Dont Depend On Me:ShiVika SS chapter 5 page 3

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Hi Guys,
This is my new SS on the whole family but Mainly on shivaay/shivika..The characters,plot everything is same as the show.Hope you all like it.
chapter 1 and 2 on page 1
chapter 3 on page 2
chaper 4 page 3

Dont Depend on me

Chapter 1:

Everyone was very happy as it was Sangeet ceremony of Rudra and Bhavya. Finally the Youngest Member of the family was going to get married. "Woh Bhi Shaheed Ho jayega" said Om and Shivaay jokingly. Everyone was enjoying and dancing around when suddenly there was a power cut.

Darkness all around! The thing that Annika feared the most had encircled her. Her heart uttered the name of her solace"Shivaay"!
"Shii" she tried to call him but even words couldnt come out of her mouth,so scared she was. The only thing she knew or moreover wanted was to be in the safest place in the world,Shivaay's arms.
She knew like always he would come to her,but couldnt understand the reason of his delay as usually he would just rush to her immedietly.
Shivaay was standing behind the pillar,looking at annika.
Her fright and her tears pierced his heart. He wanted to go and take her into his arms,Tell her that her Suraj is here,no need to be scared but he stopped himself. He just wished that Annika fights her fears.
"Sahara nahi par saath ki sabko zarurat hoti hai" He remembered her words to Annika. He cursed himself as somehow he had taught annika to be dependent on him.
He saw annika shiver in fear. He couldnt control himself now. He rushed to her just when the lights came back.

To be continued
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Chapter 2:

Shivaay saw Annika shiver in fear,He couldnt control himself anymore. He rushed to annika just when the lights came back. Annika felt relieved once her vision became clear. She saw that Shivaay was stading just behind her. She felt strange as Shivaay was so close to her,yet he didnt come to her. That Shivaay who could feel her pain being miles apart couldnt hear her snobs standing meters away,she felt very strange. She wanted to question Shivaay on his weird behavior but thought it would be inappropriate to do that in front of everyone.
After the sangeet ceremony was over,Annika rushed to her room without even looking at shivaay. Shivaay knew the reason behind her behavior. He didnt know how would he answer her questions once he enters the room.
"Why didnt you come to me?" Annika questioned as soon as Shivaay entered the room.
"What are you saying annika,i was with you throughout the dance" Answered shivaay trying to be ignorant.
" its not the dance i am talking about and you know it very well. When the lights went out,and i was shivering in fear why didnt you come to me when you were around me?"
" You didnt call me out,so how would i know that you need me?"questioned shivaay.
" Oh so now i need to call you to tell you i need you Shivaay.I very well know that you can sense me and my feelings better than i do myself. You very well knew that i am so scared of darkness,then also you didnt come to comfort me" Each word of annika pierced shivaays heart,and tear which fell down from her eyes added to his pain.
"It was just Darkness annika and everyone was around,it was not like you were in some great trouble and i couldnt save you. Its not a big deal"
Annika was shocked hearing these words from shivaays mouth. She couldnt comprehend that how could her shivaay say all this. Yes,it was just darkness,not a big deal. If anyone else would have said it Annika could understand but it was her shivaay saying those words. She knew that before hurting her shivaay would die million times.She took a glance towards him. His eyes spoke of the pain that he was hiding. His everyword had hurt him more then it had hurt Annika and Annika understood it very well. But she didnt know how to know what was the thing which was paining him. So she just decided to end the topic and go to sleep.
" Ya it was just darkness,I should learn to be more brave and self reliant. Not a big deal. Lets just sleep shivaay" With this Annika went to the bed and called shivaay to sleep too.
"You sleep Annika i have some work so i will have to be in the study room. Good night!" exclaimed shivaay.
Shivaay went to the study room,locked the door took a glass vase and broke it to release all his pain,his anger on himself.
"How can i even say that to annika" saying that he squeezed the glass piece in his hand. Blood oozed out from his hand.
"Shivaay,open the door" he heard annikas voice.

to be continued
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Poor shivay. Feel bad for him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaritaMSK

Poor shivay. Feel bad for him

Ya..and his reason is even more sad
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Your writing is so amazing! I could feel every feeling g being described. Everything was awesome.
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Originally posted by: jaansahiba

Your writing is so amazing! I could feel every feeling g being described. Everything was awesome.

Thank you so,much!your feedback really means a lot
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Chapter 3:

"Shivaay open the door" He heard annikas voice.
"If annika sees me like this she will surely understand that something is wrong. What should i do" shivaay thought to himself.
"Shivaay whats taking you so long.Open the door.You are worrying me!" Annika exclaimed.
"Wait annika i am opening"
As the door opened,Annika felt shocked seeing the condition of the room and mostly of shivaay. Messy hair,eyes swollen like he just had cried.
Annikas attention went on shivaays hand which was bleeding badly .
She immedietly rushed towards him without noticing the glass pieces on the floor. She was just about to hurt her feet from them when Shivaay placed his hand below her feet to protect her. His hands started to bleed more.
Annika was shocked.
"What did you do shivaay?" She cried and took his hands in her.
"Its bleeding so much. It must be paining so much.Already you hands were hurt and you again hurt them to save me. Its paining very much?" Annika talked continuously.
"Its nothing annika. Dont worry,its not hurting. But why were you in so much hurry,you could have hurt yourself.why dont you take care of yourself?"Asked shivaay.
" I have already hurt myself" Annika said wiping the blood off his hands" And its paining much more" Annika put antiseptic on his hands while tears were continuously flowing from her eyes.
"Stop crying annika! you know i hate tears in your eyes..stop stop" Shivaay said wiping her tears away.
"Shivaay,how did the vase broke and how did you hands get hurt?" Questioned annika.
"I by mistake ..by mistake threw the vase away..ya" Said shivaay,trying to not have any eye contact with annika.
"Does he think i am such a fool that i wont understand how he got hurt? The man who put his palm below my feet to save them tells that i should learn to be brave in darkness.
I know you very well shivaay. you must have hurt yourself as you hurt me. I cant see you go through all this alone. i know you wont share with me but i will find a way" Thought annika.
Ok shivaay. I think you work is over. Lets sleep.
shivaay agreed to avoid any more questions.

to be continued

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It is so heart wrenching to see the pain theytbothbare going through.itwould be great if you can update longer parts.
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Originally posted by: SaritaMSK

It is so heart wrenching to see the pain theytbothbare going through.itwould be great if you can update longer parts.

Ya..its really painful for them.
I was thinking the same to have longer updates.otherwise its hard for readers.due to some issues i couldnt..but now will surely try
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Chapter 4:

It was mid night,Annika saw shivaays sleeping figure besides her but sleep was away from her eyes as she was constantly thinking about what could be the reason behind shivaays strange behaviour. She knew he was hiding something like always,like always he was being the great wall protecting all of them from some problem. But never was the problem so intense that Shivaay would leave annika in state of fear.
"Tumhe andhere se dar lagta hai phir yaha akeli kya kar rahi ho?" She remembered Shivaays question,his worry even though he was pretending to have forgotten her.However big the problem be,Shivaay would never leave Annika in fear,in pool of tears. This made annika more scared as the problem would be so big that shivaay left her in that state. Annika could not get the image of the way she saw shivaay in the study room out of her mind. She can never see Shivaay in that state.
Annika was lost in her thoughts when she heard shivaay mumble something..
"Annika.I am sorry.Please forgive me..Annika..Annika" Shivaay mumbled in sleep,turning around anxiously.
"what happened shivaay, i am here" Said annika putting her hand on his head trying to soothe him. As she put her hand on his forehead,she realised he had high fever.
"Shivaay..you have high fever..your body is burning.let me call the doctor" Annika stood up instantly just when shivaay held her hand .
"Please dont leave me annika. I know i did wrong. I did wrong with you from very beginning but please dont leave me."Saying this shivaay hugged annika.
Annika put her hand on his head and other on his shoulder protectively.
"I will never leave you shivaay. And what are you even saying,you have filled my life with happiness,given me love of the whole family just from yourself!" Annika exclaimed on his stupid thoughts.
"But still,please dont leave me ..atleast now..i want..my..last..mo"
"What are saying shivaay,I cant understand" Annika asked tapping his shoulder. Getting no response she saw down,Shivaay had slept.
She carefully laid shivaay down on the bed,Brought medicines for fever and fed them to shivaay.
She went to the other side of the bed,laid down,lifted shivaays head and put it on her chest,enclosed him in her protective embrace. She felt that shivaays abnormal breathing became normal,he had calmed down.
But she had not calmed down,What could be the reason which bought her shivaay to this state.She vowed to find out the reason whatever path she has to take!

To be continued

Edited by mjhtbest - 7 years ago

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