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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 35 (Previous part : Part 34 )


Chakor who was at the entrance of the palace, looked precipitated as she spoke to the guardians who were blocking her way there "I know it's confusing because I was sent away but you don't understand that I need to talk to the Queen!" folding her hands "It's emergency!" she said.
Hearing the commotion going on, Miss. Girija came out and stood on top of the stairs as she looked at the intruder "Remove yourself from the premise of the Palace before I have you removed!" she said in anger as the hurt given by Chakor to the royal family played in head.
"Nothing more! If I could just talk with her, for few minutes!" the young lady wished.
"Well! She is not here!" Miss. Girija as she climbed down the steps "And if she were here also, she would have you thrown in the dungeon!" she declared as she stood on the last step, facing the journalist.
Getting enough of the words "I know for a fact that you do not have a dungeon!" she announced.

"If you think for a minute, do you think they will forgive you after what you have done?" Miss. Girija asked feeling hurt for her family, royal family.
"I promise I only meant"
Interrupting the young lady "Your promises mean nothing!" if look could kill someone, Chakor would have been died since long due to Miss. Girija's angry bird look "You are a traitor!"
"If you would just let me finish!" she cried and continued as the older lady closed her mouth tight "I think I can prove that Suraj is the rightful King!" she announced making the oldie shocked "Just please let me help!" she begged making the opponent to give on as Miss. Girija with her hand asked the guards to open the way for the lad to get in.

And both of them ran towards the special room where Christmas tree was placed in its glory.
As Chakor neared it and touched the King's Christmas gift for his Queen, Miss. Girija warned "Don't touch it!" Followed by the guards "Don't!" She repeated as she saw the adamant girl take out that acorn "What are you doing?" She asked as she tried to get it back but before that it got pulled in all directions to get it in 2 pieces in Chakor's hand as they found a folded paper hidden in it, making Miss. Girija to be surprised and Chakor's lips to be adorned with a smile.
"Oh my!" Miss. Girija said as she took that paper from its hideout to open it and read it as they saw the King's seal on it.

***

Whereas, in the assembly, everyone stayed calm witnessing the Royal family's happenings.
"Well, Prime Minister, looks like you have the quorum!" Imli said it with a mock.
Pakhi who was by the side of the Prince, pulled his hand to get his attention "I don't care what any of them say. You are my King and you are my brother!" She said with whole heart making him to smile even at this moment.
"Thank you!" He said putting his hand on her shoulder.
"And I " Pakhi once again for the day got interrupted by the Prime Minister 's announcement.
"We must now bear witness to the coronation of the King Kamal Narayanan's bloodline."
Smiling ear to ear, Vivaan pulled out his hand to get a cushion from his assistant in order to put under his knees as he knelled down in front of the Prime Minister while his wife looked on happily.
Still facing the crowd "Count Vivaan presents his rightful claim to the crown and the throne." for which few Nos echoed in the room. But however, the old man continued his work in hand with a straight face.
Turning to his left, looking at the man who is knelled down, he asked "Do you pledge your life and fealty to Canamaris and all her subjects?"
"I do!" he replied simply.
Getting the sceptre and passing it to the man who is ready to be crowned, the old man continued "Do you swear to protect her, to uphold her sacred laws in times of wealth or poverty, peace or war?"
With a happy smile on his evil lips, he replied "I do!" as just few seconds are there before he get the crown for himself, to make his dream to come true.
Turning towards the assembly, he spoke the last few words he can say before the coronation "If anyone would wish to dispute Count Vivaan's claim to the throne may they speak now or forever stay silent."

He looked here and there before looking at the Royal family who on their side were waiting for some miracle to happen so that the late King's will comes true.
With an apologetically look towards them, he turned to his back, picked the crown and moved a step forward as Vivaan bent his head a little to welcome the crown which is still in the Prime Minister's hands.

*******

Thank you for reading buddies!
Sorry for leaving you all here for 2 more days!
I have a bad news and a good news!
BAD = Story is coming to its end by the end of the next week
GOOD = Story will be ending with all your wished elements
Have a nice weekend
See you all on Monday!


Next part : Part 36


- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
So Chakor found the King's will😊
Loved Pakhi & Suraj's bonding😊
You left on cliffhanger😡
Two more days to go. Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

So Chakor found the King's will😊
Loved Pakhi & Suraj's bonding😊
You left on cliffhanger😡
Two more days to go. Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear
Yup! She found the lawful thing of King's
Glad you loved their bond(bro&sis)
Well! My evil mind is satisfied you see Heee
See you next week 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maithu

thats lovely,,,,,


she found out she found out!!!! am jumping in joy

loved SuKhi to the core...just loving them... (she is dam cute just like little ayan of Zarir)

hmmm good and bad...well we know everything has to end on a good note

but you know what

bad i feel is good as when this end, i will get another one yippeee!!!

Sumi and her greediness and lo what waiting for those special moments you promised in the last part😉😉

so its ok i will wait for Monday as i am still drenching in my adories , my dudes roar Suraj Rajvanshi still reverbrating...


so yeah ...so its okay take your time till Monday!!!!!

lovely deary!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update!
Sukhi scene was heart touching.
Chakor figured the secret just in time to stop the coronation.
Can't wait to see Imvaan defeat.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Arery Maithu
Monday has come where us the KING😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello

How are you all?
Sorry for not posting it this morning as I'm working from home today.
This part is short but with interesting facts, hope so!
Happy reading!

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Part 36 (Previous part : Part 35 )

As the crown was just few inches away from the head of the Count, Two ladies entered the premise screaming "STOP!" Each one from two different entrance as one got down running, holding a folded paper and the other one climbed down the steps of assembly hall in slow motion, taking care of not falling.
With these new entrant, everyone looked on for what drama they are going as murmurs started to grow.
Seeing her friend to be back, the little princess smiled while the Prince looked shocked and surprised to find her back here.
With this intervention, the Prime Minister took back the crown in his full embrace as the Queen looked on with a question mark towards Miss. Girija.
"Have her removed immediately!" Vivaan declared as he got up holding the sceptre with his wife accepting her husband's word.
"You are not king yet!" Queen said turning her head towards him before she looked at the girl who stood in front of her "If you have something to say Miss, say if now!" Queen demanded.

"Your Majesty! Before King died, he has amended the law so that Prince Suraj become his lawful successor." She announced bringing lights in royal family and commotion in public and shock in the newly married couple's face.
"What?" Queen surprised "How co" and she got interrupted.
"She is lying. Just like before!" Imli opened her mouth.
"Queen is speaking!" Pakhi mockingly said at Imli "Zip it up!" With the action of zipping her lips making the lady to burn in anger.
"Let me see it!" Queen said as she took the paper from the reporter as the young lady looked at the man who was already looking at her with painful eyes as if asking 'why did you do this?'
She with no answer in her hand, turned her face away from him.
"It was inside this acorn!" Chakor added as she showed the Christmas gift of the Queen "The gift your husband meant to give you last Christmas before he died!"
With a small happy smile on her lips, Queen turned and looked at her son as she passed the document "Read the decree!" So that everyone could hear it.

<< Let us be bound in future by truth and truth alone.
Let us light up the shadow of the past.
Though my blood might not run in his vein, Suraj, Prince of Canamaris, is my son. (Prince read it emotionally touched by his words)
And while this order gives him full rights to the throne, it is by his own attributes, his spirits, his sensitivity, intelligence, and heart that he earns this honour! (Queen looked proud with the words written in it.) >>

Prime Minister put the crown on its safety place as he moved forward and asked for the paper.
Looking at the words written in it and the seal of the King, he showed the paper to the assembly.
"This woman has already lied!" Imli.
"What makes you all think that she is telling the truth now?" Vivaan added.
"Because I believe her!" Queen said smiling at the lady in front of her.
"This order is marked with the King's official seal." Prime Minister announced with a light smile, shutting the newly married couple's mouth as everyone stood and clapped with happiness as the Prince looked at the reporter who smiled with sadness as she lifted her eyes and found him already starring at her with a look that said a lot of things.

*******

Thank you buddies for reading!
I couldn't reply to each and everyone's comments, will do it soon!
Hope you all liked what was written in the paper.
See you soon with the KING!


Next part : Part 37


- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Maithu

thats excellent the jasoos did strike at the right time.

Bingo

love Chakor Girija combo

waiting waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update🤗
Chakor & Girja reached at right time😊
Love how Sukor conversed through eyes
Loved the way Pakhi asked Imli to be quite😆
The King loved Suraj so much, love the words of the will😭
Finally Suraj is declared King😊
Imvaan deserved this
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update Maithu!
What a dramatic entry for Chakor and Girja!
I don't know if I'm happier for the royal family's win or Imvaan's defeat.
The king's words are full of love and pride for Suraj.
Chakor has finally won the queen's trust.
Loved Sukor's moment, I'm sure we'll get more later.
Waiting for next.

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