Pretan SS : Passionate Love Last Part 8: Pg 7 - Page 4

Preeta goes back to home after living the happiest moment of her life. She could never imagine of falling in love with a guy whose face she did not even dreamt. She was selfless for everybody but has become selfish when it comes to Karan. On the other side Karan too sees himself as not Karan Luthra but somebody else who has become lover.

"Why am I feeling so different today talks to himself on mirror

Karan : I have fallen for Ms Mental, is it for real (pinch himself and shouts)

Rishab : what are you blabbering to yourself my little brother

Karan ; nothing bhai, you didn't sleep yet (asks him)

Rishab : No, I thought I should have some chat with you for a while

Karan ; why not? come lets both enjoy our time, you know even I want share so many things with you

Both brothers goes out in garden to get some fresh air from whole day workload.

Rishab : so how's your cricket practice? you are not even updating me

Karan : its great but something is bothering me from long time

Rishab : what?

"You were right, this BPL is something all can do, but real dream is going into international, so I have decide to start working more hard from now on gives his promise to Rishab

"What has gotten to my brother, today taps on his small head

Karan ; I got my sense bhai, that there more in life rather than all this parties, and girls, I want to make you all proud

Rishab : you know that if anybody in this world had given me happiness is only you

Karan : love you bhai, you see how I make my name in international

Rishab : that day will be the best day of my life (hugs his kiddo brother)

Karan : you wanted to say something

Rishab ; I did but now that you said everything I have no words

Karan : I never understand your language

Rishab : you will when you get in love

"What? you are in love Karan asks shockingly

Rishab ; I thought not to tell you, since you don't believe in all that but I don't have anybody else to share with

Karan : I can't believe you can be so shy, I will tell mom tomorrow that get ready for my brother's marriage, just tell me the name (stands up)

"Preeta words come out from his mouth

Karan freezes the same moment he hears the name. Was she the same Preeta whom he proposed while ago for him and now his brother also gave his heart to her. He feels like ground slipping underneath his feet. His heart and mind are in race of what to tell his brother, should be reveal his love and reopen his brother's wound that has not been healed yet after Sherlyn's drama.

"Karan, where are you lost Rishab puts his hands on shoulder

Karan : bhai, you love Preeta? from when

Rishab : ever since I saw her but I don't want to force her for anything, if she wants to remain my friend I will happily accept that decision too

Karan : you will be happy right if she agrees to marry?

Rishab : that will be my life's biggest happiness, you know Karan when mom asked me to marry, I always made fun of her idea but when Preeta explained me th importance of marriage I realize how beautiful this relation can be

Karan is not able to understand the language of his heart first time. All on his mind its his brother's happiness and Preeta's faith on him.

"Have you ever noticed her she is just perfect to be a life partner, how can anybody not like her Rishab keeps pouring his feeling out

Karan ; what if she does not love you?

Rishab : As I said, I don't mind that but then I won't be able to marry anybody else now, Karan you are friend too why don't you ask her

"There is nobody in this world who can reject my brother, you see Preeta will agree to this marriage Karan assures his brother though he knows Preeta will be broken in million pieces with all this

Rishab : I don't want to do anything that will hurt her

Karan ; you are not hurting her bhai, she will definitely agree,trust me

Rishab : you don't know what you have done for me, I will always pray to god he will send an angel in your life so you can also feel this beautiful relation

Karan : you know I won't get married, right now its your time

Rishab ; now come on, its enough for one night, good night

Karan ; good night brother

After Rishab leaves Karan instead of going to room, drive to hill. He had to control very hard his feelings in front of Rishab without shedding any tears.

"NOO shouts out from his lungs as loud as he can taking all his pain out. It happened again with them but this time was more serious. Rishab however left his dream years ago to let his brother achieve the success of star. Now again his brother was derived of the happiness. He cannot let that happen to the person who is father figure in his life but on the other side is the girl who has changed him completely from a casanova flirt to somebody who can love truly.

"No bhai, this time I will not let you down, you will get your love, this is your brother's promise gets drunk while talking to himself

Sameer comes there who heard the conversation between Rishab and Karan

"Bhai, what have you done to yourself Sameer tries to balance him

"You also came here to lecture me Sammy, leave me alone pushes him away to other side

Karan : I don't know why god always does this with us, give us the same thing, but I am also smart, he is trying to test our brother's relation, till I am alive nothing take away my bhai's happiness

Sameer ; dont' be crazy bhai, you won't be able to handle this heartbreak nor will Preeta, this is wrong

"There is not right or wrong when it comes to my brother's happiness do you get that Karan silences him to not tell anybody about his love

Sameer takes half conscious Karan back at home making sure nobody would see him in this state. He carefully put him back on bed and leaves the room. Sameer gets worried about Karan's behavior of making himself bad in Preeta's eyes. Only he has been able to understand how the thorn would pierce slowly through Karan's heart and kill him inside seeing his brother and love together in same roof.

Next day Karan wakes up with heavy head and looks at clock. He makes his mind to convince Rakhi for Rishab and Preeta's marriage even if he has to go through Preeta's hatred.

Karan ; mom I want to talk something important

Rakhi ; yes what is it? never saw you so serious like this

Karan : don't you think bhai needs somebody in his life to share his feelings

Rakhi : I know but you know your brother will not agree so easily

Karan ; he will if you find his choice of girl

"What Rakhi asks him again

Karan : yes mom, and even you like her, in fact you wanted to make her your daughter in law remember

Rakhi : Preeta? are you saying truth

Karan ; mom, she is very nice girl, and perfect for bhai, she will keep him very happy I am sure

Rakhi : but does she like Rishab too

"You know how she is, her friendship with bhai is too deep, she will agree to marry Karan tells his mom

Rakhi decides to visit Arora family for Rishab and Preeta's alliance. Unaware of everything Preeta is wooing her dreams with Karan. Shrishti teases her for the change on her face but at the same time is very happy. Luthra family takes step forward to ask Preeta's hand for Rishab.

Sarla : Rakhiji, you didn't even informed us about your coming, we could have done some arrangements

Rakhi : we did not came here as guest today, but as relatives

Dadi : what are you saying?

"Sarlaji, we came here to ask hand of your daughter for my son today Rakhi looks at Preeta who is blueing

Preeta : that means Karan told aunty about us, wow not bad Mr Luthra

Shrishti : di, I didn't expected Karan sir would be in so much rush that he sent his mom the very next day of proposal

Preeta : thats strange, but we are talking about Karan Luthra, he always like to do twisted things

Rakhi : Preeta, what do you have to say dear, will you come to my house as daughter

Preeta nods in blush. Rishab is remained stunned to hear her answer but is happy to see confirmation on her face.

Sarla : I never expected that my daughter will go to such big house

Rakhi : we are not different, and I always see Preeta as my daughter,

Shrishti and Preeta goes inside the room sharing their happiness.

Rakhi : I think we all should remove the cast of evil from both

Sarla : Preeta come out for a minute

Rakhi makes her stand with Rishab which confuses her. She takes a moment to see Karan around but he did not came.

Sarla : what a perfect pair this is, I am so happy Preeta, you got such a great family

Another moment what Rakhi reveals will take away all Preeta's happiness. She tells how Karan convinced her to get them married quickly.

Rakhi : this morning my Karan for first time praised Preeta, and told me how this two are hiding their love

Shrishti is about to say something but is stopped by her sister. Preeta's heart breaks in million pieces that she could not collect them. Karan had showed his true colors to her right after the confession. He broke her to the extent. After everybody leaves Preeta goes to Luthra house to get answers from Karan. She sees him sitting in his room looking at her picture in his phone.

"Wow, Mr Luthra, somebody should learn from you how to play, you turned out to be real player, I must say walks inside clapping with smile but there is lot of pain behind that smile

Karan : Preeta, you here?

"Why, should I not be here, after all i will be your brother's wife, I have full right to be here right holds his collar tightly

Karan : what are you doing

"Shut up her voice roars in the whole room but there is nobody in house

"Why Karan, you did not even bother to ask me once before doing all this talks while grinning and holds his collar very tightly pushing him

Karan ; I did for my brother's happiness

"And what about mine, do I mean nothing in your life, you made fun of my love Karan, why did you do this Preeta starts crying loudly tearing his shirt slowly

"Preeta, you and brother are my life, I am nothing without you both, but this time I cannot snatch Rishab's happiness Karan bends down on floor cups her face both sides and touches her head

Preeta : I won't be able to do this, please take your decision back

Karan : I cannot give you happiness on my brother's broke heart, please Preeta you have to do this for me

Preeta with heavy heart agrees only for her Karan's sake who is going to suffer more than anybody. Both of them are lost in each other and not letting go from their arms.

The story comes to initial scene where Preeta was crying in her room right before her wedding time. Shrishti had enough of her sister's tears and sacrifice for everybody. She directly goes to Rishab who is getting ready and is kind of shocked to see her.

Rishab : Shrishti is everything okay?

"Please save my sis, Rishabji pleads in front of him

Rishab : what happened to her?

Shrishti : stop this marriage, my sister will die if marries without her consent, please save her from this punishment

Rishab : please tell me clearly

"Any girl would be lucky to marry you but Preeta di does not love, she loves Karan Sir a lot, this will be unfair with three of you Rishabji holds his hands

"But Karan never told me and why is Preeta marrying me then asks her

Shrishti : because your brother wants this he wants your happiness

Rishab is shaken by the truth not believing his brother took such big step without any thinking. He promises Shrishti to fix everything. Later during marriage ceremony Preeta is brought down in bridal attire. Karan had no courage to see in her eyes after what he did to her soul. He killed from inside ever since the marriage is fixed. Rishab looks at him in despair. The priest calls Rishab

Rakhi : Rishab, panditji is calling you

"One second mom, I will bring the groom goes to Karan who is standing in corner

Mahesh ; what are you doing? its time for wedding

Rishab : dad, till today I thought my Karan is childish, but understands everybody's feelings, he was kid for us but today he showed he has grown up

Preeta looks at Karan with tears as well others too.

Dadi : Rishab, whats wrong did he do something wrong

"Karan, tell Dadi what fabulous job you have done, you said you will make proud, well done, you really made our heads high today claps in front of everything

Karan : bhai, what did I do

"You did such big thing and asking what you have you done goes to Preeta and points at her

Karan doubts him knowing the truth. Rishab reveals Karan and Preeta's love in front of everybody.

Flashback

After Shrishti left Rishab got chance to talk with Preeta alone before marriage.

"Preetaji, i wanted to ask you the day we came at your home but didn't get chance' looks at her

Preeta ; what do you want to talk about?

Rishab ; before I always felt that I am nothing more than friend in your life but that day when you agreed to marry me for a minute I could not accept that, your eyes always spoke something else

Preeta : I don't know what are you talking about

Rishab : just answer my one question, are you happy with this marriage

Preeta's silence confirms Rishab's doubt as she knows deep down that this marriage will not make her happy.

Rishab : thank you for being honest, do you love anybody else

"I love Karan, but this was his decision to sacrifice his love Preeta looks down

Rishab : you don't have to look down, its not your fault, if my brother is stubborn I am double than him, wipe your tears

Flashback ends

Karan is speechless about everything and realizes his mistake.

"You held this finger, and started to walk, now you have grown so much that you are walking alone Rishab slaps him softly without hurting his ears

"I am sorry bhai, I had no courage to see you breakdown Karan hugs his brother very tightly in front of everybody

Rishab : silly boy, you have considered your brother so weak, don't you know you biggest possession is your smile, if you lose that then I will die thousand death

Rakhi and Mahesh feel proud of getting sons who are ready to die for each other's happiness. Rishab makes Karan and Preeta marry in the same mandap. After their marriage Sameer and Shrishti end up getting married too.

One small kid gives red rose to Rishab with card and signals to young girl going outside the hall.

"If there is any place of love left in your heart then I want to fill that gap says on the letter

Karan and Preeta after big hurdle start their new life but their fights does not leave them even after marriage.

PS : Sorry guys for this rush episode but my other FF's will have proper Preeran marriage ceremonies 😊 and I want to start my other stories too. This was small one anyway just as an intro but there will be much more coming up.

-THE END-

That was awesome👏

Just perfect!! Karan- Rishabh are ready to sacrifice their love for each other and I liked the ending the girl sent a note for Rishabh! Well done 👍🏼

The ending is nice