#3 Song Osthon #2 Jeene laga hu by divan19 on pg 133 April 17 - Page 16

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Hi everyone, here I am with another os, it's based on the song, mahiya tu vada kar by milind gaba, suggested by pari21v,enjoy the os.

MAHIYA TU VADA KAR


Ishita was calling his number again and again while nobody was picking the phone making her hell scared. She was trying his number from last fifteen minutes but he was not responding making her scared, very scared.

She throw the phone in irritation and said -phone kyun nahi utha rahe raman, please pick the phone. She said and hide her face in her palm crying.

Mihika entered the room with a box of chocolates to feed her but stopped seeing ishita crying. She went to ishita and said -hey ishu, what happened, why u r crying. Tujhe toh khush hona chahiye, tune top kiya hai, puri university mein. Why u r crying sweetheart .

Ishita look at mihika and said -raman, he is not picking my phone. Unka exam achcha nahi gaya tha and he was very nervous about his result. I saw his result, unka ek paper mein back lag gaya hai. I am very worried for him, call bhi nahi utha rahe. Kya karun kuch samajh nahi aa raha. She said getting worried.

Mihika -tu relax kar, abhi call karega raman. Ho sakta hai phone silent par ho.

Ishita -raman ka phone kabhi silent par nahi rehta. He never miss my call. Jarur kuch problem hai, aiyyoo Murugan please keep him safe. Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai. She was saying when her phone rang.

Mihika look at the number and said -raman ka hi hai, baat kar.

Ishita picked the phone and said -hello raman, u r fine naa. She was saying when someone from other side said something making the phone slip from her hand and she crushed into the bed.

Mihika took the phone and said -hello kaun??

Mihir -hello miku, Main mihir. Raman bhai ne suicide attempt kiya hai. We r in hospital. Tum ishita ko le kar jaldi se aa jao. He said and hung the call making mihika shocked to no end.

Mihika look at ishita and she cried hiding her face in her palm shouting, Raman.

Mihika ran to her and said -ishu ishu, Raman hospital mein hai. Hume chalna chahiye .

Ishita hugged mihika and said-mere raman ko kuch,

Mihika cut her and said -apne murugan par bharosha rakho, Raman will be fine.

Ishita -main mar jaungi raman ke bina.

Mihika -aisa kuch nahi hoga. Woh bilkul thik ho jayenge, then u can scold him for taking such step. Aise koi karta hai, he should have think about u before doing such stupidity.

Ishita-uncle -aunty ke baare mein bhi nahi socha, how they will react if they come to know about this. Hum unko nahi batayenge, aunty ko heart problem bhi hai. She said getting worried.

Mihika -hum kisi ko nahi batayenge. Actually dekhna itna kuch bada nahi hoga. Raman bhai want ur lecture. Tabhi unhone aisa kiya.

Ishita -yes, u r right. Main maaf nahi karne wali. How dare he can do this to me. Achcha sabak seekhaungi.

Mihika -haan seekhana but for that u have to go there. Chalo mere saath.

Ishita nodded and both went to the hospital.

Soon they reach the hospital and saw mihir, romi and Neil waiting outside a room.

Ishita ran to them and asked -hows he??

Mihir -he is OK, blood loss ho gaya hai kaafi. Doctor ne kaha Ek do ghante mein hosh aa jayega.

Ishita -but yeh hua kaise??

Romi-its all because of that kamina param. He was taunting bhai, that he failed while u topped in the exam, not u will no longer be his girlfriend as he is a loser. Pata nahi tumhe khone ka darr tha yaa sabko face karne ka, he slit his wrist.

Ishita cried hearing this and said -paagal hai woh Ek dum. How can he even think like that, it's just a exam not his destiny. I know his exam wasn't went well as he was disturbed at the time of exam due to simmi ragging problem. Main jaanti hoon aap kuch, samajhti hoon unhe, still he did this. Main maaf nahi karungi unhe. I will just not spare him. She said crying while mihika was trying to console her.

All were sitting since two hours and finally doctor came out and said -pateint ko hosh aa gaya hai. I am going to call the cops and get him arrested as suicide is a punishable offence.

Ishita -please doctor, don't do this. He is a student, his whole career will be ruined.

Doc-yeh usse yeh kadam uthane ke pehle sochna chahiye tha. I have to call the cops.saying so he was going when ishita hold her hand and pleaded -please doctor, don't do this. Woh pehle se hi pareshan hai please don't add to his problem. I promise he will never repeat this. Main aapko bharosha dilati hoon. Please don't call the cops.

Doc-ok just for u, I am not calling the cops but tell him not to repeat such thing again. OK.

Ishita nodded and thanked him while he went saying that they can meet him.

All ran to meet him but stopped and said -ishita, u go first. U have the right to meet him first.

Ishita nodded and went inside. She saw him laying on the bed while his wrist was bandaged. She enter the room and he looked at the door hearing the footsteps. He look at her with guilty eyes while she looked at him with accusing eyes.

Raman look down and said -woh main, woh, actually I was, he was saying when she said -chup ekdum chup. U r not allowed to utter a word. How dare u do this, Ek exam, it was just a exam, and u took such a huge step for this. Kya woh Ek exam, aapki zindagi se badh kar tha, mere pyaar se badh kar tha, uncle -aunty, simmi, hum sab ke pyaar se badh kar tha. She said and cried while he got up and said hugging her -I am sorry jaan. Main nahi karna chahta tha aisa, u know naa I am strong. But phir achanak kya hua, I can't even describe, mujhe lagaa jaise sab kuch khatam ho gaya. Kuch bacha hi nahi hai zibdagi mein. I can see u going away because of this, maa -papa getting embarassed because of this, and I thought to finish my life before loosing u all because of this. He said only to get a slap from her.

Raman hold his cheek all shocked looking at her.

Ishita -u know raman, I was so proud of u when u stood by simmi in her ragging issue. U handled her so well, mujhe lagaa mere Raman sabse strong hai, aur agar kabhi main zindagi mein weak hui toh aap mujhe sambhalenge. But I never knew ki mere Raman itne coward hai, woh mujhe kya sambhalenge. Woh toh khud ko bhi nahi sambhal sakte, Itni choti si baat par suicide, itna bada step le lenge. Kya socha tha, Mar jaayenge aur sab asaan ho jayega. Have u ever felt ki agar bach gaye toh mujhe kaise face karenge. Yeh socha ki aapke bina mera kya hoga. Aapne vada kiya hai raman, aap mujhe kabhi chod kar nahi jayenge then how can u do this. U remember the day u proposed u, aapne vada kita tha ki mujhe kabhi nahi rone denge, then how can u be reason for my tears raman, how can u be. She said crying and he hugged her tight.

Raman -I am sorry jaan, I am really sorry. Main kisi cheez se nahi darta bas tumse alag hone ke khayal de bhi sihar jaata hoon. I thought u will go leaving me, as u r a topper and I failed. Tum mujhse relationship tod dungi. Tumhe kho dene ke ehsaas mein itni badi galti kar baitha, I am really sorry.

Ishita looked at Raman and said cupping his face -jis din aapko haan kaha tha,ussi dim aapki ho gayi thi hamesha ke liye. Aur mujhe koi fark nahi padhta iss Ek result so, coz I know my raman is my superhero. He will pass in every damn exam of life. Mujhe aap par pura bharosha hai raman. Aapne dhyaan nahi diya aap nahi padh paaye aur yeh hua. But I know u will pass with flying colours in next exam.mujhe bharosha hai apne raman par, and I will never go leaving u again. But aapko bhi mujhe promise karna hoga ki aap mujhe chod kar kabhi nahi jayenge.main aapki ishita hoon raman, I am urs forever. Mujhe pyaar karne ka haq aapka hai aur mujhe rone nahi dene ki responsibility bhi aapki hai, toh promise me that u will never go leaving ur ishita ur responsibility again. Promise me that u will never do anything like this again. Joh bhi problem hogi hum mil kar solve karenge, u just promise that u will never do this again, u will never ever try to go away from me. She said forwarding her hand.

Author's note-adding the Hindi translation also to make everyone understand as its a Punjabi song.

Ni main teri ho gayi aan
Tu mainu ron na devi

Main teri ho gai hun
tu mujhe rone mat dena

Enna meriyan akhiyan to
Hanju chon na devi

In meri akhon se
ansu mat nikalney dena

Jivein kave gaanv vi reh laangi
Hass hass ke sab kujh seh laangi

Jese kahega vese rehe lungi
has ker sab sehe lungi

Mahiya tu vaada kar
Mahiya tu vaada kar
Kade door na javega
Tu mere baajon
Kitte hor na lavega

Mahiya tu vadda ker
Mahiya tu vadda ker
kabhi door nahi jayega
tu mere bina
kahi or nahi jayega

Ni main teri ho gayi aan
Tu mainu ron na devi
Enna meriyan akhiyan to
Hanju chon na devi

Ve main teri ho gai hu
tu mujhe rone mat dena
in meri akhon se
ansu mat nikalney dena

Raman look at her red and puffy eyes and said wiping her tears -i promise jaan, I will never ever try to go away from u. Main tujhse bahut pyaar karta hoon, how can I go leaving u, bas tere chod kar jaane ke ehsaas se darr gaya tha.

Ishita sat next to him and said -aapko chod kar kahan jaaungi raman. Aap nahi jaante aapko kitna pyaar karti hoon. Aap hi se meri subah hai aur aap hi se meri shaam. Mere dil mein, dhadkan pe, mere zubaan par sirf Ek aapka hi naam rehta hai. Mere pyaar ki kaise itna low samajh sakte hau ki main aapko chod dungi. Never Raman, I will never leave u. Aapke hone se ho aapki ishita bhi hai. Aapki khushiyon se ho meri khushiyan hai. She said and hugged Raman tight.

Ho meri subha vi tuhiyon ae
Te tuhiyon shaam ae
Iss zuban te ikk hi naam
Oh tera naam ae

Ho meri subha bhi tuhi hai
or tuhi sham hai
iss zubaan per ek hi naam
vo tera naam hai

Kathputli teri main
Jivein marzi khed lavi
Tere layi lad jau rab naal
Aazma ke vekh lavi

Katputali teri main
jese marzi khel lena
tere liye ladh jaungi bhagwan se
aazma ker dekh lena

Tu hasda ae te mera rab hasda
Tere andar mera khuda vassda

Tu hasta hai to mera rab hasta hai
tere ander mera khuda hasta hai

Mahiya tu vaada kar
Mahiya tu vaada kar
Kade door na javega
Tu mere baajon
Kitte hor na lavega

Mahiya tu vadda ker
Mahiya tu vadda ker
kabhi door nahi jayega
tu mere bina
kahi or nahi jayega

Ve main teri ho gayi aan
Tu mainu ron na devi
Enna meriyan akhiyan to
Hanju chon na devi

Llb main teri ho gai hu
tu mujhe rone mat dena
in meri akhon se
ansu mat nikalney dena

Raman -i know ishita, I trust ur love but what to do, woh param, he was saying when ishita said -woh toh kahega hi, after all I denied to him and said yes to u. Toh woh toh chahega hi hume alag karna. But it's our love for each other Raman, who will keep us together.

Tere layi jag chhadeya
Tu mainu na chhad devi
Ae ishq de baagan ch
Na kar tu ad devi

Tere liye jahan chora
tu mujhe mat chor dena
ye ishq ke baagan mai
na ker dena alag tu

Kandiyan ch nacha layi tu
Na see karun sohne
Taan vi main hass hass ke
Jee jee karun sohne

Kanton mai nacha lena tu
na see karungi soneya
to bhi hass has ker
jee jee karungi soneya

Mere tere naal ne cha sajna
Tu manzil tuhiyon raah sajna

Mere tere sath hai kuch sapney sathiya
tu manzil tuhi rasta sathiya

Mahiya tu vaada kar
Mahiya tu vaada kar
Kade door na javega
Tu mere baajon
Kitte hor na lavega

Raman broke the hug and said -tumhe sach koi fark nahi padhta that I, he was saying when she put her finger on his lips and said -nahi padhta, mujhe koi fark nahi padhta raman, kyunki Ek certificate hamare pyaar ki tafree nahi badal sakta. Hum dono saath the, saath hai aur hamesha saath rahenge. Aap jaldi se thik ho jaiye, then u fill the form, give exam and pass with flying colours.

Raman -i am sorry jaan. Meri wajah se tumhari top karne ki khushi bhi kharab ho gayi.

Ishita -agar aap thik ho, toh main khush hoon. Agar aap thik nahi toh duniya ki koi khushi mujhe khush nahi kar sakti. All I want u to stay happy raman, just be with me to keep me smiling. She said and hugged Raman tight. Raman too hugged ishita and said -i love u ishita, love u alot. Saying so he pecked her temple while she hide into his chest and said -i love u too raman, I love u too.

Mahiya tu vadda ker
Mahiya tu vadda ker
kabhi door nahi jayega
tu mere bina
kahi or nahi jayega

Ve main teri ho gayi aan
Tu mainu ron na devi
Enna meriyan akhiyan to
Hanju chon na devi

Ve main teri ho gai hu
tu mujhe rone mat dena
in meri akhon se
ansu mat nikalney dena

That's all, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful one dear..
Such a long & nice Update..
The words added more beauty to the update...
Raman, his nature & background was very catchy ..
As is Ishu's strong will..
It's attractive...
Love was definite to brew between them...
Loved it dear...
Awesome work by u..
Thanks for pm :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb os
Raksha di
Love ishra
Update next one soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow! What a lovely OS
Overwhelmed to see the depth of love of ishu
Raman got weak and done a crime attempting suicide
Ishu is extremely angry and disheartened to see like that
Ishu made him understand and pacifyed, no matter they will be always united...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os dii
A different college love story
Loved it
Thnx for the pm dii
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Posted: 7 years ago
emotional OS
very well written
nice message for those who attempt suicide for petite issues

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