*NEW*Shivika SS: Mending Splinters *Chapter 2- updated*:)

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Eshita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

It's so emotional 😭 I can't bear Anis pain.

But I must say m loving this story 😊

Thank you for the pm and continue soon😳

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

wow shivaay helped anika

thank mr SSO

thats great atleast ani will have some respite

please do continue

bye sumi

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frustrated12233

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

it was written ahmazingly well!!

dont take me wrong! but it felt somewhat similar like iv red ths before! have u written it on some other couple as well!

i really dont intend to hurt or put across a blame or something! its just it felt familiar! thts all!

anyways nice shot!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: frustrated12233
it was written ahmazingly well!!
dont take me wrong! but it felt somewhat similar like iv red ths before! have u written it on some other couple as well!
i really dont intend to hurt or put across a blame or something! its just it felt familiar! thts all!

anyways nice shot!

yes I'd written it on AsYa before and the second chapter is quite similar to the one my friend wrote for Arhi story but no worries I've her permission and only first two chapters are similar but I've rewritten everything... I will mention the credits at the end of the story:)😊

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frustrated12233

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: misanthropist.

yes I'd written it on AsYa before and the second chapter is quite similar to the one my friend wrote for Arhi story but no worries I've her permission and only first two chapters are similar but I've rewritten everything... I will mention the credits at the end of the story:)😊

im so glad u r re-writing it not because the eralier one wasnt good enough but ofcourse because u r an extremely talented writer n i would love to read something new written by u! looking forward to it😳