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shivani.001

@shivani.001

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

such an amazing storyline...
will love to read it😊😊

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: EnasZ
WOWWW
that was beautiful😳😳

i loved it and i do wish for Tej's big downfall...that man😡😡my chappal😡😡
my shiv😭😭he broke his pride i feel like kicking tht tej😡😡

beautiful smiley...please continue soon i loved it

Tankyyy😳😳

Thanks a lot babyyy😳😳 its ok dear. Shivaay here would kick tej's pride😆

Keep readinggg else i would killl youuu😆

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Nohsin10
This is awesome
Tej is disgusting
Shame on him
If possible Plzz continue

Thank you dear😳

Would try to continue sweety😊

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TEJASWINI

@Teju...

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Awesome Update smiley...

Tej is such an Idiot...

Love to see his grand OMM

And the last dialogue abt annika finding past and shivaay creating new identity was super👏

Love to see him creating a powerful brand shivaay😳

pls continue dear

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

That was really a good one. Would love to read more as well as read your other works too. So, could you plz send me your index. Thanks for pm and please do update your other works too.

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Rohini

@ithihaas

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Wow Smiley,

that was awesome and very nicely written.. the twist that you had included that has resulted in Shivika trying to get a new identity for themselves is gripping... loved it to the core...

I hope some thing like this is used in the show for creating the drama but I doubt our CVs

Nevertheless, I loved reading your story !