The Auction |Omkara Singh Oberoi OS | (Rikara)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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So after watching today's episode I am really really really frustrated! So much that i wanted nothing more than to bang my head hard on the wall 😡 But instead of doing that I decided to be a little productive and write down an OS on what I wanted today's episode to be 😆

WARNING- this thing could be utter shit because I just blurt it out. Read it at your own risk!


"What are you doing! Leave that moorti! It's my husband's hard work! Gauri tries to the stop the shabby man in suite from taking away the gorgeous Ganesha moorti but he pushed her back making her fall on the floor with thud.

"Bhabhi! Rudra yells as he runs towards the man, the palm of his hands already curled into knuckle whitening fist as he was about to give him a piece of his mind for hurting his Bhabhi but the bas***d was already down on the floor, right next to Gauri's feet, with possible broken jaw.

"How f**king dare you touch me wife!

Omkara picks up the groaning man by his collar and punches him again on his face, his eyes bold red and teeth clattering.

"You son of a bitch! How dare you touch my wife! I will kill you! Omkara pinched him on his face making his nose bleed profusely, his lips bruised and face bloody but it do nothing to satisfy him.

He keep kicking him in stomach then punch him again, blinded by anger not even paying attention to whimpering gauri or Rudra and Jhanvi who were trying to stop him before he kills the man.

"Omkara Ji please stop, I am fine, Gauri whimpers as she tries to hold Omkara's hand but he pushes her back, almost gently.

"Stay out of this Gauri, his dark voice was enough to make her shiver.

"But Omkara ji-"

"I said stay out of this Gauri!

Gauri steps back, a loud gasp escaping her lips.

He wasn't her Omkaraji right now. Gauri knew it. She could feel it. The man before her was Omkara Singh Oberoi. That's too a mad one.

A maddening storm.

"Arre Babua!

Suddenly Mr Khanna, the man who was auctioning the oberoi mansion enters the room, his paan red lips quivering to see the scene before him and gulps before calling his men.

"Arre babua What are you doing?! Stop it or I will call the police! Mr Khanna says as he taking out his phone and tries dialling the number with his fiddling fingers but the phone soon gets snatched from his shaking hands and thrown to the floor with loud noise breaking into pieces.

He looks up with gulp only to find a very very angry Omkara Singh Oberoi glaring at him.

"You have exactly 5 minutes to collect all your bas***ds and get the f**k out of my house, Omkara's voice sends shiver down Mr Khanna's voice and he starts sweating.

"I-I can't g-go babua. Upar se order hai..Your father have sold. I-i have to set it up for auction. Mr Khanna stutters.

"How much? Om breaths.

"W-what?

"I said how much money for this house?! Om yells making Mr Khanna jump on his spot.

"Babua, it's too much. Aur vaise bhi Shivay Singh Oberoi ka to diwala to gya. That's why I am saying, gussa karne ka koi faida nahi..jao apne parivaar ko lekar..aur bhabhi ji ke liye- I am sorry, Mr Khanna says the last part with a small smirk as he looks at Gauri for a little too long, his eyes shamelessly running across the her body.

Omkara grabs him by his collar and jerks him forwards, his finger almost digging holes in Mr Khanna's neck.

"Mere biwi ki taraf ek aur baar dekha to jaan le lunga! And about affording this Mansion! Shivay may have got bankrupt but Omkara Singh Oberoi zinda hai abhi! And I can buy ten mansions like this! Just tell me the f**king price! Omkara wanted to strangle that bas***d for mocking his brother but he knew that would do no good. And his major concern was saving his house now.

"F-fifteen crores, Mr khanna managed to speak with his neck almost being choked by Omkara.

Omkara growls at him. The mansion's actual price was 12 crore but the bas***d was adding 3 crores of his own.

Greedy son of a bitch!

"Gauri bring my check book, Om says.

Gauri immediately nodes and brings Oms check book from his cupboard and brings it to Om.

Om frees Mr Khanna's collar but not before pushing him back and takes his check book.

He sings the check and throws it on Mr Khanna's face who catches it in air abruptly.

His jaw falls when he looks at it.

"15 crore for the house and 5 crore more for keeping your fiery mouth shut about the auction. If I got to see the auction news or even rumour on any news channel I swear to god I will bury you alive in the ground!

Mr Khanna abruptly nodes to Om's warning and quickly tells his guys to get their stuff and leave.

As soon as Mr Khanna and all his men leaves the mansion Rudra hugs Om tightly with swollen red eyes.

"T-thank you bhaiya. I though with out Shivay bhaiya we will loose our house, Rudra says.

"Kya sirf shivay ki hi zimmedariya hai is ghar ke liye? Meri nahi? Om says with a smile as he hugs back his little brother.

"Nahi puttar aisa nahi hai. Aaj tune oberoi's ki his nahi balki apne Dadaji ki bhi izzazt bachachi hai. Mujhe bahut garv hai tujh par. Dadi says with tears in her eyes.

Om let's go of Rudra and walks towards Dadi to touch her feet.

"Thank you Dadi, he says as he bends down to hug the old lady.

"Aaj mujhe akeen ho gya hai, mere ghar me ek nahi, do-do Ram hai. Aur mujhe pura akeen hai ki jab tak mera billu apna vanvaas khatm karke ghar nahi ataa tab tak tu dhaal banke hamesha apne parivaar ki raksha karega, Dadi says as she caresses his cheek and Om smiles at her.

Soon everyone goes back to their room to settle the mess that was created keep their stuff back.

Om walks towards Gauri who was staring at him with adoring and proud eyes and without saying anything just holds her hand.



Thank you so much for reading! Please hit the like button and leave your lovely comments!! <3
I just hope it wasn't total shit :P And sorry for so much cursing - in my defence I was really pissed :P
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Totally feel you

Much needed one ⭐️

Thank you for venting your frustration like this 😆😊
Edited by rikarafan1 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikarafan1



Totally feel you

Much needed one⭐️

Thank you for venting your frustration like this😆😊


Hehe..😆
thank you so much! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb,exactly what I felt watching today's episode the much needed AngryKara. Thank you for remembering that Om is a selfmade billionaire something everybody forgot about it👏👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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👏..This is how it should have been.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ary wah om billionare hy show me dkhaya nhi
Mubarak ho dadi ki nigah billu se ht kr nandi pr bhi chali gai
Like very much volcano kara 😡and possesive kara😳
Rudy ko bhi samaj agya o bhi kisi bhi had ko par krsakta family k lea
How lovely they feel every thing it may be hurt or love or adore with their eyes(eye lock me yhi hot hy na😲 ) they don't need words ahaan
Happy for seeing volcano kara once again
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh how I wish they'd had the good sense to show something like this! But thank you for writing this and fulfilling our fantasy for OSO! Amazingly well written!

Cheers,

Neet
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I really needed this one. I hope that this had happend, but nooo they allways try to make omkara the dumbest one. My question is, if he is an oberoi and an selfmade billionair artist aur uska har ek painting core mai biekhte hai, tap uska paisa kaha gaya? I mean he has sold many paintings of him right? So was not capable enough to buy the mansion? Besides screaming like a mad man, he just could threw the money on that man's face... i am fed up with this Ram Lakshman thing. Ram and Lakshman both were capable, but why is in the serial only shivay capble of doing everything??? Are they trying to show that omkara is worthless??? Kyu Gauri ko etna bhola bana dete hai??? Gauri bhaudjai aur shankarji ke elawa kuch nahi ata?? Kya Gauri kabhi ek adarsh patni ya bahu nahi ban sakti?? Why are shivay and anika the best, grandson, son and husband. No offence with shivika. I love them, but i as vieuwer expect more from rikara
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Posted: 7 years ago
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For a long time my constant question has been what happened to Omkara's money?
Isn't he self made billionaire?
All his assets are separated from Oberois or did he invest all his money with Oberoi empire only for family ?

Doesn't he have any personal account with money he earned ?

Even if business stumbles, omkara has his hands and mind to create artistic wonder. He can earn enough with one exhibition.

In fact I think every Oberoi baring new bahus would have been clever enough to buy property or two without involving Oberoi empire's shadow.

Anyways shoot logic

As far your OS is concerned it's awesome. Something I have always wanted to read.
Good work
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for this amazing piece.
This Omkara now only exists in FFs. Makers have forgotten there was a show called DBO where he was capable to do something, sigh!

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