RishBala SS : Zarir (Completed - 02/02 - P: 60 + Epilogue - P: 63)

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 7 years ago

#441

Awesome ending to a lovely story maithu..

Lolz.. Sultan getting on the repaired car remembered me of one of my favorite movie scene..

Feel sad for Roma but before she died she did a good thing by killing that monster..

Rishab made Madhu move on in her life..

Loved the last part..

Thanks for the story & pm..

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 7 years ago

#442

Lovely update maithu..

And lil sad that it ends here..

Gonna miss it for sure..

Loved how u have written it throughout..

Rk is so sweet & supporting throughout..

Madhu got gems in the form of ayaan & Rk..

Oh no.. romA is no more..

But since it need sacrifice..

And thank God .. Rishbala are all right..

Beautiful..

Thanks for pm..

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harini

@harini06

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Posted: 7 years ago

#443

Beautiful update,
loved Rishbala moments,
felt bad for Roma she died,she saved Rishbala from her uncle,
the culprits too died,
Ayan is so cute, will miss him and his antics
perfect ending,
will miss this story so much,
thanks for writing this awesome story and also for the pm

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#444

Part-5

Madhu was started to tell her past to rk. She was very happy and she talked with his parents like a friend in phone. I think something happened to her parents. Now roma also missing and her uncle said she went to meet her son. Madhu was broken after seeing her parents like this. I am really sorry for the late comment maithu dear. Will read and comment ur remaining parts lately...

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#445

I loved it

you ended the story perfectly

thank you so much for this journey you gave to us

I really loved it soo much

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#446

Part-6

Emotional update dear. So rk is the one madhu's parents chooses for her. I think her uncle and sultan planned to killed both rk amd madhu's family. Ayan was rk's brother's child. I felt so sad for their condition😭

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#447

Hello!

How are you all?

I just forgot to thank one important person who helped me to write this story!

Well it's my sister!

2 months before I started writing this, she took notes of the story line I said and scripted the plot with words.

And she is the one who chose the name Ayan for the cutie!

So thank you my sis!

And I wanted to thank you all for the support you gave through out this story!

Thank you so much everyone!

- Maithili

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sujitha

@Sujitharajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#448

I read all the parts but i couldn't give separate comment for each part dear. I am really sorry for being so late...It was an awesome love story dear. From madhu's past rk findout that their parents chooses madhu for him so he wanted to marry madhu and also to punish the criminals. Rishbala's love scenes are awesome dear and i liked ayan very much. He is so cute and the little family was so loving. At last the end roma was died but she killed that criminal. Sultan also died in a car accident. Finally rishbala and their cute baby ayan lived happily. The ending was superb dear...

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: ...Seema...
Perfect end to a perfect story
Gonna miss it fr sure
Roma died ohoo
Loved da way rk told madhu dat he missed her n her saying i love u
N ayan tried to make his mom happy n remove her tears
N da end👏
Welldone fr penning down zarir⭐️
Thanks fr pm

Thank you so much dear

Glad you liked this end

Well Ayan is growing up LOL

No words to say for all the support I got from you through out the story

Thank you once again

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
Poor Roma died but saved madhu by killing the man..
other two also met their fate..
Bittuji had to leave due to his mother's illness..
Loved how RK made her understand the need to move on..
Ayan was too cute..
Perfect ending indeed..

Thank you so so much dear

Happy you enjoyed the last part of Zarir

Thank you so much dear