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Originally posted by: muskanp

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Part 25



When they landed in California and left the airport, all ready to get into the next available cab, Maan was shocked to find a familiar figure approaching them.
Oh my God! Maan breathed as he watch Geet walking towards him.
She had a twinkle in her eye and then just like that he pulled her to him, she just wrapped her arms around his neck, he pressed his lips on her head ever so softly.

The hug was tender, undemanding, almost yearning, almost begging, and it left him almost begging for more.

How is my jaan? she chuckled

He was little lost of words, one simply because he was blown with all that begging emotions churning in him, and second he was just perplexed all the questions racing in his mind.

She smiled at him and turned to take blessings from everyone.

He could just watch her bending down and touching his moms feet, then chachi ji. Papaji and chacha ji.

Chachi ji - isne tho kaha ki tum busy ho

Geet smiled - haan ji wo, meri meeting thi, main ne cancel kardi

Aap tho janthe hain.. Maan humesha thodi yun meri paas aathen hain..

Now how often does that happen.

She looked at him meaningfully.

She flashed one of her beautiful smile to daadi and hugged her - is liyen main ne sari meetings cancel kardi.


Daadi looked like she was about to cry after hearing that.

Priya patted geets cheeks - It's good to know that Maan is your priority

Geet blushed ji wo tho..

Everyone was waiting for her to complete the sentence, but she hid her face in priyas' arms and softly murmured sabse upper hair, list starts with him


Just then her driver pulled infront of them
Chacha ji - we are staying in xyz hotel

Geet instantly resisted - nahi chacha ji.. Then she hesitated and said consciously, u have come to my city, u will have to stay with us. Mama-papa ko aacha nahi lagen ga.


Everyone was bit taken aback, but loved it. Everyone happily boarded the fleet of cars. Maan pulled her the elbow and looked at her worriedly. He was not at all happy involving her parents in this pretense.

What was he thinking.. "Handa's

Why would they even agree to all this.


Geet softly creased his hand that rested on her elbow. His grip softened.

As the car pulled infront of a huge mansion, everyone was just awed by the beauty and the gorgeous landscaping.


Geets parents welcomed his family with so much of love and warmth. It was not a surprise that both their girls were so grounded. Her parents treated them with all respect and expressed how happy they were in meeting them. It was Maan's turn to be at his best behavior, he didn't know if he wanted to raise anyones hope.



The servants settled papji-mamji in a room. Chacha ji -chachi in a room. Daadi ji in a room. And maan in a different room.

Geet dipped her head - ji wo..

Mom - dad may not like if u stayed in my room.

She said it so softly to him, yet his mom heard it and blushed.

Priya nudged maan - I'm sure you two lovebirds missed each other over the week.

Maan was so conscious now.

Geet tried to ease the air by saying why don't you all freshen up. Let me know if you have any particular plans

Chacha ji - We just want to go around the city

May be see your business, even Maan's dad took a lot of interest.

Geets mom suggested they could have some snacks and then head out.



Maan stared at her a she sweetly escaped to show him her house. He didn't say anything. He was mad at her. She was playing her fiance part little too well. It was not just a job well done, it was overkill! It was almost as if she was really trying to gain his family's approval! Dam for what. And she was not afraid to use her charms and all her... privileges to achieve that! Grr he was so annoyed. They passed couple of rooms and across the huge hall.

She also didn't say anything for his silence.


The double doors opened to a much bigger room. It had a huge fireplace, elegant mirror, and a huge TV adored the wall. She had a sofa set with a footrest and a massive rug in front of the fireplace. Towards the center, beside the door leading to the balcony that had a wonderful view of the landscaping, was a huge king-sized bed. Her room was one massive space just like her heart.



She closed the door behind and raised her brow at him.

Geet - you think you can talk to me now?

He suddenly remembered he was mad at her. He was so irritated, he didn't want to speak and so he just started walking forward and backward pushing his hair back.
He was restless and didn't know what to tell her. & just like that everything vanished as she hugged him from back. He was about to snap out but she just leaned into him, resting her head on his back, wrapping her arms around him.
Geet - I am so glad you are here.

And her hug deepened and he knew she meant it. He turned & cupped her face looking down at her. Thats when he noticed her beautiful eyes. They looked so exhausted.
Maan - kya baat hain
She just shook her head - I am just tired. Its been a long week.
She just rested her head on his chest wrapping him in a bear hug. Maan kissed her head - u didn't have to do all this. Mom would have understood. You didn't have to.. He paused. You didn't have to go against my plans.

Geet sighed - and what? Let ur mom think that u r not my priority.

Maan countered - u know it is a fake engagement

Geet smiled sweetly - I heard you say.. U missed me

Maan instantly pulled away from the hug and turned his back to her. Geet smiled yet again, she knew he was blushing and he was embarrassed.

Yes he said that to her, he meant it too. But he never knew he was going to see her that to in couple of hours


She cutely came around and kissed his cheeks.. Oye oye.. I missed these cheeks. Making him turn beet red. She boldly kissed him.. I missed u too..a lot. And know this Mr Khurana I wouldn't miss a chance play your fiance. So just let it be na..

Maan tried to be serious - I really don't want to take so many favours. I know u r very busy

Geet - nahi jaan, I am really glad u r here. I can definitely take some time to relax

Maan - and u need me to do that?


She just sighed and hugged him, tired of his stubborn self. She took deep breaths and didn't say anything. And he knew he was being unreasonable. He missed her too.. Missed this.. For some reason he knew she needed him right now. She did look stressed out. She did need that anchor someone on her side who wouldn't put any pressures on her, would instead attempt to take that pressure away. He would do anything for her. So he wound his arms around her waist and hugged her back.
Maan - thanks geet, he said ever so softly. I am sure my family won't doubt our relationship anymore. "You're doing more than you should. I don't know how would I ever pay back to you.

Aur yeh sab

Geet - shh !!! my city my treat

Maan chuckled - expensive treat he complained

She laughed pushing him on the bed, he was taken by surprise. She just fell with a thud next to him on the huge king size bed laughing her hair forming that beautiful shield around them. He stared at her, softly caressing her cheeks - what happened.

Geet - i didn't sleep last night

Maan - why

Geet - we had this take over last night and then u know na usual formalities,

had to fill in for Tim in the morning. He to attend the school meetings she giggled.

Meeting had just finished when you had called me.

She kicked off his shoes, easing beside him. She looked really tired.
Maan felt so gulity - I shouldn't have just imposed on you.
Geet smiled - I just need a power nap.
Maan stared at her blankly, he exactly knew how she felt. God knows how many days he and his dad have spent hours working like this to bring Khurana's to where they are today.


She looked like she hasn't slept for days. She was stressed. But she still had a smile on her face. Her eyes still had that sparkle. She looked like a happy girl. Oh my.. How sweetly she said she just needs a nap and she will be able to entertain his family.. All this was so endearing for him.
It was beyond him, as his hands reached and touched her cheek.

She smiled at him and then she reached forward and pulled him to her. His heart pounded in his chest. Is she going to kiss him in her room, in her bed!
But she didn't kiss him. Instead she pulled him to lie down next to her, resting head on his shoulder, enclosing him in a hug.
Geet whispered - Lie with me na, for a while

Maans heart just went out for her. How could he say no to that? It was too sweet.. He just obliged and patted her head softly. He felt her softly kissing his chest and then drifted off to sleep locked in his arms. He didn't know what he was feeling anymore. He knew he was attracted to her physically. But this... this was not the same. This isn't sexiness or physical attraction. This was... warmth and comfort. As much as he would like to deny it, because he knew he was not ready for a relationship just yet, this... felt wonderful. He felt comfortable, and warm. As if there was no place he would rather be. As if she really did belong to him. He fell asleep himself and his dreams filled with her laughter.


He woke up after an hour and a half. She was still in his arms, her head lodged in his shoulders. She smelled lavender feminine.
He felt her hands snake him and then felt her kissing his chest whispering Maan.


He looked down wondering if she was waking him up.. But she was still asleep. Instantly, he felt warm. She whispered his name in her sleep. He smiled to himself, unable to believe that it could be real. He buried his head closer to her and closed his eyes.


He woke up after 30 mins sighing. She lazily looked up at him with that cute smile - challen?

Maan - u ok?

she looked amazing, she felt contented

Geet kissed him - thanks

She quickly gets up - Well, as far as your family concerned, we have a real, happy relationship. And we need to go so I can make an impression on my future mother-in-law.
Maan laughed - I think they're already in love with you, geet
Geet - I seem to be winning every one of your relative's approval, except yours.
Maan shook his head - that's because I was the only one who knew you were acting.
It was an awkward silence that followed. Even he knew it was not worth mentioning.



The moment passed and at knock at the door came as his savior. They straighten themselves and open the door. Daadi smiles at both of them. She softly patts their cheeks.

Daadi - aab issen yeh phena hi do

Maan looks at her blankly, unsure what to say or do. He had this deep need to undo what he said little while ago and this seemed perfect. Geet didn't know what to say either. He could have given into her. But instead he slipped it in.


thanks a lot for all the love

NEXT PART 26

this FF is bit long.. has more to it

shall try to update.. can't promise anything

Thanks again

Muskan


Edited by muskanp - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update muskan after a long time hope u r doing good.n i hv to read the story again as i hv lost the track but still want maaneet always together

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