tickling him again, he once again looked at ishita, who was hoping raman would initiate a talk or two with her but was left disappointed as he just walked off waving a bye to adi, promising to see him soon.

Ishita had seen him many times and she wasn't completely unaware of those love sick puppy looks raman used to give her. But she always maintained her distance from raman knowing well she is a divorcee and a mother to a four years old adi. She had got married at an early age and adi was born a year into her marriage but her husband refused to take their responsibility and both had got divorced soon. She moved to Delhi for her work, Adi was living with her mother till now and had just returned with her brother last month. She had begun noticing changes in his behaviour since then, and somewhere she knew he wasn't wrong in that. Why would anyone be interested in a woman who is a mother of a kid, but still, his indifference did hurt her.

Her trance broke as adi shook her and nodding her head absentmindedly at what he said, the mother son duo walked inside. A few more days passed like that, adi's bond with raman grew, ishra too came closer to the other, falling a little more for the other, though none confessed their feelings and his parents, who had gone to visit his aunt too came back. It was adi's birthday and he was way too excited today. He had gone shopping with raman who brought him a new suit and many gifts. He even got ready from raman to surprise ishita. Both walked inside the house dressed in white shirts and black formals, looking like father and son. Ishita's eyes didn't got enough of admiring the duo while bhallas got angry realizing raman was getting over involved with ishita and her son. The party started, adi cut the cake and fed ishra, he danced with raman and then ishra too danced together along with all. Bhallas took their leave, an angry toshiji confronted raman and he readily accepted his love for ishita.

T -are you out of your mind raman. How can you love her, she isn't suitable for you

She screamed on the top of her voice while raman just crossed his arms.

R -and why do you think she isn't suitable for me? Yesterday only you were telling me how brave and strong woman she is, how nicely she is taking care of her son single handedly.

T -I admit I had said that but that doesn't mean I will make her my DIL. Try to understand puttar, I will look for some other girl for you. She is a mother to a kid, married once, I will bring another more beautiful girl for you... just think once what will people think about us if you marry a divorcee and a single mother.

Said toshiji trying to make him understand but he just smiled looking at his mother.

R -nobody told me that she is a mother to a kid or a divorcee while I was falling in love with her maa. And now when I am head over heels for her, there's no looking back.

Ho.. unchi unchi deewaron si
Iss duniya ki rasmein
Na kuch tere bas mein jaana
Na kuch mere bas mein

Tum mile kho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karun, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha
Samjhun kaise koi samjhaye

Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko
pyar ho jaaye
Jaane kahan kab kisi ko
Kisi se pyaar ho jaaye

He said straight and turned only to see ishita standing there with moist eyes. He was about to say something but she just ran out of the house. He followed her and saw her going to the terrace.

He saw her sitting in a corner sobbing silently and moved to her. She tried to wipe her tears sensing his presence but he stopped her holding her by her wrist.

R -cry as much as you want today ishita, because after tonight, these tears won't be allowed in your eyes.

He said making her look at him before she hugged him tight and burst into tears. He rubbed her back trying to console her.

Jaise parbat pe ghata jhukti hai
Jaise sagar se lehar uthti hai
Aise kisi chehre pe nigah rukti hai
Rok nahi sakti nazro ko
Duniya bhar ki kasmein

I -it wasn't my fault raman, my parents pressurized me into marrying him. He didn't want adi and I couldn't kill my baby... it wasn't my fault.

She said sobbing and he just blew a soft kiss in her hair. He tore her from himself after a while and made her face him.

R -yes it wasn't your fault but now, you are doing a big mistake ishita.

He said making her look at him confused.

R -yes you are doing a mistake now by not telling me what I can clearly see in your eyes, you are doing a mistake now by trying to hide your feelings from me ishita. I am dying to hear that ishita, please...

R -I love you ishita, I love you more than you would have ever thought of. I love you a little more than adi loves his chocolates, I love you a little more than the sight of sunset, I love you a little more than the warmth of the morning sun, I adore you more than my little munchkin, I love you ishita, you're my love.

He said looking deep into her eyes and she just couldn't hold herself anymore.

Tum mile kho gaya
Hai khud ka hi pata
Kya karun, kya nahi
Kuch bas mein na raha
Samjhun kaise koi samjhaye

Dil kya kare jab kisi se
Kisi ko pyaar ho jaye
Jaane kaha kab kisi ko

Kisi se pyar ho jaye
Kisi se pyar ho jaye
Kisi se pyar ho jaye

Nodding her head with teary eyes, she just put her arms around his neck, hugging him firmly as she spoke up those three words he had been yearning to hear from her for long.

I -you are my breath raman, main love nahi karti tumse, ishq wala love karti hoon... I so love you

He smiled hearing that confession as his arms wrapped firmer around her waist and both lovers continued to pour out their love to the other through the heavy air of the night.

So that's all for the OS

Hope you liked it.. will be waiting for your reviews

LOVE

AKKU

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Posted: 7 years ago
added the OS
hav a look
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Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice OS Di...
Raman fell for ishita at his first sight itself ..
He thought to propose her..
But before that he got a shock of his life after seeing Adi..
He assumed Ishita is happily married..
He distanced himself from him...
But he couldn't forget his love for her..
One day, Raman saw Adi in garden with grumpy face and consoled him..
After that Raman and Adi became friends and IshRa too came closer..
Bhallas didn't like the fact that Raman's growing bonding with ishdi..
But Raman wasn't ready to back off from his love..
Finally IshRa confessed their love for each other..
Plz update soon..
Thank you..

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