FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!

Loved Chakor's emotional scene and the way her father was trying to find the right words to comfort her, I could imagine Meera and Rajiv Sir.
Oh! Chakor got an idea, curious to know what it is.

Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you so much Mai

Happy you loved the bond Chakor and her father shares

Well the thing itself be revealed only in tomorrow's update by Chakor herself ;-)

Today it's just a glimpse Heee

See you soon

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#282

Maithu

Bingo Chakor gets his antenna on... some idea

loved the daughter dad convo... just thinking ChaBhu (what to do yaar just cannot stop relating with the show)

what can you expect from that power greedy duo... waiting for the Prince to give their dues and get back my princess soon.

arey update soon please!!!!!!!

i will give you special chocies😉😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#283

Part 34 (Previous part : Part 33 )

"Not that Papa! Before that!" She asked.

"Failure plants the seed!" He said not getting why his daughter is asking him to repeat.

Her eyes shone brighter as she pulled her hand bag on her lap as her mouth went wide in realization of something.

Her father who couldn't get why his daughter is reacting in this way, asked "What happened dear? Is that too cornball?"

Pulling out the diary which looked exactly like the one which the Prince showed to her, that night in his father's favorite place, she replied to her father "No! I mean yes! Well it reminded me of a poem!" As she tuned page after page of that book.

Getting on the so wanted page, she re-read the last lines of king as the announcement for the fight was made.

<< Now starting initial boarding for United flight 306 to JFK. >>

Not giving a f**k to the announcement, she got the line she was searching for as she read it loud enough for her father to hear "But from a seed, an acorn's gift, Henceforth the truth will flood!" As a smile replaced her serious face "Acorn!" She repeated.

"What dear? What acorn?" Her father question but felt happy that his little daughter is now smiling.

"A secret ... And a love far greater than blood!"

"All right my dear! You kind of lost me here!"

She getting hurry as she put back the diary in her bag and got up "Sorry Papa! I got to go! Will tell you later!" She said as she exited the airport.

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One by one people started to get to the assembly but even then it was just a little more than half the members who were present there, to assist the coronation.

Imli who couldn't stand waiting, started to count the number of members present in the council so that they could proceed the ceremony.

"Here is the majority! There has to be the quorum now!" She said as if ordering.

"The Queen hasn't yet arrived!" He declared with a stiff look in the same tone.

With the crowd starting to murmur, everyone's eyes, including the newly wedded couple to see the Royal family enter the premise with the Prince asking for time "I demand this process to be delayed!"

Everyone got up welcoming the Queen as she signaled them to sit back.

"You have no rights to demand anything!" Imli with venom as Vivaan looked at his few minutes wife with a happy and proud smile.

"Prince Suraj is the rightful heir to the throne!" Queen announced as the council members hummed together.

"Actually, he is not!" The one competition for the crown said.

"Prime Minister! I implore you to put a hold of these proceeding!" Prince.

"Prince Suraj! I'm sorry to repeat but the law clearly states that the heir to the throne must be a member of the bloodline!" With a sorry look while the married couple smiled happily.

"The will of the late King must be held in the highest regards!" Queen remembered them. And facing the councils "That is what the law states!" She implied.

As if getting sense, everyone agreed with hmms and yeses.

"Order!" Prime Minister said as he went to the center of the stage "As the Queen is here and majority of the councils too. Let's respect the law and do the work!" Looking at the Queen and the Prince, he added "I'm sorry, Our Majesty." He said before facing once again the crowd to announce " As we have the quorum, the coronation must go on today itself!" For which the couple smiled a successful smile while the Royal family looked on helplessly due to the circumstances and the law of Canamaris.

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Thank you for reading buddies

Hope you all liked it

Let me know it through comments!

See you tomorrow with the coronation event!

Next part : Part 35

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#284

Maithu

i just entered the comment and lo comes the next part!!!

and she found it Eureka am sure she found something...

let the journalist pace herself fast!!!!

i am running with my heart thomping!!!!!

run girl soon!!!

Maithu am on my edges

eversince morning not able to do any work ever since my adories OLVs came and now this one arey yaar kaise karenge kaam.

Edited by sumsukor - 7 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#285

Interesting update🤗

Chakor found the secret in the poem of the king👏

So Suraj is right heir of the kingdom

Hate Imvaan, they have no respect for Queen😡😡

Waiting to see their downfall

Waiting for next

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
Bingo Chakor gets his antenna on... some idea

loved the daughter dad convo... just thinking ChaBhu (what to do yaar just cannot stop relating with the show)

what can you expect from that power greedy duo... waiting for the Prince to give their dues and get back my princess soon.

arey update soon please!!!!!!!

i will give you special chocies😉😳

Happy to read your comment Sumi

Well! Let's see if her antenna works well or not

Glad you loved the convo of Daughter - Father

And no pbm! You can compare LOL

Let's hope they get their dose soon

I'm listening! What are the special choices ;-)😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
i just entered the comment and lo comes the next part!!!

and she found it Eureka am sure she found something...

let the journalist pace herself fast!!!!

i am running with my heart thomping!!!!!

run girl soon!!!

Maithu am on my edges

eversince morning not able to do any work ever since my adories OLVs came and now this one arey yaar kaise karenge kaam.

Well!

You see! When your heart wants, my hand works LOL

Yup dear!

She found something interesting!

No no hurry! Run slow and your heart will not beat fast LOL

Work when you have to work and read when you have to read

Well I don't think I can say that as whenever I get time at work, I get on something else

Hope you like the coming parts too

See you

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update🤗
Chakor found the secret in the poem of the king👏
So Suraj is right heir of the kingdom
Hate Imvaan, they have no respect for Queen😡😡
Waiting to see their downfall
Waiting for next

Thank you so so much dear

Yup dear!

Indeed there was a secret in the poem ;-)

Well! Let's see how the heir takes the crown soon

Me too dear!

Hate them :-|

Soon will be their downfall and the next part

See you

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#289

Excited that Chakor has figured out the poem's meaning.

Can't wait to find out the secret.

It's thrilling reading the procedure of coronation, waiting for Chakor to come.

Eagerly waiting to see Imvaan's reaction when they fail to lay their hands on the throne.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Excited that Chakor has figured out the poem's meaning.
Can't wait to find out the secret.
It's thrilling reading the procedure of coronation, waiting for Chakor to come.
Eagerly waiting to see Imvaan's reaction when they fail to lay their hands on the throne.

😃

Thank you so much dear for the lovely message which is boosting me

Well soon all will be out and cleared

Keep on reading

See you