RiKara FS ~ Love in Love Making *completed*

Wow this is an amazing concept.
Really loved the start.
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: sirimiri

Wow this is an amazing concept.
Really loved the start.
Continue soon.

This is pretty awesome. You have taken a subject that is hard to write about and yet have made it beautiful. I am always amazed at your talent in writing even complex issues in simple style. Well done Lizzie 👏

Originally posted by: Anysia

Love in Love Making ... loved the title :* <3

You have penned your thoughts beautifully :)

What i expect to read in next part? Love making, obviously xP 😳

Can't wait to read further *excited* =D


P.S.:: Is Gauri 8 years younger to Omkara in the show? 😳

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

This is pretty awesome. You have taken a subject that is hard to write about and yet have made it beautiful. I am always amazed at your talent in writing even complex issues in simple style. Well done Lizzie 👏

Awesome
Omkara pov doesn't clearly show if Gauri is actually naive as he think, may be she isn't.
Do write Gauri pov on this topic.

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome
Omkara pov doesn't clearly show if Gauri is actually naive as he think, may be she isn't.
Do write Gauri pov on this topic.

I love that you are writing about this...as for what I want for next update hmm...as a married woman myself...I would like to read how Omkara soon realizes that yes Sex is not mandatory but when looking at his innocent yet seductive wife sex is a strong desire within and couple with his growing love for his woman he starts to burn inside without an outlet 😆 then...i expect some sensual love making ..now go make that happen for me Lizzie I will be anxiously waiting 😉