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Posted: 7 years ago
hey ...pls pls update...
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I have bookmark this thread almost a year ago my bad I could not start earlier but Here I'm now starting with it done with 6 Chapter I will be coming back only after catching with all Chapters but I know this journey will be beautiful cause you are brilliant commelina 👏
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I hope you are thinking of this creation of yours at times...
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Hi...So Finally I could read A different tale of Reality Love, Life, Success, Failure which is so easy to relate...

I always look for Story like this to read..

Welcome me here Another failure with dreams co-incidentally my one was related to Medical too 😆

I've thousands of things to say about this story but pardon me right now for my physical State I'm not in That State to go in details And type but let's say how I meet this story... We should go one step at a time...

I've completed reading this story all Chapter yesterday taking good 8 hours to savour this feeling of reading... I was always destined to read this story cause I have come across this couple of times...

In 2016 I've read this story 1st 4 Chapters Those days I have just finished my college and for years which was dream to see myself as a doctor could not pursue that for some reasons right now totally in different field we will come there Later ... So when I have read that time medical thing was sour topic for me and Coward me what I did? Stopped reading going further when she was getting failed to success it was upsetting and reading that exactly same time when I was emotional mess didn't went well with me...

last year Again Google baba did magic and Made me Meet this one again and I Saw Comment of Miss.Kawaii Biwi bachao, Biwi padhao one 🤣
So Did what bookmarked this and couple of times came here but did not read and Saw Comments which was making more intriguing for me to read... And this story stayed always in back of my mind ...

I have read your one story but right now Having my memory loss time I guess I forgot it's Name but anyway that story just made me realize how good you are with your words and I have always been looking forward to read this story... Somehow knew it's gonna be wonderful One Being in thread I could guess that one...

So after like 2 years reading it...

The way you have build up this story with such ease you have very potential way with your writing skill and making a conversation so good... Literally I'm in love with this Writer Commelina can you send my well wishes to this amazing Writer? 😳

Wish I could come back with such way to people How it was here in this story... Witty come back always that great humor 😛

From beginning I was feeling related to Geet but as the story Goes forward I have tried myself putting in Both shoes many times found he's doing wrong or she's doing same but I Came to love this story so deeply with time ...

It has pure reality check in it...

Let's start our journey with this story I'm sure you have got many readers to say how it was and they are really good as I've seen their Comments earlier anyway mine are not That worthy but I can share my Feelings 😉

In our country we can give medical entrance just for twice and that's applied in Many University too but apparently it has been ban now to give exam twice in University but medical is allowed... how many attempts are allowed in India for medical?

What to say and start from where I'm not getting okay let's start from beginning...

Sitting in exams for thrice not at all easy mentally there's a lot of pressure plus people around us make it more difficult but if I would have been given such opportunity and support I would not have given Damn to anyone and pursue my dream even if I have to give it more than 10 times ... But there's nothing like that She got married later given to circumstances it wasn't possible at parents place earlier to attempt again I understand so I was in a Wait after marriage One week or so she would talk with Maan or even when Maan has known he will convince her to sit on exam again... That didn't happen in whole time why??? They went for other options but not medical??? That came to me unexpected cause I was hoping deeply she would go for it again but it was not happening was it not possible 4th time??? That's why I'm asking how many attempts are allowed??

I want her to try as much as possible Each time we just need to learn from our Failure and had to do better next time until success comes not out there everyone gets opportunity like she has gotten...

I can accept failure, everyone fails at something. But I can't accept not trying. So I was clearly expecting she would try again...

Failure is simply the opportunity to begin again, it's just a key to success I would say each mistake teaches us something. SO we should not stop trying rest of the things depends on Allah what he has stored in our Fate 😊

But you have just portrayed my point so beautifully through Jugnoo at recent Chapters and I really appreciate that and I want some sense should get in Geet and she tries again our Fate is Written by Allah but You can write her Fate so I would expect something good...

This Marriage was so sudden and This journey of Dedh mahina was surprisingly so beautiful Witty sarcastic and funny to read 😆

I believe if you can't speak good thing what's the need to be so sarcastic or Rude?? You can just shut up Who Wants to talk with you sarcastic Head 😡 That was for Maan Singh Khurana oops Mean Singh Khurana you say 😛

How am I to type a comment If my months old niece is hell bent on holding my hand or trying to type herself 🤔

I like that Mirza Galib poetry should I say Hazaroon Khawaishein Aisi One so beautiful and I see a lot of poetic things inside Story are they yours which was said in reception for Geet's eyes then few other times for Maan Geet...

MAAN this Name hold so much power to make my heart it's slave Writer ji just need to work on his character a little and I'm head over heels in love with Him 😃

But dude when he's Rude he's a dislikeable thing for me It's like rudeness and sarcasm is in his bloods when he's around Geet ... For what he has Married? To treat a person like this who has come to live alone with him leaving her family what if she was not leaving and he would have continued behaving like this... He's not over with Jasleen a big no so what was he thinking in time of Marrying it was forced I know but talking with Bride sorting it out was necessary that you can never give her that place of Lover if you can't love then this marriage would be just a compromise nothing else...

However Jasleen is totally an interesting topic to think about There was so much love between them reason for this break up is Intriguing both seems to be affected by each other still now and no matter how interesting Cool Ayush or JD is I never wish for third wheel between couple I hate that thing...

Mr. And Mrs.Witty wits EVERY SINGLE conversation they have strike till date in this story is wonderful praise worthy thoughts you have about this story just simply amazing cause I have enjoyed so much I was laughing inwardly in some scenes 😆

A TOTALLY sizzling chemistry they have and Bond is so special between them you know what I want Even in future they should come back with such reply and remain unique and create an legendary example for people how husband and wife should be in world 🤣
THINGS after that confrontation has changed totally where she has opened up and he decided to help though I was disappointed he didn't suggest for trying medical but it's okay I was trying to find my self satisfaction in this story for pursuing medical which was not right I guess...

GOING for another option which was not dream of yours it's hurting and when you take some different route it feels unjustified and aimless life which is I'm feeling for 2 years ... Plus many more things to deal with All I feel at this moment Abhi ye Zindagi mujhe Ras nahi aati... Moving on

Maan was giving His effort to make this relationship go right between them his Care his helping nature was that proof could Geet not acknowledged this? In starting days it was Geet Who tried then it was Maan who was ahead They were husband and wife no doubt what Geet could not say to him I guess there were still lacking in having that affection and Love which should be present between husband and wife ... They were just formal performing duties but they were coming There slowly and exactly that time Jasleen again and this time she decided to leave Which is not approved by me she should have talked with Him not taking decision like this... If he really wanted to be with Jasleen he would have been with her already not here playing role of her husband he cares for her to not go for Jasleen again it's in past but Geet is living in misunderstanding which of course Mr.Witty Wits not going to clarify ... He's Past is not easy.. He's a wounded Soul she could be the reason for His healing we just have to see when this individual will complete each other with Love and more thousands of Feelings wishes emotions...

HE feels jealous of Ayush what about Geet how would one feel to know your husband is in love with other girl?? She has the right to know but sad thing she didn't showed her right but choose to escape is breaking Marriage so easy? Given Chance they can be ideal couple but things are different now... Her Letter is another news 😆 I just Love how Geet is here but she's stupid too sometimes even Maan they both are... They both are in a way good condition Maan he's good not doing anything wrong with Geet he was changing but she left at That exact moment when he's feeling was developing... Everyone is not that lucky some people have it so Bad and live a torturing life still can't escape from that Marriage... Love, Marriage everything is really complicated sometimes can be painful and single life is way too much better ... Only few ones are lucky and Geet could be one of them if she gives chance time would really work to make this to be in love so no use of getting divorce...

And he doesn't want her to live in His parents house I know it's not cause she's burden or something but he wants her back he cares for Geet Miss her presence but Not going to say nor that Geet gives any chance to say... She has chosen to be away from him and now found herself amidst of his memories which is intensifying her Feelings for him slowly but she's unaware of the affect both are facing ...

Each character you have build here is beautiful and I love Dev and Tara in Here and no Nandini is needed but she gives me stress that she can be threat in future for this couple...

I have a strong instinct Maan will come here was just thinking why is he delaying and dude what a moment we got to see when he's present here and that Million dollar question About Whom she was dreaming I would definitely like her to say the truth and See His reaction 😉 I hope things will start to fall in place from here on and He takes her with him ... How he has reached here that's another history which is of course would be interesting ...

I could manage to write only this much I can't type more hands are not supporting anymore have Many more things to say but saving for later...

But wanna say I have enjoyed reading this one a lot and will be waiting for more... Cause you are Excellent in writing and one of the best author in this forum ...

Take care Lot's of love from
~ Marium
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Posted: 7 years ago
Having gotten used to regular back to back updates, missing them now. Just telling you that hum intezaar mein hai...
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Part 67:-
Adi & Pinky's convo was quite substantial.. It reflected upon the kind of relationship they share.. they have a strong bond of friendship which is needed in a marriage along with love..
It helps them share things easily & become comfortable with each other..
About Ayush, he suffered a lot.. Everyone of his family let him down in some way or other..
His parents now are trying to amend their mistakes but it isn't easy for him to forgive them..
The things we face in our childhood, their scars remain with us for life..
Pinky might not feel adi did something wrong or he is wishing too much coz she loves him & his happiness that matters to her..
But according to me he did wrong to his brother.. He shouldn't have that little child alone..
Ayush had a troubled childhood with his uncle abusing him, ignorant parents & selfish elder brother..
Only good thing he had were his friends, that too were taken away, again the reason were his parents..
Though he suffering so much he did not cut ties with his family or do anything stupid, that happens in movies.. He was civil to them yet has his own ways of showing disappointment by not connecting to them emotionally.. A touch of reality was there in this behaviour of his..
Like adi somewhere in little corner of my heart even I have this wish that he gets the girl, though I know it isn't possible now..
Beautifully written chapter.. You had almost convinced me on adi's part, if not for my strong will, I would have been convinced that he wasn't wrong & would have given him benefit of doubt..
But I am not a person to be pursued that easily..

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Part 68:-
Bravo!!
you've done such a splendid job with this part..
for the first time saw some difference in maan.. He actually showed some emotions to her..
He was gentle & caring towards her..
This gap has surely had a positive effect on him..
Oh Boy!! was he actually teasing her??
Dadima's dance was really entertaining..
Maan was taking an initiative towards them for the first time.. He came to take her back wanting to resolve their differences..
He started a conversation with her by himself which some days ago would be an impossible task.. This indicates he has started to accept her in his life..
His expressions were so exquisitely written.. All the emotions so well described..
It was nothing extravagant, with him doing extraordinary things for her like flowers, speeches etc, to manaofy her..
It was all subtle way of expressing his concern, starting a random convol, or simple & straight forward answer.. This is something real & believable..
Geet's dilemma was again shown in such an exceptional way.. She couldn't figure out whether she was relieved or upset with his purpose of visit..
She is too confused & is not herself aware of what she actually pursues anymore..
She did not accept him just like that nor did she put up tantrum, she just cried out to herself & did not bother him.. This is usual thing that we do in real life..
Loved the way Maan said "Our Home"..
Song selection was apt..
This is one of among the best chapters of the story you've written so far..
I couldn't get words to describe the richness of language used or the impressive portrayal of emotions.. It's simply awesome..


Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago

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