RiKara TS: Oh Saaware | Last shot - pg 8

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GumnaamHaiKoii

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Stunner

+ 28

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Amazing End to this Beautiful story.

Keep writing

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rutujakolhe02

@rutujakolhe02

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

So cute n sweet it is. There was constant smile on my face. Beautifully written

Loved it😊

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

That was very sweet

They are destined to be together

He finally found his peace

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Minal Telgade

@Minalt

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

This is superb, awesome update.

I don't have a word to explain how much I love it.

And it's epilogue is like a cherry on a cake.

Thank a lot Savinaa 👏 👏

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

It's so beautiful...so lovely and natural...the small girl who made omkara smile again came in to his life...that's what destiny had planned for them... untold truth itself has a beauty...expecting more from you...

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AhamyTed

@AhamyTed

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

After i read the first part , i wanted things to go exactly the way you've potrayed it !

Thank you❤️

This was really beautiful ...⭐️❤️

The two have so many things untold between them...🤔 which i can only imagine to be ever discussed...

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

This was such a cute and sweet story...
Loved reading it!!!

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

sooo beautiful... 😳

as the way I thought... so beautifully written...
pls write like this more

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meghnas

@meghnas

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

awww this was so sweet! Loved how you connected their childhoods together!
such a beautiful story ❤️❤️

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Rumadiv

@Rumadiv

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Dear Savina,

Its really a well written Story of Om n Ri both being destined together in their childhood itself. Well penned one. I had guessing that in the epilogue Om n Ri would recall their childhood memories and would know tat they were already met reminisce their memories. But its ok whatever the story was amazing.

With love,

Divya

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