Ishra TS_You're the pain!.. You're the cure...[New story pt4 on pg 3]

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello friends...
Back with new story...
Hope you all will like this concept...
It is completely based on initial days of yhm...
Posting part 1 in forum...
The next part will be private on wattpad...
Do follow me to read the next updates...
Wattpad Username : Divani001


Part 1:


Raman Kumar bhalla the arrogant, egotistic, rough and tough person to the world... The one who the whole business world is jealous of, the best ceo award holder for the past 3 consecutive years and a busy man was taken off from his work today.. Taking a off was a huge task for a workaholic person like him... But he had to do that today... Just because his little daughter wanted to go on a shopping ... When he heard that from his 6 year old daughter made him hell angry... He shouted on the poor soul for asking him to take her out on a shopping... Did she commit any big crime... She only asked her dad to take her on shopping... And why was he behaving so rude towards her, the little girl cried in fear not knowing the reason behind his behavior ...

But he immediately felt bad seeing his daughter freaking out of fear seeing his red angry face... He cursed himself for doing that... But he wasn't able to take that... He always hated to listen something like this from his daughter... Because these qualities of hers reminds him of his wife... His wife shagun!.. The one whom he hated the most... The bloody gold digger... Who was sucking his blood and money for years and then ditched him and went behind his own ex boss ashok kanna who is his now business rival... He hated that... He hated these little qualities in his daughter which made his freak the hell out...

Not able to see the poor soul crying like that he apologized to her and even promised her to take her out for a shopping... Now here he was in the shopping mall in Delhi pushing the kart and following his little princess with not a tinch of happiness in his face...

He hates doing anything that reminds him of his wife shagun... Yes... She was still his wife shagun... He hasn't divorced her yet just because he does not want her to lead a happy life with ashok... How could he let her be happy when he was in hell... She many times begged him for divorce... But he always refused and dragged the case as much as possible..

He thought doing this will make her sad... But no... She was more than happy for being a mistress for the billionaire Ashok Khanna... Everytime he sees her with his Ex boss ashok Khanna his blood boiled and he would feel like stabbing her to death... But he would control his anger and pour the Pent up frustration else where... Where he could find peace and solace in pouring his frustration...

His chain of thoughts were broken by his daughter who was calling him pulling the hem of his coat...

Raman : kya hai ruhi... He asked keeping a straight face...

Ruhi : papa... I want to go there... She showed the next section...

Raman : ruhi... Enough shopping... Come lets go home... I have meetings to attend...

Ruhi : please papa... Some more time... Please... Please...

Raman : ruhiii... His mobile rang before he could talk further...

For the next few minutes he engrossed himself in his mobile going on and on...

Little ruhi tried calling him but he just shushed her to keep quite... Ruhi was now tired of waiting for her father... She pushed the heavy kart by her own and She alone went to the next toy section... Which Raman failed to notice...

Ruhi picked almost all the toys in that counter and dumped into the kart making it hard for her to push further... She then left the kart and started collecting small toys filling her little hands too... Finally satisfied getting everything she wanted she was about to go back to her papa... But that when her eyes fell on her most favourite person...
She immediately ran towards the person beaming in happiness...

Ishitaaa aunty!... She hugged ishita by her legs...

Ishita iyer... The neighbor of bhalla's, the dentist in late twenties was the best friend and the most favourite person of the little girl...

Ruhiii?... Ishita was pleasantly surprised to see Ruhi there... She took the little girl in her embrace kneeling down to her height.. Ruhi gave a sweet kiss on her cheeks ... She smiled the brightest as usual seeing the love that she received from the girl...

Ruhi: ishita aunty what are you doing here... Aap bhi toys karidne aay ho kya...

Ishita : toys?... she giggled listening to her... Mein toh I dint come to buy toys but Lagta hai ruhi ne bahot saare shopping kiya haina na... She said pointing to the toys in her hands...

Ruhi : haan aunty... Bahooot saare... But the kart is very heavy ruhi is not able to push it... She pouted...

Ishita : awee... Koi baat nahi... Mein hoon na...il help my chutku tk...

Ruhi : thank you ishita aunty... I love you... She said hugging her...

Ishita : love you too my baby... Waise aap kiske saath aaye hai... And what are you doing here alone... She asked parting her...

Ruhi : offo ishita aunty... I am not alone... I am here with papa... Woh dekho papa wahan.. She turned to show her papa but he wasn't there... Papa idhar hi toh the... Where did he go?.. She looked around searching her papa...

Ishita was now hell angry on Raman for being so careless...

Ruhi : aunty papa ghoom gaye kya... (aunty have I lost my papa) she asked in verge of crying...

Ishita : rooh... Koi nahi baby... Papa will be here somewhere... We will find him betu... Come with me... She held her hands and went in search of raman... yeh raman bhalla na... He will never change... How could he be so careless... Koi bachi ko aise akela chodtha hai kya... She was muttering curses looking around...

Meanwhile raman was searching Ruhi on the otherside... He saw Ruhi coming with ishita and came running towards them gritting his teeth...

Raman : how many times I have warned you Ruhi... Where the hell did you go leaving my hand... He shouted aloud gaining everyones attention...

Ruhi feared and hid herself behind ishita to save herself from her papa's wrath...

Ishita : Just stop it Mr.bhalla... Its your fault to leave her hand... Bachi hai Ruhi... You were the one who were careless and bachi pe chilla rahe ho...

Raman : oh just stop it yaar... I am not here to listen to your lecture... Waise tum yaha kya kar rahe ho... Shopping?... You ladies na... Shopping ke alawa tum logo ko kuch nahi aata hai kya... And you bloody don't teach me how to handle my daughter... I know better than you women who are only behind shopping and spa... he said pulling ruhi hardly from her embrace... Making ruhi scared of his behavior...

Ishita: dheere raman... She's a baby... Why are you behaving like this can't you see she's scared of your behavior... Why the hell are you pouring your frustration and hatred towards someone else on her... She pointed her finger at him angrily... Making his anger reach Heights...

Raman : How dare you point your fingers at me... He said twisting her pointed fingers angrily... Don't you dare lecture me... No one... I said no one can talk like that to The Raman Kumar Bhalla...

Ishita : Kya kar rahe ho.. Ahh... You are hurting me... She winced in pain...

He just gritted his teeth and left her hand throwing it with a force giving a fierce look...

Her eyes was filled with tears for the way he treated her... He just shrugged it off and pulled ruhi from there and took her away... Leaving the hurt ishita behind...

He reached home with crying ruhi in his arms...

Raman : bas ruhi... I don't know what IL be doing if you don't stop crying now... He said to earn louder cries from ruhi...

Listening to the ruckus raman's mother came out rushed..

Toshi: ki hua puttar?.. Ruhi... Why are you crying puttar..

Raman : maa... Take her inside now... Aur ruhi ne kuch nahi kaya... Feed her something and put her to sleep... He said and left to his room...

Toshi : ruhi... Meri bacha... Aise rote nahi bacha ...

Ruhi : papa ruhi ko pyaar hi nahi karte... She said sobbing heavily...

Toshi : na... Na puttar... Aise nahi bolte... Papa loves his gudiya alot.. She tried to calm her wiping her tears... But ruhi was crying uncontrollably...

Toshi : vahiyaad shagun ne mere puttar ki zindagi ko aise karab kardiya... Hey matarani please send someone in my son's life who will change hi like before... She wiped her unshead tears not able to see her once ever smiling son like this...

Raman in his room... Pushed the things on the tables and broke few things in frustration... And shouted aloud pulling his hair... He lit the cigarette and started smoking standing by the window... He does that... He smokes when he is really out of control and today he was... And the reason behind that was shagun asusual...

He had seen shagun and ashok in an intimate position ... She purposefully showed up to him like that wanting to break his heart even more... After all this he really thought it was justified to behave like this and started smoking one after another... Don't know how many he did...

He eyes were fixed on the society gate and he saw ishita parking her car... His mind was taken back to the shopping complex scene few minutes ago... He was still angry on her for shouting at him in midst of the crowd and he wanted to really give a nice piece of mind and he saw her parents going out when he came with ruhi... He knew she would be alone in the house... He wanted to give it back to her for Hurting his male ego... He crushed the cigarette under his feet as if crushing her... And barged off the room...

He went and rang the bell of iyer house which was right opposite to theirs... (imagine the old society in initial days of yhm)

Ishita opened the door and was shocked to see him there...

Ishita : raman?..

Before she could enquire the reason, he pushed her inside and locked the door behind...

Ishita : Yeh aap kya kar rahe ho... She asked in fear and anger...

He pushed her with a force and pinned her to the wall and clutched her cheeks angrily...

Raman : kyun?.. Don't you know why am here, what am I doing?... Let me explain then... I am here to teach you lesson for your behavior... How dare you shout at me in front of everyone...

She pushed him back with a great force not able to stand the way he was treating her...

Ishita : pagal hogai hai kya aap ...why are you behaving like an animal.. Just get the hell out of here... Warna mein chillaongi... She shouted raising his anger...

Raman: animal?... How dare you... He just pulled her by elbows digging his nails in her skin...

That was it she wasn't able to take this shouting session anymore... She shrugged his hold and gave a hard slap making him open his eyes wide with his hands on his cheeks...

NEXT PART ..


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divz9769 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congratulations for new story
raman is so rude poor ruhi ramans behavior with ishita was so rude and unjustifiable what is ishru mistake he poured all his anger of shagun on ishru loved how ishita slapped raman hope he will get his senses back
pls update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Viji
Superb part one
Love ishra
Love little ruhi
Update soon













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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update..
Raman is so rude and arrogant..
Little Ruhi is suffering...
He misbehaved with Ishita in his anger..
Ishita slapped him hard..
Plz continue soon..
If you can, plz kindly post here too...
Thank you..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start!!
Raman was soo rude towards ishru..
He was hurt seeing shagun happy n pouring all his anger n frustration on them..
Poor ruhi..she was so hurt with her papa behaviour..
Ishu slapped him for misbehaving with her n he really deserves that..
But don't know now what he will do to her..
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divz9769

congratulations for new story

raman is so rude poor ruhi ramans behavior with ishita was so rude and unjustifiable what is ishru mistake he poured all his anger of shagun on ishru loved how ishita slapped raman hope he will get his senses back
pls update soon



Thank you so much for the lovely comment ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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very nice reminded the old YHM . pl update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello friends...
Back with the part 2 of this story...
Updated it on wattpad...
Do follow me to read the further private updates...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good start n waiting for next part n pls pm me on wattpad my id is dhristikpd
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice story
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