Emotions- part 2- Pain (Arshi ) pg 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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A short try on Arshi do support

Suffocation

Suffocation yes that's what he felt now. Torn between his bloody policies and his feelings he was totally blank . Unlike the usual Arnav Singh Raizada who always listened to his mind rather than his heart and had no confusions in his life he was completely clueless at the moment because his mind seems to be telling the same things as his heart did. Being born into the prestigious family of Raizada's he was rather too proud of his lineage. Surname, blood and family had been very important tags in his life since the very begining. Even during his school days his friend circles were carefully constructed with these factors as filters. But now life has made him stand in a position where he was uncertain of the importance of his so held dear policies. And the sole reason for all this wreck was one person. Khushi, the name itself brought that feeling of ecstasy within him. Breaking every rule every policy and the wall woven outside his heart she has come all the way and made him question his every policy. She has made this stone smell of her fragrance even in her absence. With no surname bloodline or family she has made the great ASR weak on his knees every time her eyes met his'. The woman herself was a complete package. Her mere presence could turn the atmosphere pleasant and seemed to leave an impression on anyone who got acquainted with her. She entered into his life like a cyclone and has wrecked the entire equilibrium he had maintained for long.

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Nice intro. W8ing for the story
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Nice intro. ..waiting for the story
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Nice start and eager to find out more. Want to see how Khushi brings out humility in him. Wonder if she is aware of her effect on him.
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Interesting start...eagerly waiting for update.
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Wow loved the start.
Continue soon.
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waiting for you to continue. very interesting.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u guys for the wonderful comments. I have my xams going on at the moment will be updating soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Pain

"Pain was what he felt when he saw her hazel green eyes well up with tears.
Pain was what he felt when he felt her moistened cheeks on his chest.
Pain was what he felt when he saw her leave through the doors of their room.
Pain was what he felt when he saw her seek his eyes for one last time."
There was no medical cure to his pain yet the only cure was what caused him this pain. The cure was available on a singe call yet binded by unseen chains he sought to absorb in the pain than relieve from it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What really happened between them?

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