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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 7 years ago

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LAST PART (A) PAGE 49 CLICK ME

LAST PART (B) PAGE 55 CLICK ME

FINALE PAGE 56

Edited by suhaaana - 4 years ago

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#SHOT 1

Traditions should be changed accordingly. There was a time when we were not allowed to even see our brides and now you are .. before Raj Khurana could continue to impart some sense in his spoilt , immature son who was getting out of his hands now.

Maan looked at his father like he has grown two heads. He was saying the things those were written in the paper by his mother he was sure of.

You are talking about hundred years back dad. Mum and you had a love marriage if you remember or do I have to start telling all those embarrassing stories that mum told me all these years. Have I told you about how nimi Masi told me how you and mum lied to nanu. And if we are so much concerned about changing traditions then please the first thing we are going to cut these luscious locks of yours. For heaven sake I can't even tell if it's you or mum sometimes. I am telling you dad even though I like your long black locks tied with a ribbon but be aware of your grandchildren they might take you as their grandma.

Maan's words made his father wack his head. He was such an insolent child sometimes.

You insolent child making fun of your father's hair. Raj glared at his only son. He was just useless sometimes and if he didn't agree Maan to come to the ball she has organised for the charity than he would have to sleep a week in the guest room.

Grandbabies oh wow, darling.. you are already thinking of them.. came a voice that startled both father and son. Maan turned and saw his mother , she was still an epitome of youth and vigor and the smile that she was having on her face was telling Maan that she was with some planning.

Raj, hazel eyes, black hair grand babies how wonderful isn't it. I am sure they will look like Maan only.

Maan was dumbstruck. His mother was already planning how his children would look like and he was like numb.

Darling make sure to get yourself a date for the charity ball and if you can't find let me know I know many beautiful bright young ladies who are willing to give you a chance.

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Next: will Maan be able to find a date

Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

I was just surfing across the forum, aur maine dekha, yeh kya??😲
Suhana di has written something new😳
Hilarious update di..😆
Did his dad's speech was really scripted??
Too bad daddyji, you had the luxury of love marriage but are forcing your son..
Don't be a hypocrite now..😳
Maan's comment about his dad's hairs was epic..🤣
Such unique parents he has..
His mom is already thinking of grand babies..
It will be interesting to see his search for date..😛
Oh boy!! itna hasa diya mujhe di aapne.. pet dukh raha hai
superb start.. boley to ek dum jhakkas..👏

Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

you are all rounder yaar ...
Congo

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

interesting starting...

loved it very much...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

yeh piece agar thoda pehle likha hota toh you surely would have been nominated for comedy story..
sach mein, talent koot koot ke bhara hai aap mein.. thoda zyada likha karo na..

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
<font color="#CC0000"><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">yeh piece agar thoda pehle likha hota toh you surely would have been nominated for comedy story..
sach mein, talent koot koot ke bhara hai aap mein.. thoda zyada likha karo na..</font></font>

+1
she has so many different concept
I will go on strike if she doesn't complete it...and I'm serious

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Rosmitha

@Rosmitha

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Interesting dear...

Waiting for next update

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hilarious update loved how maan teasing his dad looong black hair that may look too girly Raj was dumbfounded how maan start to talk about his babies but maan mother so forward giving subtle hints about the kind of babies she wants maan so numb to hear how his own mother describe the grandbabies description maan needs to find a date or she will do the honors herself