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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
Part:9
next day
Nithya tied rakhi to sid
They both hugged each other
N asusual nikki tied rakhi to sid as nikki has no brothers she treat sid as her brother
Roli tied rakhi to varun
Varun: next tym u have to come along with ur husband to tie rakhi
Roli blushed
Sid lukd at her n smiled
Nitya; sid...this tym ur getting another sister
Sid lukd at her confusingly
Nitya; ha sid..another person is ready to tie rakhi to u
Raj whishpered slowly so that nikki n sid can listen
Raj: don't say roli name nittu..then his heart vl break into several parts
Sid glared at him
Nikki: chup idiot...wont u get good words frm ur mouth..just band karo bakwas
N keep finger on lips
Raj followed her order
Sid: who is she nittu?
Nitya turned to show the person
Sid saw jaanu coming with rakhi
Sid smiled
Jaanu hesistatingly came n tied rakhi to sid
Raj in mind: kuch tho gaadhbadh hw can crush become brother in one day..im sure jaanu has crush over sid..have to find it
All left to respective wrks
Raj went to jaanu
Raj: hi
Jaanu: hii
Raj: so
Jaanu: so
Raj: u tied rakhi to sid
Jaanu: yeah..u saw that na
Raj; bt hw can possible
janu: I didn't get u
raj: don't act smart..till yesterday I saw..u tried to flirt with sid..n all of sudden hw come he became brother
jaanu was little tensed
jaanu: wat..wat r talking..y I flirt with sid
raj: becz I saw that
at that time jaanu saw nikki was passing frm there
jaanu: nikki
nikki came
raj: y u r calling her
jaanu: to tell ur flirting with me
nikki; wat
nikki glared at him
raj: nikki...no nikki..im not flirting
jannu left place by giving teasing smile
raj: y I flirt with her..when my beautiful wife is here
nikki; becz u lost intrested in me
she started crying
raj: arey yar..y I lost intrst on u..u r my love..my life...mother of our unborn baby..ur everything to me
he wiped her tears n hugged her
she too hugged him
nikki; sorry raj...I cant c u with any other girl..so I reacted like that
some thing striked in raj mind
raj: nikki..u cant c me with any other girl...wat if..in same way..roli cant c sid with any other girl
nikki: wat do u mean
raj; I mean..roli is jealous...she saw sid talking with jaanu..so I sure..she is behing janu n that rakhi tieing
nikki: r u sure
raj: yeah
nikki: really hope so..
nikki: bt hw v prove it
raj: no need to prove...one cant hide love fr ong..soon roli too accept her love
nikki: if it happens v r d happiest person

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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Part10
evening
mehendi function
mehendi girl came
she is putting mehendi on nittu hands
roli nikki jaanu sat beside
sid raj varun came
varun n nitu giving glances at each other secretly
raj: oh got itna boring mehendi function
mataji: then y cant u make it entertaining
raj: yeah I vl
start playing
song started
sid n raj started dancing
mehandi lagha rakhna
doli saja ke rakhana

they dragged nitthu n placed her one hand in varun hands
lne tujhe o gori
aayenge tere sajna
roli jaanu joined them
roli n sid lukd each other
they dance luking at each other
nikki to joined fr simple steps
shava hoyyi hoyyi
shava hoyyii

they all njyd a lot
after mehendi designer continued her designing in nitu hands
raj winked at nikki
raj: by d way roli..wont u keep mehendi
roli; yeah bt after bhabi
raj: y...y cant now
roli: only one mehendi designer is there na
raj: bt y u have to wait...when my beautiful wife cum professional mehendi designer is there
roli: it it? Nikki
raj: roli u don't know my wife talent
sid who came after completing his call
heard the convo
sid: ha roli...nikki is expert in mehendi
roli: bt y to give pain to her..she needs rest at this tym
nikki; roli...i was bored with that rest word...this raj na...never let me do any thing...first tym...hw gave chance to me to work...n u know wat..i enjoy keeping mehendi..let me allow to keep it
roli: ofcourse..im so hapie...n also im too hapie as u got caring husband like raj...ofcourse he is naughty..bt naughty persons r good at heart
raj nikki sid shocked hearing this
they remembered raj words
they smiled
nikki started putting mehendi on roli hands
she inscribed sid name in mehendi without roli knowledge
after completing
roli: wow nikki..its really osum
raj: wait let me take picture of my wife talent
he take photo of mehendi
sid: roli show to me
roli showed her hands
sid found his name in roli hands
he felt so hapie
he thanked nikki with his eyes
after some time
nittu removed mehendi
she felt so hapie becz it is so dark
roli: c bhabi ..my bro is love reflecting in ur hands
Nithya blushed n lukd at varun
He winked at her
They shared an eye lock
Jaanu: now its roli turn..lets c hw much her prince loves her
Roli removed mehendi
Its pure dark clr
Jaanu: oh my god roli..its so dark..that means ur prince luv u a lot
Roli smiled
Raj; sid c ur princess is blushing..tell her..ur her prince
Sid: will tell when time comes
Raj: when that time comes
Sid: soon
Raj: uff..by the time comes..my baby grows up n find her prince also
Sid glares
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
Part :11
Next day sangeeth
It started with janu performance
She danced fr cham cham cham song from bhagi
N next sid raj n varun danced fr desi boys song
Roli nikki n nitu danced for bol chudiyan bol kangana song
N sid raj varun joined them
Nitu n varun danced for sab tera( the remembered their love stry..how varun fell fr her at first sight..when he came to bh to c her)
Raj n nikki danced for gerua ( they remembered their luv stry started in clz day..their nhok jhoks)
He danced with her utmost care
Roli started dancing along with Jannu and sid joined them
Aaj hi sagai song
.
.
She danced with janu
after dancing janu left stage
Roli abt to leave
Sid hold her hand

And started singing
Na jaane kaise ehsaas hai
Bhujthi nahi hai kya pass hai kya nasha is pyar ka
Mujhpe sanam chane laga
Kya karo haye kuch kuch hota hai
Rosid dancing with an eyelock
They frgt the world
They came out of world with huge sound of claps
Raj: oh my go nikki is it our sid
Nikki: im so hapie to c him...he confessed her indirectly
Bt I don't know wat roli is thinking..may b she is thinking that its part of sangeeth
Raj: arey buddhu c..she is also lost in him..im sure she too loves him
Nikki: I hope they confess soon directly
Next day
Varun nittu mrg
Mrg happened grandly
Nittu n varun declared as husband n wife officially
All njyd all rituals a lot
Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84

Next day
Mataji: there is no auspisious time till days
Jamanlal ji if u don't please stay fr 10 days
Jaman lal ji: so many works r pending mataji..have to go...lets do one thing...varun n nittu stay here fr 10 days...after that u can send them.
Mataji: oh k jamanji
Varun n nikki also left beforning warning sid to confess his love soon
Jaanu too left
Sid is feeling bad as roli vl go
Bt nw he is not getting idea to stop her
Roli is in room packing her clothes
Sid decided to talk to her
He knocked the door
Roli; sid j...aap
Sid: shall I come in
Roli: yeah
Rosid in room
Sid: so
Roli; so
Sid; I hope u njyd well
Roli: yeah these r d best days in my life
Sid: for me too
He said luking into her eyes
Roli cant able to face his gazing eyes
Shifter her eyes n trying to pack her clothes
Sid: roli I want to say some thing
Roli lukd at him
Roli; ha sid ji..boliye
Sid: who...who...not now...will tell next time
Any ways take care..hope u wont frgt me
Roli lukd at him sharply
Without saying anything he left place
Sid in his room:
U idiot sid..y cant u tell ur mann ki bath to her..y u becum dumb before her...he slapped himself
Roli n her family left the place
Sid also got call from office
He left to office
4 days passed
Nittu: lets go to movie varun
Varun: yeah lets go
Mataji: u guys go to movie ..v have to go relatives function... v vl go
Nittu: oh k
Nittu to sid:
Nittu: u too come na
Sid: no nittu..i have wrk..u both go
Nittu: hmm okk
By that tyme varun got call from roli
Varun: hi roli
Sid was excited to know the call is from roli
Roli: bhayya u got some courier
Varun: yeah I told vikranth to send documents through courier..i have to verify those...do one thing..send them with driver
Roli; oh k
Nittu n varun left to movie
Sid is doing some wrk in his laptop as no body r there he sat in hall
Roli: I vl give surprise to bhai..i vl go n give these documents
Roli came to bh
She rang the bell
Sid came n opened the door
He was surprised to c roli at same time he is super happy
Sid: roli
Roli: hi sid ji
Sid: come in
Roli went inside
She lukd around
Rolli: mataji bhayya n bhabi?
Sid: they all went out
Roli: I thought to give surprise to them
She said with upset face
Sid: bt u surprised me
Sid said with broad smile
Roli too smiled
Sid: oh k tell wat u vl drink..tea coffee
Roli: no sid ji...nothing
Sid: arey no formalities..wait I vl bring coffee..sont worry I know how to prepare it
Sid went to kitchen
Roli lukd around
She cant understand wat to do
She saw sid laptop
She took that and it is not locked
She opened a gallery folder
She was shocked
She saw thousands of her pics
And in one pic she saw displaying I love u roli
Sid who came out of coffee mugs shocked to c roli with his laptop
Roli stud up
She saw sid
She got tears she rushed outside
Sid saw laptop in which roli pic displaying
Sid: oh my god
Sid went out
Behind roli
Sid: roli stop
Roli already started her scooty
Sid started in his car
Roli started driving fast
Sid too increased fast
He overtake scooty n stopped his car infront of roli
He got down car
He saw around
Roli stopped her scooty
Sid caught her hand take to her isolated place
Roli tried to come out of his hold
Bt he hold it very tightly
Roli: sid ji leave me
Sid: I didn't hold to leave like that
Sid: I know roli ur angry at me...im sorry...I don't know wat to tell..i don't know how u react..i don't know how u feel..i don't know ur opinion..only thing I know is I luv u yar..i luv u so much...
Roli lukd at him seriously
Roli: yeah im angry ...very angry..becz u took this much time to xpress ur love...u didn't understand how much I love u
Sid is surprised
Sid: roli...u love me?
Roli: wat u thought...without loving u ...I allowed to apply haldi...allowed nikki to write ur name in my hands...made jaanu to tie rakhi to u...played prank on first day of ur meeting...
Sid: roli...jaanu tied rakhi becz of u?
Roli: then wat? Even she is my best friend..i cant c her having crush on u..so emotionally I black mailed her n made her tie rakhi
n sidhant...u saw me on date of engagement ..bt I saw u before only...I saw u at chennai air port..then only I started loving u..later I saw ur pic in bhai phone n came to know ur my bhabi brother...u don't know how much hapie I am..on that day im came to terrace just in search of u..
sid is totally surprised
sid: roli I cant believe it..my love is already in love with me...really im in cloud nine
roli: bt I hate u..u didn't realise how much I love
sid: arey sid kaya haal hai thera...on propose day itself ur love said I hate u
roli is abt to go
sid hold her hand
sid: whre r u going mam ji...leaving ur bechara sid here
roli smiled
roli he is buddhu sidhant...
sid: oy u call me buddhu
roli: ya I vl call buddhu becz ur buddhu
sid dragged her
roli fell on his chest
sid hugged her tightly
roli tried to come out of his hold
bt he hold her very tight
roli: sid ji leave me na
sid: shall I leave..say that by looking into my eyes
roli lukd into his eyes
she cant stand up his eyes
she down her eyes
n hugged him
sid: roli..i luv u na yar
roli; I love u too na yar
both rosid r in cloudnine
atlast they confessed
they lost in their own world
after some time
sid placed his first kiss on roli fore head
they r njying each other clzness
they r feeling warmth
sid kissed her right cheek
n kissed her left cheek
n abt to move towards lips
roli pushed him n hided behind tree
sid came from back
n hugged her from back
he made her turn towards him
sid: roli I don't know how much hapie I am..ur my life yar...I really didn't believe love at first sight bt u proved me wrong..roli will u be with me forever..i want u be with me every second in my life
roli smiled
roli: I vl b withu fr ever sidji...
by saying this she moved towards his lips voluntarily
they both lost in each other
after some time
roli blushed n hugged him
roli; ur jaadu sid ji..i thought to made u wait as u made me wait without confessed..bt im in ur spell
Sid: bt roli..y u cried when u saw pics in lapue
Roli: so i call u buddhu...its happy tears..i felt hapie to know ur love..bt i got angry..n i know.even i left..u follow me n come.to me..I want u c ur tensed face...so.i came out Just to play with u
By sayng this roli laughed
Sid: ur too smart darling
rosid smiled
they hugged each other
rosid shared this news to raj n nikki
they r too hapie
frm then their life turned too happie
Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
frm then their life turned too happie
daily calss msgs..meetings..gifts hugs kisses
one day
jaman came to roli
jaman: roli v r gng to arrange ur mrg...
roli was shocked
mataji came to sid
mataji: v r decided to arrange ur mrg
rosid r shocked
roli: bt papa...
jaman: no roli..dont say no..i gave promise to my friend that I vl arrange ur mrg with his son
n engagement is tmrw itself
roli: bt papa Im already in love
roli: wat
roli: ha papa
jaman: no way...my promise is more for me than ur love...
n tmrw is ur engagement
he took roli phone n locked her door
n went out
sid: mataji wat r u saying
mataji: haa sid...in ur childhood only v decided ur mrg with anu.. and today v got call from her mother
they said her grandmother is not well..she want to c anu mrg..v cant do mrg all of sudden...atleast engagemt v vl do tmrw
sid bt mataji..how can I do this
mataji: wat happened sid
sid: im already in luv
mataj: wat...no sid...I wont agree..fr me life is important than love..
bt fr me love is more imp mataji
mataji z shocked
she got heart pain
all r tensed
sid called doctr
doctr treated her
doct: nw she is fine..bt if get tensed again..then it vl b prblm fr her
sid is shocked
mataji called sid
mataji: sid vl u marry anu
sid didn't say anything n came out
he called roli
bt no response
he cant understand wat to do
at that tym Nithya camee
sid kept his head in her n cried
nitya: sid wat happed
sid: I love roli nittu...how can I marry other when my life is roli
nittu shocked
sid: now wat I have to do
nittu: don't woory sid...jst agree fr engagement ..time vl b there fr mrg na..v vl stop in anyways
sid: bt how can I engage others
nittu: v have no alt ..mataji health is not good
sid atlastt agreed
next day engagement
nikki raj janu also came
sid came with dull face
girl too came
mataji: now its tyme to xchnge ring
both turned towards each other
n shocked
sid: roli
roli: sid ji
rosid lukd at nittu n mataji
nittu came n hold sid ear
nittu: wat u thought...I don't know abt love...I gave idea of marrying roli..bt u didn't even tell ab tur love
to take revenge...I made u cry fr one day..this is my plan ..
sid: nittu..bt hw u know
sid luk at raj
raj: nikki ki kasam..i didn't tell
nittu: wait I vl tell
flash back
on the day nittu n varun decided to go to mvi
varun: nittu my lappy is not working..i have to send imp docs to viren
nittu: wait I vl bring sid lapie..i think he went out without taking it
nittu went to his room
as sid n nittu have no secrets she know sid password too
she opended n found roli pics as wallpaper
she understud whole scenario
she told to varun
they all hapie
bt nittu is angry at sid

present
nittu: nikkki n raj too know abt this exceptme
she pouted her lips
sid: arey angrybird mujhe maaf kar do na..i thought to tell..bt
nittu: wat ..bt..dont talk with me
sid: arey u took revenge na..u made me cry whole day
nittu: not one day...u have to cry all days..roli...will u listen ur bhabi words
roli: haa bhabi..bhabi ka hokum
nittu: then torture him every day
roli: as u said
roli winked at him
sid: so u all became one
sid pouted
nittu went to him
nittu: im so angry at one..bt the hapie thing is u selected roli...so I excused u
by saying this she hugged him
all r hapie
varun too hugged roli
jaman: roli hw z my acting
roli: papa u too na ..i scared like hell
jaman: sorry beta
roli hugged him
mataji: hw is my acting
sid: no need to say..oscar award vl cum by corier to ur house
all laughed
mataji: ok time is gng on...exchange ring
rosid exchanged rings
raj n nikki
varun n nittu danced
rosid too joined
varun boss viren along with his wife anushka came to congratulate rosid
rosid r so hapie
After some days with blessings of family they married n lived happily
The end

Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So guys..after 10 months I completed this story...n this is my last story..( i already said this so many times...bt came back..bt this tyme fr sure) in fact I left this forum so many days back..bt rosidian inside me didnt let me sleep peacefully...I don't want to leave this story in middle.so I came back today...so today I sat n wrote wat ever came in mind...n I know..I didn't executed rosid.scenes well..first I decides to complete this in one part..bt again my mind didn't agreed..becz its simple.story..than a luv story..it is frnds story...so its difficult fr me to end it in one shot..so i lagged it...n plz ignore those grammatical mistakes..as I didn't get time to recheck...n tq all rosidians who support me till now...who encouraged me a lot...will miss u guys..himan tejui...arisha..roshni..Ramya..banu di..prasanna...sheetal..n each n every rosidian..sorry if I frgt any name...already missing u all lot..vl miss u in future also...have u all a bright future..bye take care ..n remember me
Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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1st of all..sorry for the late comment akka...!!!and hearty congratulations on completing this beautiful ts akka...!!!!its a very cute love story...!!!it was a very adorable sweet pure love story and all the characters and ur narration was soo fabulous...!!!but akka will really miss u soo much..already missing u and ur wonderful writings...u were the 1st person who encouraged me to start my writings..u were by my side everytime...but now will miss u soo much...!!!anyways have a bright future ahead akka..!!!will always remember u..and ur always in my heart..!!!love u soo much...!!!!👏👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's a beautiful love story...i really loved it...fabulous narration👏
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sorry for late comment was busy congratulations for successfully completing this ff it was cute , beautiful & naughty ff loved it all the best for your future dear

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